CAUGHT -A SHRAMAN TS - LAST PART - Page 3

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Nice..

Originally posted by: mineforever

😆 This was one crazy joyride..
Too good Zoya..
Although m glad Sumo isn't this scattered in the show.. 😆

Originally posted by: indranigupta

Orion, Orion, Orion🤗

What did you do? I fell of my bed...am laughing so hard😆

Poor Shravan! turned into a chuha.. and that too because of her madcap imagination

And i can understand and relate to the plight of Mamaji... who will marry his neice apart from a Qutub Minar Chuha...

After all, somebody has to a be a good takkar for our Sumo😉

They were sleeping together on the same bed... Orion, this is the most imaginative part in your story . As you know, come what may these two are not going to land up on the same bed😉

Haan, of course for all purposes they can transform into a rat and a cat... Tom and Jerry...

Question is whom will you want to be Tom and who shall be Jerry😉

Absolutely rollicking stuff

Super👏

I am in love with your writing...uncluttered, humourous... and in keeping consistent with the storyline you have chosen... brilliant

Originally posted by: orion23

Indrani🤗

Thank you so much!

Coming from you this is huge compliment

Sumo Jerry and shravan Tom.. sumo generally harrows him a lot😆

Zoya my dear 🤗 , u did it again loved first part and love part 2 even more , can't stop laughing it was light, funny and such effortless and easy flow of writing . Wish we see such banter on the show of our Sharman . U need to write more girl u have spoiled me now 😆 . Just luvd it simply amazing

awesome dear👍🏼

Originally posted by: indranigupta

I agree... Orion. Sumo is the jerry in this relationship... Poor Tom often does not have a clue what is going on😆

And Oreo... once again an absolutely smashing stuff👏

Originally posted by: Eeshaal

Zoya my dear 🤗 , u did it again loved first part and love part 2 even more , can't stop laughing it was light, funny and such effortless and easy flow of writing . Wish we see such banter on the show of our Sharman . U need to write more girl u have spoiled me now 😆 . Just luvd it simply amazing

Originally posted by: angel_writer

awesome dear👍🏼

while whole reading i was smiling and sometime in the middle i was also laughing🤣

plz write such crazy stuffs more...

and thnx fr pm dear😊

You are too good, Zoya!🤗

Thank you for giving us a humorous and entertaining piece yet again.

Laughter truly is the best medicine😆😆

Keep them coming!!