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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it 😊
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I m glad that everyone liked it😊
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Erm Hie EDKVians... I am sure that all the readers of this TS now must have forgotten about this TS completely and that's because of my mistake only...I started this TS long before and left it in the middle...a lot happened in those days with me and I just couldn't visit at IF for next many days and later didn't feel like writing...but finally after months I wrote the last part of this TS coz I can never leave my stories incomplete...and coz it's been ages since I posted Part 2 I am going to post all three parts below ...if you are still interested then plz do read if not then it's ohk😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 1

He found her purse when she left and decided to return it to her...he was worried that May be she will be worried if she won't find it...throughout the way to her home he planned how cold he have to behave, he have to show that he did some kind of debt over her by coming till there to return it to her and that he did it for humanity sake and not for her...

Knocking on the door he stood impatiently thinking it would be her but was welcomed by a highly upset rachna, he frowned as he stepped in and heard a few noises.. walking in further he froze as he witnessed mami jee scolding sumu for something and what hurted him more were the tears in those eyes...she was crying.. he can't see her cry...hell he can't let her cry in front of anyone, due to anyone...it's only his right to make her cry just like he wants to be the reason of her smile...he accept it or not but he wants to be the only one for her, to make her smile or to make her cry...no one else can hurt her

'Mausi jii...what's the matter? Why is mami jee...?' He asked signaling through his expressions to tell him the matter and she told him everything feeling sorry for suman, but she didn't realized how her words were affecting shravan..her words stabbed him hard and then he just couldn't take it anymore

'Enough' he said loudly enough for the duo to hear and both turned towards him 'how can you scold sumo like this mami jee?' He asked as he made his way towards kitchen with rachna after him 'arrey shravan beta...when did you came? And at this time? Something important?' Mami jee plastering a smile on her face, in a sugar coated voice totally ignoring the topic asked him while shravan who understood this shook his head impatiently and started in a calm voice 'mami jee just one question...don't you consider suman as your own daughter? I remember in childhood you were so nice to her...use to say that she is your own daughter? Then what happened now?

'Yesterday she met with an accident and you are worried about your money...how insensitive' he said, his voice got a little high as he finished while mami jee looked at him for a moment before she replied him without even realizing what she should say 'beta tum isse jante Nahe ho bilkul bhe...she is not your childhood suman anymore, she has changed and changed for wrong...she is lying, koi accident Nahe hua, the real thing is that she was so busy in partying that she forgot about the responsibility she took...'

'She is like this only, always promising but never fulfilling any of it...she promised to return us our twenty lakh which her mother took but she died without paying...do you know this suman started her kitchen years ago saying she will return us our money...pocho isse kahan jatey hain iske Paisa, kahan zaya karte hai or aj tak kitna paisa lotaya hai isne humara...and when all this wasn't enough then yesterday she did that...didn't came on time and because of her a mother's heart is hurt, because of her I couldn't meet my son...she has to pay for it...' as she kept on going shravan heard her throughout eyeing suman and how badly she was trying to not to break down here this moment...it hurted him...she is not the same sumo whom he left years ago

He took in a deep breath 'mami jee, you blaming her for hurting a mother's heart because like every year you couldn't go and meet your son but do you realize about this girl, someone who can never meet her parents again? Do you realize about how much hurt she is that even she have a lot of elders but none can give her a love of parent, a true love of a mother and a father...do you realize that you are also a mother of a girl, do you realize that how much painful if would be for sumo...mami jii at least appreciate this that she is returning you what her mother took from you but you...you don't even consider all the hard work she put in for you all...'

'Tum aese kaisa keh sakte ho ...tum yhan the kia itne salon tak?' 'Nahe tha mai yhan mami jii but I know her, she is my best friend' he almost shouted and he noticed a tear rolling down her cheeks from the corner of his eyes, 'mami jee you are elder to me and I respect you a lot but this is not fair with sumo, she is blamed without any mistake...yesterday she left before time...and if still she couldn't return on time then you must have trust her that she met with an accident... mami jii ap bari ho..apko to barap pan dikhana chahie...is trah ise bina galati ke suna kar ap najana kia prove krna chati par mai jo bat janta or manta hun wo yeh hai ke suman ki koi galati nahe...and rahi bat paisa ki to wo mai or sumo apko bohat jald lota dengi..'

