Originally posted by: mariajamal
aww soo sweet but I already end the story ... but dont be sadIf u want me to continue than let me know will try ok
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Originally posted by: mariajamal
aww soo sweet but I already end the story ... but dont be sadIf u want me to continue than let me know will try ok
Originally posted by: mariajamal
guys thanks for the love and liking my story and want to give the treat... and also I got 50 votes yipeee...
so here is the treat...continue part... u can say epilogue part 2 heheeheafter consummate the marriage ... next morning ... sunrise romantically in their room ... sharavan didn't sleep whole night he just stare her lady love... and adoring her...sumo ka face us k balon se chup jata hai cuz of cold breeze... sharavan usko hatata hai softly takay sumo ki neend na disturb ho...few mins later sumo opened her eyes and the first sight her eyes captured was sharavan who is still staring her... sumo feel shy ... sharavan said good morning to her and she replied it... sumo uthnaay ki koshish kerti hai per sharavan us ko rook layta hai ... or kehta hai... abhi na jao... sumo shyly said sharavan... janay do sub k leye breakfast bunana hai sub wait ker rahay hogaysharavaan : kernay do ... itnay dino k baad to mere sumo mujhe mili hai ... aj kahin nahin janay doon ga ... and he is about to kiss her per sumo stop him...sumo : sharavan plz **blushed**sharavan: good morning kiss de do phr janay doon ga promise ...sumo : put her palm on her face ...sharavan : com'on sumo just one In sumo style... sharmanay wali nahin ...sumo : smile at him... and said ok but ek shart hai closed your eyes...sharavan did ...sumo come close to her and close and close ... just mm distance to cover ... she smile and pushed him and went to washroom ...sharavan ko kuch samuj he nahin aye kya howa hai.. and look at door and said sumo yr ...sumo door se jhank ker kehti hai k if u want a kiss in sumo style than u have. to wait till night and wink at him...sharavan couldn't believe tht sumo done something like that...and dil mein kehta hai ***damn!!! I just love her ****
Sorry If I am too demanding but galti tumhaari hi hai!Ab itna achcha likhogi to demand to banta hai na??Plzzz plzzz plzzz can u give a 3rd and last epilogue!!!!!!!!!!!!Plzzzplzzzplzzz mariajamal
Originally posted by: mariajamal
hahaaha aww so sweet nimik... ok as per ur wish will update it soon ... full romantic only sharman and a new entry oklet me think ...
Originally posted by: mariajamal
ok shikha this one for u ...
all malhotra family haviing enjoyable breakfast... haasi mazak sub chal raha hai ... ramnath sumo se kehta hai k aj bardhay din baad itna zaberdast nashta khanay ko milla ... woh sumo ko betnay k leye kehta hai ...sumo sharavan k braber bet jati hai ... sharavan mauka deekh ker us ka haath pakar layta hai... sumo apnay eyes se reayest kerti hai k plz leave it ... but is in no mood to leave her hand... bechari ko majboran ultay haath se khana phardha ...after breakfast sharavan office k leye ja raha hota hai and sumo us k peechay usko c off kernay jati hai ... sharavan sumo k pass ata hai or kehta hai k mein raat ka wait keroon ga ... sumo blused... and apni ankhain jhuka layti hai ... sharavan apni car mein bet ker sumo ki taraf deekh ker smile kerta hai or chala jata hai ... sumo pora din yehi soch ker blush ker rahhi hoti haii k sharavan ko kya surprise doon .than she wrote a msg to sharavan ... tht ur surprise is awaiting... come soon ...sharavan yeh msg phardh ker khush hojata hai or jaldi jaldi apna kaam khatum ker k ghr pohanchta hai ...ghr per koi nahhin hota ... malhotra family are very smart aren't they heheehe...woh sumo ko awaz dayta hai per no response ... sharavan apna room mein jata hai n surprised with the decoration ... whole room is lit with candles and rose petals... full romantic environment... suddenly he heard sumo voice but didnt see her ... than his eye caught where the voice come from ... sumo nay apni awaz record ki hoti hai ...sumo : sharavan mein aj tum se jo kehna chati hoon wooh meine aj tak nahin kaha... sharavan tumnay humesha mera support keya ... mujhe sambhala ... yahan tak k mujh se shadi b tumnay ki takay mein akeli na rahoon ... kabie apnay dream k baeray mein apni wishes k baeray mein nahhin soocha ...sharavan her lardki ka arman hota hai k us ko life mein ek aisa partner millay jo us ki her chez ka khiyal rakhay ... or mein woh lucky lardki hoon ... jisi na sirf us ka best friend mila bulkay ek aisa life partner milla jis nay mere saray dhuk mere saray ghamoon ko appna buna liya or badlay apni sari khushi mujhe daydi... thank you sharavan for everything ...aj mein bus tum se ek or haq maang rahi hoon ... humari shadi jin halatoon uski kisi nay umeed nahin ki thi ... mein humari shadi ko memorable buna chati hoon ...kya tum mujh se shadi kero gay ??tum yehi sooch rahay ho na k yeh sari baatein mein record kun ki tumharay samnay b keh sakti thi ... is leye record ki takay mein tumharay samnay kamzor na phardh jaoon...agr tumhay mera proposal manzoor hai to mein roof mein tumhara intazar ker rahi hoon ...in no time sharavan went upstairs ... there sumo is Standing ... aj sumo sirf apnay sharavan k leye tyar hoe hai in a bridal way... red sari ... elegant jewelry...sharavan : sumo..he comes to her and stare at her ... like he is looking some Angel ...sumo apnay dono haath agay kerti hai ek haath mein mangalsoter hota hai n other hand sindoor... sharavan lovingly put mangalsoter on her neck and sindoor on her maang... and cup her fsce and kiss her on her forehead... and said... this is the best surprised which I ever got...both hug each other... sumo hugging mein he sharavan se kehti hai ... k I love u sharavan ... and I want to spend my entire life with u . mein humaray rishtay ko ek naya maukaam dayna chati hoon...sharavan without saying anything carry her and room mein chalay jatay jmhaiin and start new beginning of life...after 2 years ...sumo screaming ... in hospital... and after few hrs ... everyobe heard a baby cry... doc came outside and said its a boy...all malhotra n tiwari family gets happy ...sharavan asked about sumo... doc said all are good not to worry ...after some time everyone came to room and give their blessing to the little buddy...all left to give the privacy to the couple...sharavan : sumo tumnay mujhe mere life ka sub se best gift diya hai thank you so much ... I love u ... he kissed her on her forehead.sumo just pass the smile and khuhi k anshoon camd out from her eyes...sharavan hug her and give baby to her ... both look at him... lovingly...hope u guys like it the finally last part...