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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: mizzundaztud

Join in... please it will be awesome to have more ppl

But the story is predecided or we just post what we feel according to previous part?😕

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potterginny

@potterginny

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

hey I my laptop is not behaving rn, so posting via phone. There's no pink colour on the palette here... 😔
You'll edit it for me later?

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potterginny

@potterginny

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Mahishee, continue the previous part with your own imagination.
And please do, it's a pleasure reading your pieces. ❤️

Edited by potterginny - 9 years ago

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: potterginny
"Bhaiyya, agar aap khud aage nahi baithe toh mujhe hi koi bahana dhoondhna padega..."
Damn, he's exasperating! thought Shravan. Thus he eventually gave in to his pestering brother's demand and sat shotgun.
Suman was adjusting the rearview mirror. He was watching her every single movement's with fascination. She caught him staring at her fixedly in the rearview mirror and gulped.
"Well, this is a novel! Why is he making me so jumpy?" she mused to herself. Fiddling with the gear once more, she set off the old beast.
The ride to Malhotra palace was filled with awkward silence, occasionally improved with Daboo's giggles and his and Pushkar's chirps.

Sumo was mostly quiet all the time, observing the young man seated behind. After what seemed forever, they reached The Malhotra's House.

"Here you go Pushkar!", exclaimed Sumo as they reached home. But before Pushkar could reply, loud welcome screams, rather wishes could be heard.

" Shrraavaan Puttaarr! Tussi AA gaye!", shouted Kamini from inside.

"Mummyji ruko!", screamed Vandy as she followed her.

" Lo, shuru Ho gaye dono", giggled Sumo , softly, as she got down. Dabboo caught that remark and asked her loudly

"Kaun shuru Ho gaye Sumo didi?", Daboo asked her in front of everyone, much to her embarrassment.

" Chupp kar Daboo ke bacche! Bohot bolta hai Tu!", said Sumo.

Kamini and Vandy straightened themselves before doing Shravan's Aarti. It was overly done.

After all the naatak, they entered the house and settled. As Sumo turned to leave, Shravan caught her leaving and stopped her.

"Suman", he shouted, much to everyone's surprise.

Pushkar nodded and giggled, as if he just knew what was going on.

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Please add me in purple. I hope I got this right.

Yagneshri you write really well! Would love to see works from you😳

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raveena

@ravzs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Guys I hav nvr written in my life

But reading this I surely would love to join

I wil try to keep up d wrk lik u guys have been doin

Dont know how far I wil succeed I m askin u guys shall write

I promise to write more f u guys like or wil stop if u guys don't like

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ravzs
Guys I hav nvr written in my life

But reading this I surely would love to join

I wil try to keep up d wrk lik u guys have been doin

Dont know how far I wil succeed I m askin u guys shall write

I promise to write more f u guys like or wil stop if u guys don't like

Of course you should join... Everyone starts somewhere... So don't shy away! Do give it a shot and don't be afraid...

Since everyone is there,you need not worry. Jump in!!

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: potterginny
hey I my laptop is not behaving rn, so posting via phone. There's no pink colour on the palette here... 😔
You'll edit it for me later?

Oh yes, don't worry.. I will update later, even I m on phone, will do that on Tuesday, as I travel the whole day tomm

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Regina

@mizzundaztud

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever
Please add me in purple. I hope I got this right.
Yagneshri you write really well! Would love to see works from you😳

Great part, glad u joined, I love ur works.. I will add on Tues tillcthen keep writing

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

*suman*...I stopped her...
And Mann..,.my bro sometimes...irks me...

Leave it...let's focus on what I want to..

Suman stopped right there...i headed towards her...
And thanked her for the lift...
In turn she gave me a smile..."her smile is magical..

Oh wait ,."That's it" I wanna talk to her...
And spend some quality time...
And,,,,,,,
*shravan! Shravan * she waved her hand ...to bring me back to the senses...as i was lost in her thoughts...

Oh...yes...sorry...! Where were we...

*Thank you* i guess... She reminded me

Oh haan thanks...

Well shravan i will take your leave now...
See you !...

"when?" I shouted out...
Shit...don't know what i am doing...

It's embarrassing..."

"when?" Main kuch samjhi nahi... She asked me.

Oh not turning out to be soo embarrassing...

"well...i...just...wanna ask..."..

"u wanna ask ...what?"

Hmmm finally i gathered the words and asked her straight "let's be friends"

"friends!" Hmmm oh yeah friends..
After the hand shake...she left from there...

And i just shook my head...
Oh now we are friends...

I will make sure this friendship will never beak...

Friends for life "i promise that"
Whatever may our relationship status will be in future,...but friendship is default sumann!...sumo...

Edited by --fero-- - 9 years ago

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