Magnets. A new FF! Last Update on pg10! 17/7/16 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Awesome update flib loved it

Originally posted by: --fero--

Fabulous

Originally posted by: Grenade

OMG
How did I miss this one?
I must have been living under a big fat rock!🤢
I'm at a loss of words to express how much I loved it.
I loved every part of it. I wish this had been shown on the show. Never mind.
I loved how Sumo confronted him. I loved how Shravan got a glimpse of his Father's ugly soul. I loved how strong Pushkar was for Sumo. AFJIHGDG I loved everything!
The way you described Shravan's guilt and helplessness is commendable. My heart goes out to him.
Pushkar and Suman's friendship is something I've always wanted to see.
You depicted their bond so beautifully.
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Pushkar: aaj aapne phir wahi kiya jo dus saal pehle kiya tha. Ek innocent aur ambitious aurat ki zindagi barbaad kardi. Phir se.

WoW!
Man I wished THIS was the Pushkar we got to see. Never afraid of speaking up for the truth.
The way he yelled 'Bhaiya toot jayenge' and Shrawan's breakdown brought legit tears to my eyes. Such impactful writing. I'm in awe. And it doesn't happen very often.

She gasped in fright and shut up.
IDK why, imaginig this scene cracked me up. I loved the way Shravan shunned her. She had it coming, yo. 😆

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He had been the one who was hurt and in abed but it was she who had almost died on the inside just because he almost did.
This line was simply beautiful.
This chapter was so well-written that I was holding my breath till the end. The way you penned Suman's devastation at having lost Shravan was heart-breaking. Your writing really makes the reader feel for the characters. Its a gift you have because not everyone can pull it off.
LOL Sumo slapped him? Didn't see that coming! But Sumo will be Sumo. 😳
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He ignored Ramnath and Kamini.
Booyeah! Take that, b*tches!

ShraMan's comfort with each other was so good to read. The way he rested his head against her chest and she comforted him made me go aww! Loved it!

Ramnath apologised? WHAAAT?
*reads again*
He apologised!
Wow. That needed to happen. You wrote the scene impeccably! 👍🏼

To say I loved their confession would be an understatement. It was absolutely freaking fantastic.
This story is a masterpiece. I loved every minute of reading it. The plot, the characterizations and the writing were perfect to the T. I'll come back and read this whenever I feel ShraMan-depraved.
Thank you writing this. 😊

Payal ❤️

P.S. What's your name? Though I don't mind calling you Flibbertigibet. I can't help but love any HP reference! 😳

Oh and can I make a suggestion, if you don't mind? If you added an index to the chapters, it would make navigating between them easier. 😊

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Sorry for not unressing earlier.

Was caught up with work.

Coming to the update, it was mindblowing.

I loved every bit of it.

Shravan calmed down only when Sumo was at his side and she too rushed out of Tiwari Killa the moment she heard he could not sleep.

Beautifully penned.