- Pyaar Ka Izhaar - : A Shraman OS

Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: mineforever
Great OS Mahi..
Shravan bechaara 😆
Really liked Sumo's ringtone..
Sumo again had to take the initiative..

Hey Ayesha! Thank you dear😳

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sapphire3
Mahi 🤗
Gajabness( yeah its a word just for u 😉 )
Its superb , fantastic , mindblowing, awesome 👏
I loved it to core ❤️
I was grinning like a fool while reading it 😃
A nervous shravan was too cute 😳
Its the cutest proposal till date 😳
Thank u , u made my day 😊

Priyam🤗

Awww

Gajabness😆😳

Thank you a lot❤️

Glad you loved it😛

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Mahi it so cute..

nervous shra and angry sumo ..😆

love it..❤️

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Sidhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Soo cuteee
I loved it.
Mahi u NAILED it
The proposal reminded me of akshay and anushka in patiala house!!

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ---awe10some---
Soo cuteee
I loved it.
Mahi u NAILED it
The proposal reminded me of akshay and anushka in patiala house!!

Sidhi!

Caught that right my dear, it was inspired by them!

Awww

Thanks a lot😳

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Sidhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Sidhi!
Caught that right my dear, it was inspired by them!
Awww
Thanks a lot😳

U write so beautifully
Wanna read ur take on the fall, revelation of truth n shravan reunited with his parents alng with suman given title of bahu scenes. Plss do write another os asap

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

^Thank you Sidhi! So, a family drama?😳

Well, as you might have seen, I messed with their confession and Nirmala understanding. So I'm sort of afraid to take that topic. But I can surely write something , my style😛

Let's have it then! Thanks for suggesting. Lemme see what I can do here😉

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Mahi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

And Sidhi, one request please! Don't call that a suicide... I just cannot take someone as strong as Sumo 'suiciding'😕🤢

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Sidhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Artist_Forever
^Thank you Sidhi! So, a family drama?😳
Well, as you might have seen, I messed with their confession and Nirmala understanding. So I'm sort of afraid to take that topic. But I can surely write something , my style😛

Let's have it then! Thanks for suggesting. Lemme see what I can do here😉

Gurl u got me laughing like crazy. My mum is looking at me rite nw as if i've grown horns. U call those fab works of urs a mess!! Well i call them excellence n am sure others will agree. They were awesum. N i just love your style. Hatke as u said. It has everything that a piece of writing nids to be a success!!

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Antora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

omg its amazing laughed my heart out aftr reading this

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