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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: manisha771
Omg Zoya...I couldn't stop laughing reading this...this is so damn good and funny...👏

Thank you so much Manisha!

😳

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: kennashreign
This is LOVE. I loved this Zoya!! I really want this to happen to me. *goes to dream world*

The update was awesome.

Oh my!

Thanks hon😃

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Tulip.
Zoya 🤗 It was lovely. So damn funny. Sumo ko lga k woh raat ko mattress odh k soyi. Haha. Bechara Shravan humara. 6'4" ka chuha. Bechare ne to dimaag aur kaan dono ki aahuti dedi. Do write more yaar. I want to read more of it. And thanks for the pm.

Thank you so much🤗

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ---awe10some---
🤣 🤣 🤣
Oh God!! I just cn't stop laughing. That was so hillarious!

Zoya tu superb hai yaar. Kya likha tune. Ekdum mast. Great!
Meri hasi ruk hi nahi rahi

😆 😆

Fanx 4 pm dr n yeah do write mre!

Yey!

I'm happy your enjoyed!!

Thank you so much🤗

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Oreo*hugs*

You have got some amazing humor in you.

What a banging update!

I laughed throughout ,6'4 feet Cuha that too fast ko saath mein soya LMAO.

The kaan and brain tyaag part was hilarious.

I could so imagine all the scenes happening in front of me.

Had a hearty laugh once again all cause of you.

You are a brilliant writer.

Keep Writing :))

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: orion23

HAHAHA Mahi!
Thank you so much!
I'm glad you enjoyed it😆
I will I will, for sure...
Koi plot hai dimag mai toh bol😉
🤗

Chah karbhi I can't think as awesome as you😕

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho
Oreo*hugs*
You have got some amazing humor in you.
What a banging update!
I laughed throughout ,6'4 feet Cuha that too fast ko saath mein soya LMAO.
The kaan and brain tyaag part was hilarious.
I could so imagine all the scenes happening in front of me.
Had a hearty laugh once again all cause of you.
You are a brilliant writer.
Keep Writing :))

Pyacho🤗

Thank you so so much!

You liked it I'm happy now

Will do hon!

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Chah karbhi I can't think as awesome as you😕

Stop being so modest Mahi!

😆

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mineforever

@mineforever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

😆 This was one crazy joyride..
Too good Zoya..
Although m glad Sumo isn't this scattered in the show.. 😆

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indranigupta

@indranigupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Orion, Orion, Orion🤗

What did you do? I fell off my bed...am laughing so hard😆

Poor Shravan! turned into a chuha.. and that too because of her madcap imagination

And i can understand and relate to the plight of Mamaji... who will marry his neice apart from a Qutub Minar Chuha...

After all, somebody has to a be a good takkar for our Sumo😉

They were sleeping together on the same bed... Orion, this is the most imaginative part in your story . As you know, come what may these two are not going to land up on the same bed😉

Haan, of course for all purposes they can transform into a rat and a cat... Tom and Jerry...

Question is whom will you want to be Tom and who shall be Jerry😉

Absolutely rollicking stuff

Super👏

I am in love with your writing...uncluttered, humourous... and in keeping consistent with the storyline you have chosen... brilliant

Edited by indranigupta - 9 years ago