cute lill devil shraman OS (last part updated) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shinegirl100

aye haye it was tooo cute...shravan as dad...i realliiee a wanted this type of an os...aap bilkul apni mummy pe gaye ho...koi na koi kaand krte rehte ho...🤣 awww...bechaara phas gaya...they all were tooo adorable...i liked it very muchh...it was too cute..lovely os...🤗

with loadss of love
anupriya❤️


Its such a pleasure to get wonderful cmnts 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Rikta97


When you call me chote it remains me shravan & puskar vai 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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cute lill devil
Last part

the day passed
in the evening shravan nd puskar are on a discussion over a case in shravans room
thn gunjan come there starring at thn
what happen baby? shravan asked
she makes a angry face but she looks more adorable

mujhe puskupie chahiye she said putting her hand on her waist
shavan nd puskar smiles
but baby we are busy na! shravan replied

she nodded in disagreement
nahi.. muje puskupie ke sathe khelna hai

puskar laught a lill nd said
chalo Darling pehle khelte hai and also said to shravan that he will join him later nd leaves wid gunjan

suman come wid coffee for shravan.. sits beside him nd suggest to hlp him
he nods

after a while puskar came back nd said sumo that gunjan is calling her
she leaves

at n8
shravan is searching for sumo.he finds her in gunjans room.. making her sleep
he is watching this beautiful moments from the door
sumo noticed him nd comes towards him
she hugged him nd he placed a kiss on her head
she reast her head on his chest nd he wrapped her
they both stare at gunjan who is sleeping


do you knw why did i named her gunjan?
shravan brks the silence
sumo smiles
taki ye hamesa mere kaan ke bak bak karti rahe tumhare tarhah he teased
she punched him
they shared their memory's



flashback * * *
shravan come back from the office
he entered in his room.his eyes scan the whole area to find her sumo
the room door gets locked.
sumo tiptoed to him nd hugged him from the back
he smiled
kya bat hai aj meri wify ko bada pyar aa rahi hai
he tuned to her face
She said that she had something to tell him but he had to promise that he would not got angry
he raise his eyebrows.. questioned at her
she gathered her brave to spoke
wo mai... wo actually... tum.. mera maltab ki hum..
he looked at her wid confusion
she take a deep breath nd finally spoke out
im pregnant nd closed her in fear
cz she wasnt aware about his reaction
but she gets relived when she feel the touch of his soft lips on her forehead
she opened her eyes tears rolled down from her cheeks
he whipped her tears nd told her in a soft voice
now i love more thn before
a wide smile on her face
he gently peacks her lips nd hugged her tightly
flashback ends
tum kitnadar gayi thi he teased
she smirks nd says tumbhi to dar gaye the na hospital mai


flashback
days are passing
things are changing
shravan is more concerned about her
he take care of her very nicely
when she got mood swing he jst do whatever can possible for him
* * * *
itz sumos delivery date
whole family is in the hospital
shravan is roaming here nd there
puskar consoled him

doctor came out from ot nd announced that the patient is in critical situation everyone pray for the betterment
shravan get shattered
he started crying
puskar consoled him


afted a long tym the doc came out of ot nd told that by the grace of Almighty they had successfully done the operation nd itz a baby grl
they had shifted thm
everyone is happy
shravan asked the doc if he can see them the doc let him do so


he entered in the room
sumo saw him nd smile
he sat on the stool beside her
the nurse gave the baby in his arms nd leaves
his eyes gets teary while looking at his princess
he looked at sumo nd kissed her
flashback ends.



you have give me the most beautiful gift ever...nd made me the luckiest man
he hugged he more tightly
i love you she said
i love too he replied wid so much love in his voice

So this is it
Hope you guys like it

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww how sweet
Awesome os
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Crazypiya

Awww how sweet
Awesome os


My pleasure dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful Ending!
Loved it❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Beautiful Ending!

Loved it❤️


Cz ending is an imp thing 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing i always wanted to read this kind of os on shraman
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: andy1245

amazing i always wanted to read this kind of os on shraman


Im glad that u like it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Last part is also really goo you have used fbs nicely do write more

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