Mami jee couldn't utter a single word and he then held her hand 'chal sumo' he said and dragged her to her room and she quietly followed him looking tried and emotionally drained

As he closed the door she leaned by the bed and sat on the floor hugging her knees she cried while he watched her helplessly and a moment later taking in all the courage he had he sat beside her bed 'sumo' he called out to her and she looked up, her eyes swollen and puffy before he could utter anything she started 'why me? Why me shravan? I try so hard to not to hurt her or any of them but I end up doing that...I try so hard to return their money to them and I even am arranging it but don't they understand that it's not like that I will go in the morning and return with 20 lakhs by evening...mami jee thought that I was lying...mom dad shouldn't had left me like that, they should had taken me with them...I at least deserved that much of happiness to be with someone who loved me, who cared for me and who would understand if I am in problem...or nanu...nanu ko kia kahun mai...sirf ek tum the ab to tum bhe nahe ho...please go...I want to be alone' he heard her quietly, he wanted to stop her but her last line stopped him..pushkar was right, she isn't actually the sumo he left 10 years ago...she is changed...she is broken and he couldn't tell how hard it was for him to swallow what she said about her... she again hugged her knees sobbing as he placed his hand on her shoulder which she shrugged away 'please go shravan...I am all alone and I want to be alone' she said painfully and he sighed knowing that would be the best thing to do for now 'take care' he whispered before he walked out of her room closing the door behind and on his way outside he found all family members in the lawn , he apologized to nana ji 'nanu I am sorry for misbehaving with mami ji as she is an elder but I am not sorry for saying in sumo's defence...she don't deserve all those hard words...filhal I should leave...I will come tomorrow and nanu she is in her room, please make her sleep' 'I feel so good, after so long someone get that courage to speak in my suman's favor...thank you and don't worry I will be with her' 'good night nana ji' 'good night bacha'

Shravan returned home a little late and made his way direct to pushkar's room and entered without knocking, pushkar was sitting on his bed with his laptop on 'sorry pushkar bina knock kiye ana ke lie par na time tha na patience' he said , pushkar stood up frowning 'bhaiyaa ap...?' 'Pushakar kuch kam they tujhse...'

Ek duje ke vaaste

Hooo hooo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 2

Shravan was driving and in no time he would reach at tiwari's house...yesterday's brief conversation with pushkar was playing in his mind...seeing that scene of yesterday night made it crystal clear to him that sumo is not the same..she is suffering and she is suffering a lot..without any mistake, without any support and what stabbed him hard was the fact that she is not the same sumo...his sumo, someone who knew that how to fight for herself and for him..she had done that always except for that day, that day when it all ruined...he shook his head... no shravan it's not the time to reminisce over past neither to blame her..it's time to support her because whatsoever happened in past was between them and in no way he will let her face this alone..

As he reached their he stayed inside his car only as he saw sumo leaving in her car..he ignited the engine and drove after her ... she must be going at work he thought but something inside him told him another story... he followed her until her car came to a stop outside a jewellery shop...he frowned

He went inside two minutes after her and froze witnessing the scene in front of him, suman gave a red cloth filled with jewellery to the old man there which he recognised as her mother's jewellery without any doubt and something pinched his heart..the man handed her money which she took thanking him as he took away the jewellery...his hand turned into complete fist as she wiped the tears that rolled down her cheeeks...she must be in pain, of course these were her mother's jewellery, something she could never imagine to lose and here she is giving it away with her own will

He turned the other side as she walked out of the shop and once she left in her car he went inside the shop...before anything else, he has to handle this...he can't let her stay in pain like this all her life...

Later he drove back to tiwari house...and as he expected she returned home, and as bablu opened the door and asked him to come inside he saw her turning to look at him before she turned back to her mami..she just glanced but in that mere moment, he witnessed a pool of emotions playing in her eyes...she was helpless, she was in pain...she was suffering...hell she needed him

'Bohat piyari bachi hai tu meri...I knew that you will return the money the way you promised...mami's lovely daughter' he heard mami ji's praise in her as usual sugar coated voice as he took nanu's blessing and again turned to them to see sumo giving her a weak smile as her mama ji placed his hand on her head silently supporting her and she smiled knowing it won't help...it never had.

'Namastey... tumse kuch bat karne hai...come with me' at first he greeted all with no one in particular and then looked at suman..she looked at him puzzled 'umm it's important...come I will tell you' he added and she nodded looking at everyone present their before making her way to her room with he following her

'Shravan...I too wanted to talk' she said and he nodded telling her to continue 'wo I am sorry for yesterday...I behaved so oddly...I know that you supported me but shravan I shouldn't have told you all that...I just was too much broken and thank you also because we aren't friends anymore but still you stood up for me...' 'you are taking it wrong sum.. ' he tried to correct her but she cut him 'no don't think I am trying to set anything right between us...I know you are a great lawyer and I am just an ordinary girl but still you stood up for me...thanks...and you wanted to talk about something' she asked closing her topic

If she thought that he didn't realized why she said so she was wrong, he totallt understood each and every word of her...he remembered how in the party he blamed her to be a gold digger and till yesterday he wouldn't had reacted if she had said this to him but today as she emphasized it, he felt a deep pain which couldn't be ignored but she, she had a smile on her face while she said, a painful one... he had hurt her a lot, more than he thought he would...he sighed , this all had went too far, too wrong

