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Posted: 9 years ago
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cute update
absolutely loved it
loving this story
continue soon
please
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb you are unfolding it beautifully
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Chapter 4.
January 14, 2016.
Suman:
A week had passed after I joined the hospital. Everything had been smooth.
So had been this one guy, who I was afraid, I was getting too close with, too soon.
Shravan Malhotra.
The great, great paediatric.
The handsome, gorgeous man.
I smacked myself mentally and focussed on the case I was reading of a poor little 8 year old boy.
But, Does he know his smile is killer?
"SHRAVAN." I groaned.
Never had it happened that I day dreamt of a guy. Never. But this rare beauty would not let me be in peace.
Attraction was one really, really crazy thing. And I was feeling it abundantly.
"Oh, why are you taking my name with such frustration?"
Shit.
I turned around and the man of my lovely dreams was standing right here.
I really have to get my shit straight.
"Uh. Um." I stammered.
Think fast, suman. Think fast, I mentally murmured to mself but to no avail.
- - -

Shravan:
She looked frustrated.
And let me define what sort of frustration she was feeling.
It was all over her face.
Best described as.. As if I have sexually denied her or something and that thought made me smirk as well as go all 'duuude shut up' to my ownself.
"Tell me?"
I took a chair next to her and demanded an answer again and she still looked baffled and..caught.
Caught red handed.
Why do I really think she is sexually frustrated?
Alright, I'll admit here, I do have a lot of experience with women but when it comes to this girl, I seem to be as blank as a fresh sheet of paper.
And that kind of amuses my ownself.
What does she do to me to make me so clueless out of nowhere?
I kept my hand over hers and I couldn't have mistaken how she reacted.
It was very quick but I saw her swallow a lump in her throat, as if my holding her hand caused her to gulp her own words.
I also couldn't have mistaken the goosebumps, so visible on her arms.
And, that remarkable nervous lip bite.
Oh bloody well.
I am so right this time.
- - -

Suman:
He is smirkimg.
That ..that.. Ugh.
I don't even have words to define him at this minute.
Somehow, somehow I just know that he's figured out the answer to his own question.
I lick my lips and train my eyes on the rim of my coffee mug.
"Suman"
His voice was so husky and something tickled in my ear. Which was because he was leaning over my ear.
Oh, god.
"Is it what I think it is?" I could feel his lips move against my skin and I could not, in no way, help myself from closing my eyes and taking in his words. His hand still overlapped mine and slowly his fingers were clasping in the gaps between my fingers.
"We..ah, are in cafeteria, Shravan." I forced myself to be rationale because losing myself in this moment was very alluring but I better not.
- - -

Shravan:
I was now very, very sure about what she was so frustrated about.
What she doesn't know was how frustrated I felt as well. How many times have I gone through the same torture as she was probably going about right now.
"Meet me in my cabin before you leave for home." I whispered to her, softly and left the canteen.
I was sure, she was dazed. As much, or maybe more than, as I was.
- - -

Suman:
He knows.
He so knows everything.
I am doomed.
Good going, Suman!
- - -

How was it guys? *winks*
I really await your comments about how the chapter was.
I read all the comments and they make me really happy. They are really valuable.
Take care, you all.
Big hug!'
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey! That wasn't a really big update, but its okay. Anyway i loved it as well. The way sumo got caught 😆 and Its basically like:-JOHAAL DIL KA IDHAR HO RHA HAI, VO HI HAAL DIL KA UDHAR HO RHA HAI. xD
continue soon :*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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So both had that feeling of kuch-2 hota-2 hai 😆
Fantastic chapter 👏
Loved it to core ❤️
Update soon
If possible plzzz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OOH.. Someone might get naughty soon😆. I enjoyed their frustration. Continue soon.
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Going great!!! A bit longer update please!!
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Chapter 5.

Suman:
I was wrapping up my work very, very slowly just to buy myself some time before I headed off to Shravan's cabin.
The encounter earlier in the canteen was burning in the back of my mind with a fresh and unending zeal.
Have I read a little too much in the situation? Maybe he just needs my help.
Then again, why would a paediatric need a help from a psychologist?
But what if he needs help from me out of the work context?
Ugh.
I took a deep breathe and walked off to his cabin, that was right at the end of the hallway.
Its okay, Suman, it'd not be so bad, whatever it is, I gave a little boost to myself.
- - -

Shravan:
I think I did a mistake. I shouldn't have asked her to come meet me before she leaves for home. A little panic sets in me because she'd be coming in any moment now. What am I going to say to her when I have no idea myself?
Then, why did I call her in the first place at all?
There was meek knock on the door of my cabin and I merely facepalmed.
Should I just tell her that I forgot what I wanted to say to her?
But that'd be so very awkward.
"Shravan, you aren't going to make a fool of yourself, now. Okay?" I muttered to myself and said a clear "Come in."
- - -

Suman:
Hearing to his voice only gave me goosebumps. There was something really wrong with me. Hormonal imbalance?
I walked in a little unsure about whatever that was going to happen.
"Hi." He gave me a little smile, which calmed me down a notch or so.
"Sit na." He gestured to the couch in the side of his cabin.
I bit my lip and nodded.
Was it my own imagination or he really stared at my lips? I stopped biting my lip, that very second.
He walked across his mahagony table to where I stood, and pulled me close by my waist.
What. The. Hell.
- - -

Shravan:
She really shouldn't have done that. That godamn lip bite.
"Suman."
"Shravan." Her voice was raspy. And inviting.
So inviting.
I bet I did not just make up stories in my head.
She really just needs me as much as I need her.
"Close your eyes." I whispered to her.
And without a question, she agrees. That made me smile.
She trusts me. Well, that was alot that I could ask for.
I kissed her forehead.
Both my arms still wrapped securely around her waist.
I could feel her chest heave up and down, rythmically against my own. God, she doesn't know what she does to me honestly.
"What if I kiss you?" I asked her.
- - -

Suman:
His soft husky voice jolted me in reality. What if he kisses me?
What
If
He
Kisses
Me?
The answer was simple.
"I will let you, then." I murmured. Clutching his shirt in my fists.
"Kiss me, please?" I couldn't help but add.
However much I knew him by now, I was sure he would be smiling that faint, heart-stopping smile of his, right now.
The next moment, all my thoughts dissipitated in thin air because his lips were on mine and that was the end of my world.
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Hi, guys!
I am so sorry. This update came in so late but things got messy in my life, and I just could not gather any thoughts and scribble down another chapter.
But here it is now.
I hope y'all like it?
Please please do drop in your review! Those are much appreciated.
Love,
Palak.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Hey palak!!!!
I hope everything is sorted in your life now...
Take your time...u can update when u feel like 😊
Omg!!!!! They kissed 😳
I was expecting sumo wud refuse him, but she didnt 😃
Fabulous update dear 👏
Thanks for the pm 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Finally you gave us an update. But why itta chotu sa?? Thoda bada milna chaiye tha na😭 but then something is better than nothing. I loved the way both were getting nervous and cute kiss of shraman yaaayyy!
Keep writing❤️
Keep rocking😃

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