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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1


Everything has changed after Shravan and Nirmala's meeting.


Suman decides to not give any intention to Shravan. She thinks that he doesn't deserve her friendship.


Shravan wants her apologize.


Ramnath is totally in is sasur mood. He wants to separate his son and Suman at any cost.


Nirmala never wished that Suman has problem because of her.


Nanu support his granddaughter, he knows she is right.


Pushkar wishes to unite his bhaiyya and bhabhi.




Sumo prepares order in her house when her phone rings it's in Nirmala's phone.


Sumo : Hi aunty


Man : Hello Madam the owner of this phone has an accident, we will take her to city hospital come fast.


Sumo panicked: Ok sir.


Sumo off the gas and sends a message to Pushkar.


She leaves with her car.


She runs to the reception. The receptionist tells her to go to ICU.


She goes and sees a nurse coming out.


Sumo : How is she? What happened?


Nurse : She has a critical accident. Doctor does the first aid after he will talk to you. We need O+ blood immediately.


Sumo sits shocked. She feels someone hand on her shoulder it's Pushkar. She cries and hugs him. He is not alone Shravan and Ramnath comes with him. Shravan feels disturbed to see Suman in Pushkar's arm.


Sumo : Pushkar we have to arrange for blood.


Pushkar : Sure what is the group?


Sumo : O+


Pushkar : It's badi papa blood group too.


Sumo : I think it's not good idea ask outside.


Doctor comes outside.


Sumo : How she is?

Doctor: She has her leg broke but the most critical it's her head. She is unconscious I think she will have some mental sequel. We have to transplant blood immediately.


Ramnath : I will give to her.


Everyone is shocked most Shravan.


Sumo : No sir she doesn't need you. You are not her husband now.


Ramnath : It's not matter. The matter is to save her life right now.


He follows the nurse.


Shravan thinks why dad wants to save this woman.


Ramnath comes back.


Shravan : We go home dad.


Ramnath nods no.


Doctor permits them to see the patient. Nirmala is still unconscious. Doctor tells them if she doesn't open her eyes in 2 hours they will remove the oxygen mask. Sumo cries seeing her state.


All the men enter. Sumo comes to Ramnath.


Sumo : Mr Ramnath we lost all the relations. Nirmala aunty I mean your wife is between life and death so now you can tell the truth. Don't worry no one will take your son. It will be the last time I will meet both of you. Ten years back your wife worked for Mr Ayuja to earn for her family. But you don't like it. Both of you have many ego issues. Shravan grew up in this atmosphere. But one day everything changed you started your lawyer career and asked your wife to stop her work. If she didn't do like that it's proved that she had an extra-marital relation. Am I right? But she didn't listen you, she comes back to take Shravan but you threatened her. So she left your house forever.


Shravan has tears and is shocked.


Sumo continues : No one knows that my family and Nirmala aunty have until now a relationship. She was so desperate to know her son. She taught me about Shravan's favorite daal. She bought a book for him. You know what I insist her to meet Shravan otherwise nothing will happen that day. It was a very big mistake of mine. I wish I can up the past. I destroyed everything.


Ramnath : Woh Suman...


Sumo : No sir it's over now you take me everything my business, my friendship and my aunty. You are the winner. I am 100% sure that Shravan will be the perfect son. Shravan is a man who loves hugely his dad so he can't differentiate the good and the bad thing. I wish all the happiness. No one will come between both of you. with all the respect sir you can leave with your son.


Shravan comes to his mom. He's vulnerable right now. He tries to touch Nirmala's hand but can't because of Suman.


Sumo : No Shravan let her. You don't deserve her. You will never understand her love. I don't know why god is so bad to give you a mother while I don't have parents at all. You never try to find your mother. You prefer to be with your father because you were afraid to learn the truth that maybe your mother is much better that your father. You know what you are more egocentric that your father. I don't understand why your dad try to find a suitable wife for you while we both hate woman.


Shravan : Sumo don't be so harsh. I never thought that my father will be so insecure. I did mistakes I assume it, but I have right to be her son.


Sumo : No you can't, it's better you stay with your father. Otherwise he will torture your mother and me more. Now leave from here both of you.


They see that her breath raises too up. They call the doctor. Ramnath holds Nirmala's hand.


Ramnath : Please doctor save her at any cost. I need her. I have to correct my errors. I never wished to see her in these conditions.


Doctor : Call her, speak with her. She has to respond.


Ramanth : Nirmala, Nirmala see I will give your son to you. Nirmala sees he is here. Nirmala you have to come back for me. Don't give this harsh punishment. Shravan speaks to her.


