ShraMan TS |Everything I Need| Part 3-Page 14(11/07) - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Good storyline
N the final reveal was great
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ann 🤗
This will be a long one so be prepared for it 😉
Thank god it was a case of hemiplegia not amnesia. I wud never want sumo to forget shravu.
How much our hero cares for her
The relevation - For the first time we saw fear in kamini's eyes...maybe she is isnt as bad as ramnath. The truth shook her.
My poor boy how much faith he bestowed in his father, all went down the drain.
He was shattered was an understatement. Still he asked his father if it was all lie... 😭
Ann can i dance a little plzzz?? *puppy face*
Zor ka jhatka ka haye zoro se laga , haan laga 🤪
Kya chamat lgayi ramu ko 👏
Well deserved slap...i wish it happens ..koi bhi mare bs kantaap pdna chahiye ramu ko
Then that hospital scene...
He ran straight to his life , his love sumo
Her heart broke to see him in such a devastated state 💔
His breakdown was 😭 😭
With all the strength her body had now she tried to reach him...salute to her efforts.
He saved her before she could fall...she said he wud never let her fall...so much faith ❤️
And finally the confession- could it be more perfect...absolutely not 👏 👏
Its the end of the story 😭 😭
Ann plzzz write an epilogue for it...plzzz sweetheart
From my long comment i guess u got an idea how much i loved this update 👏
Thanks a lot darling for such a lovely chappy and pm
Forgive me for my rambling 😛
Love you!!
Edited by sapphire3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh God!! What I'm reading!!...
The best update ever, I have read..
Surprise!! Surprise!! & Full of Surprise!! this one..
Awesome one.. 👏

First Part, At Sumo's Paralysis news was really very emotional.
Then... What?? Ravannath's true face is before Shravan..
Though, Shravan was in broken heart but it's best tht Finally Ramrat is exposed😆 Yeahhh!!!
& Shravan slapped him!! Wah!! Wah !! 🤗
I'm in dancing mood.. 🥳( kab ayega ea din show me.. I'm really waiting for tht day actually to be happened in the show 😃)


Thn, Oh No!! Surprised is not ended.. One more was waiting.. & Tht is CONFESSION.. 😃
It's too cute confession.. Emotion is overloaded.. 😳
& Yaa... End with a KISS.. 😳

Really.. Such a lovey dovey update.. beyond all my expectation.. 😳
Thanks Dear For PM 😊
& yaa.. Now, waiting for another story from you.. Keep writing 😃
Edited by Poulami11 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
the whole part was just perfect👏
even when shravan was broken still he was conscious about suman ❤️
confession was cute and lovely
and thnx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing ending
absolutely loved it
superb
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb dear!! Loved it

Fanx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome ending dear..
sumo wanna reach him looking at his state and he holds her when she is about to fall..

their confession, they supporting each other..its so beautiful..❤️

superb update dear..👍🏼

thnx for pm dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Darshanpreet

Res!

Oh lord for meee😭
Loveee you sooo much
N now i jump back to read😃😳😳
UNRES!
You don't know how happpy i m after reading this!
It wasss brilliant👏
A perfect ending for a perfectly penned story😳
Wishhh we had a similar scene in the showw
But
Wayyy too goo girll😊thanks for matching upto or shall i say beyond expectations👏
*tightwalahug*😆



Love u too 😃
I am so glad that you are happy about the story
Motivates me a lot 😳
Awww thanks a lot
Means a lot ⭐️
Hugs and kisses 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .shivi396

Res
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Unres
This is Awesome👏
Wonderful Piece of Writing
He was There For Her😃
He wants To Apologies,wants her to know that he can't hate her.
Ohh RaMini convo. Make him Realise That He was living a Lie
And He came to her;His Solace
And She Tried to reach him,That Part was brilliantly written👏
And He would never let her Fall😃
Last Part was Bang On...
Totally Dhaansu Update🤗
Reach here bfor Ur PM reach me😉
Thanx For PM..
Waiting For U to Update ur another TS😛



Aww thanks a lot 😃
I am so glad you liked it
Awww that's so sweet 😳
Means a lot sweetheart ⭐️
Will try to update other ones ASAP 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Amazing update
Poor Suman had to go through so much pain yet Shravan is there with her
Finally the whole truth is out
That Ramnath deserves the slap and much more
The confession was so unique just like their love
Do write epilogue



Hiii thanks a lot 😳
Yeah I really want their confession not to be cliche
Will surely write an epilogue 😳

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