OS ..... fulfil the promise.... epilogue final part updated pg5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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in my story all characters are same... lil bit change in storyline
ramnath does not hate sumo... and sumo and sharavan are just friends... they r not in love...
dont worry pyaar hojaye ga 😉




ok lets start the story ...


naanu is the hospital uncle... doc is examine him... sumo in call with ramnath...

ramnath... dont worry beta we r coming ...

ramnath... sharavan ... pushker ... reached hospital ... everone are worried... doc came and asked about ramnath
... than he goes inside... naanu tell ramnath tht he is not having too much time ... mujhe bakiyoon ki fikar nahin hai sub apnay app ko sambhal lain gay per sumo... mujhe us ki fikar her waqt rehti hai ... plz mere janay k baad us ka khiyal rakhna ... mujhe tum per bharosa haii ... plz promise me ... sumo ka khiyal rakhna ... ramnath in worried tone... said to tiwariji k sumo ab mere zimaaydari hai ... mein sumo ko khiyal rakhoon ga... or sumo ki shadi sharavan se karaoon ga...

bus yeh kehtay he naanu passed away...

everyone is crying. ... except Sumo... she is in SHOCK!!!!!- she is not believing tht his naanu is passed away ...

At Home...

nanu last ritual is going on .. sumo is still in shock ... n when pandit asked for agni ... than mamu came n tell the pandit tht babuji ki akhari wish thi k sumo unka antum sansar keray ...

sumo still in shock... subconsciously usnahy nanu ki wish puri ki ... and affter that she break down ... she cried whole heartedly ...


at tiwari killa ...

ramnath inform tiwari family about nanu last wish ... all become happy except sharavan n sumo... they r frnds only ... unhonay aisa soocha nahin kabie ... but sharavan nay apnay papa ki khater sumo se shadi kernay ka faisla kerliya ... dono ki shadi bohat simple hoe...

its been three week since they married...

both didnt talk too much ... and ramnath notice it...

at garden ram talked to sumo ... tht I guess she is not happy with this marrige ... sumo told him tht she is not ... woh sharavan ko bacnpan se, jaanti hai per is ka matlab yeh to nshin k uski life mein kisii ko b zaberdasti dal do chaye woh usko pasand kerta ho ya nahin... papa hum bus dost thay per ap k or nau ki wajah se mera dost b chen gaya mujh se... sharavan bhalay is rishtay ko apki wajah se nibha,rahaa,hai per mera ego ... toot gaya,hai ... mujhe sharavan ki ankhoonay mein apnay leye shikayat se feel hoti hai ... mujhe bilkul acha nahin lagta ...
insult sa feel hota hai ...

they both didnt realized tht sharavan heard everything...

sharavan bohat soochta hai is baeray mein ...



guys m too tired now I knw,its,lame story but if u like it plz do tell me than I will cont its 2nd part...



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Crazypiya thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wowww
Nice yaar
A totally new angle of there love story
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This sounds interesting
Plz continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing concept
Totally different from the show
Would love to see how they fall in love
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hey guys ...
thank you so much for liking my story...

I wrote the story from my cell is leye kpi galti ho to sorry

lets cont... part 2


sharavan appnay pappa and sumo ki baatein sun layta hai or chup chap apnay room mein ajata hai... sumo k lafz us k kanoon mein echo ker rahay hotay hain ... itnay mein sumo came to the room and ask for dinner ... woh kehdayta hai k woh kha ker aya hai ...

sumo wahan se chali jati hai ...

aglay din sharavan sumo se kehta hai k chalo aj breakfast saath bet ker kertay hain.. or sham ko ek saath chaye b petay haiin ... sharavan slowly slowly sumo ko comfort kernay ki koshish kernay lagta hai takay us ko apni dost phirse mil jaye...

at night sharavan woke up and didnt find sumo beside him... he goes out to check her... sumo sitting at garden and crying ... shrravan came and asked her whats wrong ... sharavan ko laga shayed uski koi baat sumo ko buri lagi ho... sumo stated nothing ... she us just missing her parents and naanu... sharavan said to room se bahhir anay ki kya zarorat thi ... sumo said don't want to disturb u ...

sharavan understand tht she is so depressed ... he quietly hold her hand and look at her... both having eye lock for 2 3 mins and sumo get teared eyes and than sharavan console her ... give her a tight hug... and assurance tht he is always there for her... sumo cried alot alot tht she even realised when she slept on sharavan shoulder... than sharavan carry her and went to their room...


ok guys wil update soon next part ... sorry for short one ...



