A fresh page called Space.

A fresh page, let it be...

Where you would get your space,

Even though every moment ,

I want to crowd my world with you...

All you can hear is the buzz,

Of your own grievances on your lips.

Credible charges, I agree

But I cannot turn back the time.

All I have to offer,

Is my heartfelt apologies...

For crimes committed,

Unwittingly and not.

Your trust, I do not have...

You want to push me aside.

I fail in giving you that assurance,

So, space- I give you.

Dear friend,

Whenever you need me...

All you have to do is...

Just remember me.

Because I cannot convince you..

Or force you...

But wait for you to come around,

I can.

Hoping some day you notice me...

- Sumo.

PS: This was a beautiful episode. I loved Shravan's breakdown...understand him for who he is...but Suman's pain and maturity grabs me.

Waiting for the day Shravan gets on the same page.

Pushkar did something I adored...It was not about him confronting them both, but the way he admired Sumo's little kitchen. He walked in, and was just bowled over. 👏 This was nothing in comparison to what his family owned...But he could appreciate how she had built up this small venture with her hard work... (PreviousIy, I have applauded Nirmala too in this regard)😳

...One day I want Shravan to be on that page too.😉 He is getting there...slowly and steadily!

Originally posted by: JJKKL

While you saw her maturity I saw her insecurity. Wanting assurance again and again from Shravan.

It was Shravan who got ditched by Sumo.
It was Shravan whose love and friendship, angst and hope is depicted more.
Then why is Sumo the one who constantly wants reassurance from Shravan ?

Earlier also she had asked Pushkar - Shravan ne kuch bola tha tumse ? In the precap also she asked the same.
Inspite of Shravan telling her in the heat of the moment that he misses her - she still wanted confirmation through SMS.
Did him friend-zoning her on the moonlit night affect her so much that she needs the constant affirmation of his feelings ?
I know they are in different frequency ranges but this one - him saying it aloud - falls in the overlap region for sure.

Originally posted by: manisha771

You are awesome writer...though I am a silent member but could not resist myself from appreciating you...

This poem is beautiful 👏

Originally posted by: crazy_vaish

Beautiful👍🏼👏

I was so looking forward to your post Chick and I could not be happier. The Poem...damn..How beautifully you have managed to capture Sumo.👏

Originally posted by: Ana_mika

I was so looking forward to your post Chick and I could not be happier. The Poem...damn..How beautifully you have managed to capture Sumo.👏