Shravan hesitantly : Maa.. maa.. maa I am sorry to insult you. Maa please open your eyes. Maa.. Maa


Her pulse become stable.


Doctor : Continue, it's better.


Shravan : I will be with you. Maa.. Maa see me please.


Nirmala has tears, she is opening her eyes slowly.


Shravan : Maa please forgive me. I promise I will never leave you.


Nirmala : Suman.


Suman comes to her : Ji aunty.


Nirmala : Thank you beta you give me back my family. I am thankful to you. I am sorry because of me you suffer a lot with your tiffin center.


Suman wipes her tears : It's ok aunty I am very happy for you. But now I decide something that after now I never wish to see your family again. All it's over.


She kisses her forehead and leave from here. Shravan wished to stop he but stay back.


Nirmala : Shravan you have to fix your mistakes. She suffers a lot. Because of our problem she lost her center.


Shravan : Don't worry maa I will do whatever you want.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was wonderful the way you have disclosed was lovely continue soon..loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow loved it.. cvs ko koi dekha do ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lol u can't just leave the story thr where it's getting so interesting lol no no was for that , continue girl doing great . Didn't mean for the scare 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very well written.. I hope cv bhi same soche..
Cant see sumo in pain.. I really hope tgt sumo will give a muh tod jawab to his bewakuf qutub minar.. I want shravan to really work hard to get sumo back in her life
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing dear... the concept of nirmala's accisent and then suman saying the truth because of frustration and then shravan realizing the truth... is amazing.. loved it... continue soon... want to read more of it... and yeah pm me your future updates
with lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you for this amazing respond by you guys.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2


One week later,


Suman is getting ready with a beautiful maroon saree. She is wearing gold earring and neckless. Preeti helps her.


Mamiji : Suman the groom's family is here. The rokka will start in 20 minutes.


Suman : Ok mamiji.


Mamiji and Preeti leave her room.


Suman suddenly remembers Shravan. She feels sad but she has to marry for her family.




Shravan in his room. He feels very bad. He remembers how he treats Suman. He regrets a lot. He hears some noise. It's his parents.


They approach him. Nirmala holds his hand.


Nirmala : What happened beta? Why you are in dark?


Shravan stays mute.


Ramnath : Go Shravan at least declares you love now.


Nirmala : What? I don't understand.


Ramnath goes to Shravan's cupboard and take out his love letter.


He gives to his wife.


Nirmala can't believe her eyes.


Nirmala : Shravan it's her rokka today. Tell her today, it's your last chance beta.


Shravan is shocked : Rokka?


Nirmala : Yes the groom is Sumo's mamiji relation.


Ramnath : Come we will go as family to ask her hand.


Nirmala is astounded to see Ramnath like this.


Ramnath takes out a red kurta for Shravan.


All leave for Suman house.




Suman comes downstairs with Preeti.


Groom mom : She is very beautiful.


Groom is shying.


Nanu : Suman it's first time you meet the groom. Are you agree for this rokka?


Suman : Yes nanu.


They hear a car noise. Everyone is shocked to see Shravan and his family here.


Nanu : Mr Malhotra what are you doing here?


Groom dad : Ramnath sir app ya haa.


Ramnath : We come here to ask Suman's hand.


Groom dad understand : Ok we will leave so right now.


Nanu : Kya batameez hai?


Ramnath : Woh Tiwari ji...


Nanu : I don't want to speak with you. Nirmala please take your family from here. They forget about me when they break Suman. She did everything for her friend. But what's the result today she has lost everything. Now at least let her marry peacefully.


Shravan comes nearly Suman. He bends in front of her.


Shravan : Miss Suman Tiwari will you marry me? I will respect, protect and love you forever. I promise to never break your trust.


Suman interrupts him : How dare you? You don't need love or marriage. You just need you father and your world. What nerve you are to ask me to marry you?


Nirmala : Suman please I agree he did mistakes but I am sure that he loves you truly.


Suman : How is possible aunty? He said he hates women.


Shravan : Please Suman forgive me.


Suman : Never.


Shravan : Ok Suman I bet in ten days I will prove you my love. And the eleventh day it will be our wedding day. If I lost I will never see your face again.


Shravan to nanu : Sorry Nanaji I will also win you love back.


Shravan leave from here with hope.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Actually after today's episode I really think Sumo will never forgive Shravan
I was just imagining this type of scene and here you go
Brilliant 👏👏
really like it 😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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totally awesome start
loving this story
continue soon

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