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Feel so sad for Sumo.
Please continue soon.
Great Going!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow its.. amazing... thank god ramu seedha saadha h yahan pr... 🤣ramu ne dono ki shaadi karwai... waah waah.. . hawwhh her nanu died.. she must be broken... awww... ab dono ki shaadi ho gayi h toh pyaar bhi ho jaayega... shravan is damn caring... after soo much.. he is taking care of her sooo nicely... it was awesome... continue..i loved it... update soonish.. i m waiting.. and eid mubarak🤗
with loadss of love
anupriya❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 3

sharavan carry her to their room... n lay down her on the bed...
very lovingly he looked at her ... and think sumo nay kitna kuch saha hai ... and at tht point sharavan heart is melting for her ... and promise himself tht he will keep her happy always ...

next day when sumo woke up... she first saw sharavan beside her woh holdding her hand whole night ... she carefully removed her hand so tht he will not get disturbed...

and than went to freshup ... after sometime sharavan wake up and search for sumo... when he heard washroom door unlock ... and here comes her beautiful Angel ... he was mesmerized by her look sumo wore beautiful sari cuz today is pooja at malhotra house ... and sumo did all the arrangements.. sharavan asked about it... sumo answered tht today is pooja so he has to get ready ... and give him the cloth... when she us about to leave the room ... she turned to face sharavan and say thank you for last night... sumo also said sorry to him for bothering him too much...

but sharavan make her understand tht she is her best frnd and there is no need to be say sorry or thank you... and also said to her tht forget tht they are husband and wife ... I m still sharavan for u who is ur best frnd so plz. sumo no need of these kind of formalities... mein naahhin janta tum kun is tarha behave ker rahi hoo ... janta ho k tum is rishtay se khush nahin ho per is baat ko to na bhoolo na k mein tumhara dost phelay hoon ...

at tht point sumo realized tht her behaviour is not good for him... and she try to sort out the things ... and try to behave normal with him...




will update last part tonight ... hope u guys like it ... now sharavan sumo romanance confession all in one part u got to c... tab tak k leye is se kaam chalao hehehe
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chetti chetti update karo!!
Raha ni jaa raha!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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last part

after realising her behaviour towads sharavan... sumo in thoughts ... mujhe sharavan se aisay behave nahin kerna chaye ... kuch b ho is mein us ki kya galti woh b to koshish ker raha hai is relationship ko nibhanay k leye...

sharavan nay humesha mera bohat khiyal rakha mujhe humesha support keya ... mein jab b udhas hoe us nay humesha mujhe sahara diya ... badlay mein woh sirf apni dosti he to cha raha haii...

pooja ho rahi hai... sharavan and sumo doing the arti...sumo promise to herself tht she will try to be herself ... mein humari dosti ki khartir itna to ker he sakti hoon ...

after pooja ... sumo wind up things... and join malhotra family ... they talked little bit... and than sub apnay room mein chalay gaye ... sumo went to her room but it was empty sharavan is not there... she call him but he didnt received the call... after few mins sharavan call her ... sumo in her owb style ... sawalloon ki barish kerdi becharay mein ... kahan ho
... kun gayye kahan gaye kab gaye ... sharavan cut her and said bolnay ka mauka do go to kuch bolon ga na ... he said mein roof mein hoon thordi der mein ajaoon ga ... sumo is sumo she didnt wait and went there to talk to sharavan ...

sharavan ... tum yahan akelay kya ker rahaay ho...
sharavan : kuch nahin ...
sumo : sharavan meiin janti hoon k mera behaviour kuch dino se theek nahhin tha ... mein tum se naraz nahin thi bus mujhe yun achanak kisi k b life mein enter kerdayna acha nahin laga... hum dost thay infact hain b ...
sharavan : agar hum dost hain sumo to tum aisay vehave ker rahi ... apnay dil ki baat kun nahin bata rahi waisay to her baat mujhe se share kerti thi phr achanak kya hogaya ... mujhe to laga tha k humay zyada adjustment nahin kerni phardhay ki is rishtay ko nibhanay k leye ... per tum apnay depression se he nahin nikalna cha rahi thi ...

sumo: kun k yeh shadi majboori mein ki hai tumnay ... or mujhe ...

sharavan : majborri ... sumo haan yeh baat sahi hai k yeh shadi marzi k khilaf hoe hai per majborri mein nahin... sumo mein bachpan se he tumhay pasand kerta tha ... per...

sumo: matlab ??? tum mujh se

sharavan : haan sumo mere life mein humesha ek laadki rahi hai ... woh tum ho ... mein nahin janta tha k is feelibgs ko kya kehtay hain per haan jab b soochta tha k apni life agay kis k saath guzaroon to sirf tumhara naam ata tha ...

sumo: per...

sharavan hold her hand : and said ... sumo jab se humari shadi hoe hai jab se ab tak meiin her bar koshish ki k tumhay khush rakhhoon tumhara dhuk kum ker sakkoon... sumo mere life mein tumhari bohat special jaga haii ... or agar is special jaga ko tum pyar samjhti hoo... to haan ... I love you sumo... plz sumo mujhe mere sumo wapas kerdo jo mujhe tang kerti thi jo mujhe pereshan kerti thi ...

sumo could believe on her luck... us ko yakeen nahin ho raha tha k koi us se itna zyada b chanay wala ho sakta hai ... she having teared eyes...

woh sharavan ko deekhti rahi...

sharavan nay phr us k ansoon poochay or bola k mujhe tumhara pyar nahin sirf dosti chaye ... kya woh sirf day sakti hoo... sumo come close to him and hug her tight and cried hardly ...

guys epilogue is on the way ... at night ... so stay tune...






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