ShraMan SS: Meant to Be [AU][Complete]

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silverleaves

@silverleaves

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Loving this so much! Very well written! Their relationship is so enviable!
Please continue this for a while, don't make it too short:)
Looking forward to the next update!

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Crazy4edkv

@Crazy4edkv

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Wow! I just don't know exactly where to start Fantastic !!

The many different perspectives and insights in the writing you are amazing with words

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yumna

@billo77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Astonm I absolutely loved reading both chapters! 👏They are so nicely written and the story looks so good! Its so fun to read about Shraman at school together in london its so cute how there so comfortable with each other and little possessive😳Cant wait to read the next parts!

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

OMG

Like really girl you killed it again

One of my fav chapter BTW I didnt get it when he said

have some on my side of the family, you have some on your side of the family- it doesn't really mean he said our kids why her eyes widnes?

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astonm

@astonm

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: jazmeen
OMG
Like really girl you killed it again
One of my fav chapter BTW I didnt get it when he said
have some on my side of the family, you have some on your side of the family- it doesn't really mean he said our kids why her eyes widnes?

Thanks! And yeah, he meant their kids, I mean he was literally like, "we both got twins in our families, so if we make babies chances are we might get some too". I am sorry if it wasn't clear, hahaha.

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Preeti

@Preeti.xo

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Love this! They're already falling in love but they don't know it! You've described England so well and tesco is my fave place to shop for snacks too!

Daboo sounds like such an adorable baby!

They're definitely made for each other. Can't wait for you to update the next part! X

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

I have been remiss...sorry for not commenting earlier!

Man, I am so blown away by your fabulous writing. You managed to retain the essence of the characters, while presenting them in an alternate universe.

Take a bow!

Looking forward to Chapter 3.

Thanks for the PM!