cute lill devil shraman OS (last part updated)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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<font size="2">after watching yesterday's episode... i was jst so excited.. wondering about shraman... thn this thing cut off my mind nd i graved my phn nd started writing notes.. Nd the result is here.</font>

itz a sunday morning
basically itz a holiday day
so everyone is at home in Malhotra Mansion
everybody is waiting for brake fast
so they all sitting on the table nd doing there daily chitchat

sharavan comes from the upstairs nd join them
they all looked shravan shravan as if he is a alien
everyone is looking at shravan nd thn each others

shravan in a confused voice
kya huya? app sab mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe hai ?
after hearing shravans qusn everyone bursts in laugh...

are huya kya.. koyi batayega mujhe..
itna hasne wali konsi baat ho gayi.
puskar said while laughing
vaiya appne abhi tak mirror nahi dekha na?
nahi.kyu? shravan replied
to dekhna chahiye tha na by saying this he laughed more louder

sharavan is now getting angry
thn puskar said accha vaiya ruko .
he clicks a photo of shravan nd give him to take a look

he looks at the photo his eyes get wider.. he sees someone have draw mustache on his face
everyone laughs again seeing shravan reaction..

ye kisne kiya? he asks nd stands up
maine kiya..a sweet voice come back from shravan wid giggling ...

shravan was angry but seeing this cute innocent face his anger melt

a 4 yrs old girl wearing a pink frock.. nd a long ponytail continuously giggling looking at shravan. itz gunjaan..

he smiled nd take her in his arms
to ye sab app ka kiya dhara hai?
he robbed her nose by his hand
the small giggled nd said
ha papa
accha tabhi mai sochu ki subha muje aisa kyu laga ki koyi mere face ki samne hai.
she placed a kiss on his cheek nd sai said wid excitement
wo mai thi

he made her sit on table in front of his face nd he sits on table..
my monster!app bilkul apni maummy par gayi ho.. hamesa koyi koyi kand karte rehte ho
everyone smiled at shravans word

kya kaha tumne!
another voice come behind him
he clozed his eys as he knws he is trapped

gunjaan laughs nd says papa ab to app gaye!!

shravan stands up nd turned around...
it was sumo.. ya his sumo.. his wify..his better half..
she is standing wid a plate on her hand
she was preparing brake fast for evryone

he tuned around nd mumbled kuch nahi
sumo who was angry bursted in laugh afrer seeing his face
ye kisne kiya she asks while laughing
maine kiya maumma
that cute lill gunjaan ansrd
sumo came to her nd give a hi5
she looked at shravan
he rolled his eys
ruko mai thik kar deti hoon sumo said nd trying ro remove the marks wid tissue
shravan stares at her cutely
they have a eyelock

pusker coughed
ahmm ahmm! vaiya abb to bade ho jaiye.. he teased

puskupie mere papa itnaa bada hai aur kitna bada hoga? indicating at shravans height gunjaan asked
evryone laughed at her words

they all have brake fast together
suman is serving the meals
shravan is feeding gunjaan who is sitting beside him
how adorable they looks suman thinks and smiles

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww.. Gunjan is so cute! I really liked this OS. Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nimik


Awesome dear!!

Keep writing!!!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!!

Awesome like it👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Cute.

Do write more😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shree06

wow!!!!!!!!

Awesome like it👍🏼


My pleasure
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome os :-) Plz do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb os
Gungan is such a devil
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aye haye it was tooo cute...shravan as dad...i realliiee a wanted this type of an os...aap bilkul apni mummy pe gaye ho...koi na koi kaand krte rehte ho...🤣 awww...bechaara phas gaya...they all were tooo adorable...i liked it very muchh...it was too cute..lovely os...🤗
with loadss of love
anupriya❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sadia.Ritu

I am proud of you, Chhote 🤗


When you call me chote it remains me shravan & puskar vai 😆

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