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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank U,
Noexcuse and Prasanna.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: beagleboy



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Human psyche, deeply dented;

prone to sharp turns, swerves;

Disfigured, with ugly warts

and yet beautiful.

We are no different, you and I

moulded from the same clay,

yet distinctly marked

by experience and time.

Each of us carries,

emotions

in well packed pouches,

tightly strung.

The pair of us hide;

in our hearts,

precious pebbles, shiny and smooth,

that weigh us down.

You and I,

Both aged

under a cloud of doubt

cold and solitary.

We seek, the two of us,

A canopy of shade,

Abundant sunlight,

A vast expanse.


👏 Amazing!


Ek duje ke vaaste!


We are no different, you and I

moulded from the same clay,

yet distinctly marked

by experience and time.



(Even if we are not on the same page now,

Time will show us how we are made...

Just for each other. )


Beautiful work by you! 👏



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a beautiful post thank you for that , I don't get post after post Suman needs to apologize how immature her behavior is . So thankyou again for a clarity
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's beautiful...and pushkar he is adorable love him
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Loved the poem.. Beautiful thoughts !!
Thanks for sharing.. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is so deep!!
Loved it👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Soup and beagleboy 👏
Lovely compositions


@soup: I really like when you put forth your thoughts from Sumo's POV
Simply because very few do that and it's refreshing to read in addition to being insightful

I like Shravan..he is such a deep character and they are slowly developing him
But somehow, with all her flaws and insecurities its Sumo that gets to me most of the times
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SoreThumb

Soup and beagleboy 👏

Lovely compositions


@soup: I really like when you put forth your thoughts from Sumo's POV
Simply because very few do that and it's refreshing to read in addition to being insightful

I like Shravan..he is such a deep character and they are slowly developing him
But somehow, with all her flaws and insecurities its Sumo that gets to me most of the times


Wow! That is quite a compliment. 😳 Thank U.

Even I like Sumo a lot and find her more of an enigma than Shravan...Very realistically written, and glad I can connect to her too.


Thanx, Orion and Ruby.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup



Thank U.😳

Finding fault with Sumo? What exactly does Shravan want from Suman now?

He said he had moved on.
He wanted to run away from his feelings.
He was suffocated...
And now he has space...😉😆

I find it funny that there are people saying Shravan is being bashed too..Both are endearing.❤️


yes.Both r right in their own way.Cant find faults with any of them..
I guess to each his own..

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