OS ..... fulfil the promise.... epilogue final part updated pg5 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it to the core!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nimik

Loved it to the core!!!!!!!!!!!!!


really I thought It was lame... just try it first time ... not a good writer
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Loved it😃
Back to back updates!😆
Update the epilogue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Really nice dear. Would love to read more from you. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Really beautiful
Post d other one soon

Do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
I have read it in one go it's lovely they become friends again and then confession nice
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Their confession is awesome
Oh waiting for epilogue
Beautiful concept like it !!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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epilogue ...
after the talk between sumo and sharavan ... sumo back to her fun loving style... dheere dheere woh sharavan k kareeb anay lagi hai...

on day all malhotra family went for some shadi to different city... sumo is alone and sharavan at office for some work ... he called her tht he'll come soon ... than will go for outing so be ready ...

sumo at her room is getting ready for evening n she will also ready to confess her feelings to sharavan... but God had some other plan...

she waited for him but no sign of him ... she called her so maby time but the ph is out of reach ... she become restless and call him at office but his PA said tht sir to kab k ghr k leye nikal gaye ... bahir bohat tez barish ho rahi hai n sumo is so restless tht she even didnt care about the rain and went outside usko dhondhnay k leye... sumo is going to start her car at tht moment a flash light come sammnay se... sumo ko kuch nazar nahin aa raha bus ek shadow se deekha ... when he came in front of the light than her vision is clear and she didnt believe it him... she just jump out from the csr and ran to him and hug her tight ... and start her complaining ... kahan reh gaye thay tum kab se ph ker rahi hoon... office mein b keya wahhan se pata chalaa tim nikal gaye ho... jantay ho kitna dar gaye thi mein ... dobara aisa keya na to tum se kabie baat nahin keroon gi... agr tumhay kuch hojata kaisay ji pati mein ... sharavan mein tumharay bina nahin ji sakti ... bohat pyaar kerti hoon tum se ... I love u so much... tht sudden confession of sumo .. sharavan could believe it ... he is at cloud 9... itnay dino se jo woh baat ssunna chata tha aj sumo nay us se keh he diya ... sharavan ebrace her more tighter ... tht both didnt even realised tht bahir rain ho rahi hai ... sumo hug break kerti hai ... now dono ek dosray ko deekh rahay hain... eyelock for 5 mins... sharavan than hold her face and kiss her on her lips... when he break the kiss ... sumo feel shy and ran inside the house ... she is in her I mean their room... breathe heavily... she is standing near window and remembering the moment between sharavan and her and feel shy...

sharavan come inside and lock the door... and stand just behind sumo and touch her shoulder... and make her face him... sumo is so blushing tht she is not able to face him...

than In very romantic tone ... sharavan : I love u too...

sumo is so blushing tht she hugged him tight and tht hug is the approval to take their relationship to next level... sharavan carry her to the bed ... and ...ahem ahem...

and with tht the consummate their marriage...


happy ending


so guys how was it ... hope u guys like it ...

than you so much for bearing me...

if I got the good response than will try to write the bew story with new concept...

byeee

love u


eid mubarak...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
read in one go
absolutely brilliant
totally loved it
superb
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sravya

👏 Please continue



aww soo sweet but I already end the story ... but dont be sad

If u want me to continue than let me know will try ok

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