'Sumo' he called out and she looked up a little surprised, may be she didn't expected him to call her that after whatsoever had happened the day before yesterday... 'I just want to know that from where you arranged all the money? ' he asked and she looked away 'it's non of your business...I just managed and if we are done...can you please leave? I have to go at work ' she asked and went to grab her bag

He for a while stood here and saw her moving here and there and grabbing her things one by one, her keys, her mobile, some papers and a small clutch and then put them all In her purse...he wanted to talk to her right now but knew that the time isn't right...that she may take It all wrong as another insult from him... he turned to leave only to be stopped by her


Yesterday's night was one of the longest night of her life...she couldn't sleep and thus she got a long time to think about what next...she knew there is a lot of responsibilities she has to fulfil...she knew mami ji never leaves a single chance to insult her but it's not what hurts her...the thing which hurts her are her words she use to Insult her parents, she knew they took money from them but that don't give her a right to do what she did and keeps doing... she hugged her parents picture close to her heart and apologized for what she was going to do...

Deciding about her next move as she laid on her bed, she remembered all the events of the night..how he came and how he witnessed everything, she then eyed the clutch he had left by her bed side before leaving...may be that's why he was here..may be because he found it and came to return it..and then how he supported her...something which she didn't thought he would do... because she too didn't did that ten years back...something which she should have done...she knew she always was demanding and not so supportive..and after a day of blaming him and crying because of him and everything that followed she realized that somewhere he wasn't wrong..may be like she couldn't take all the insult of anyone against her he too couldn't take that day...may be he too wished for her support like yesterday when finding him there she silently prayed for him to do that...

She realized that her ego had costed her a lot... she did lost a great friend because of it and even though now there is no friendship left, an apology should happen..he deserve that and she knew that... she didn't realized that when while thinking she drifted to sleep only to wake up after an hour or so...after getting ready, she wished her nano and completing all the task before leaving she left, but not for work..she had something else in hand...

Mami was happy and she was content that now at least for a few days she wouldn't get to hear all these accuses...when she thought to leave for work after handling mami the money she heard him wishing all, what shocked her was him approaching her and she knew that now she should apologize

Once in her room as she opened her mouth she couldn't share what she actually wanted and somehow she brought back the memories of the party ...he then asked her about the money and a rare of nervousness passed through her...she looked away from him and dismissed the topic...she acted to be busy and finally he turned to leave...she felt restless...sumo do it ...it's the situation of now or never 'shravan' she called out and he stopped

When she didn't continue he turned to her and witnessing his questioning stare she took In a deep breath

'Actually there is something more I want to talk about' 'kaho' he stated simply 'shravan I don't know from where to start and how to explain but I know it's today or never...so please listen to me and I am not doing this because of yesterday I am doing it because I should have done it years ago' she said and he didn't reacted... God knows why he behaved like that but she just wanted to let it out...playing with her hands she came near him

'Shravan we were friends...best friends and if we go through the history then there is no doubt that the one at fault was me..shravan I am sorry, because I couldn't be that friend you wanted me to be...I am so sorry for not standing up for you that day...for giving priority to others and my reputation instead of your feelings...I am really very sorry but being the jerk...I know I was a kid but I wasn't immature and may be that's why you were so much hurt...shravan the guilt...the guilt was always there in the heart..hurting me as well but shravan it honestly wasn't a very small thing to just send a message of sorry...I swear I tried a lot of times but never got that courage to apologize like that... and that shravan I am really very sorry for everything you went through because of me...it was never tough to apologize later but I made it tough shravan...my ego, my self respect was always on top and will always remain but our friendship...shravan it was priceless and I am the fool who ruined it and I am so sorry shravan for that...I know a sorry won't set It right but may be the guilt...it would lessen...because I already have to deal with so much things in life and so many people takes me as a burden on them..and I didn't wanted to be one for you too...without apologizing my deeds would have hurted you all your life, even now too it won't end but still it was needed...i am sorry'

She said and wiped her tears that unknowingly rolled down her cheeks and with that she walked away from him...after so long, she realized, her heart was at peace...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 3

Her heart was at last at peace but whatever she said brought an uneasiness in him so he just held her hand stopping her from leaving... 'sumo' he called out and she stopped 'hmm' she hmmed wiping her tears that unknowingly rolled down her cheeks 'kuch bat karni the' 'kaho' he turned towards her and made her turn to him

'Come' he held her hand and took her towards the bed 'sit' making her sit on bed he sat in front of her, on the floor and took her hand in his calmly 'sumo, I know so much time has passed and a lot had happened in this time and in this long time if I wanted I would had moved on from the past, I would had tried to forget that day when...leave that, and I even tried and I thought that I have actually moved on and now you or the memories of our friendship doesn't mean anything to me but when I returned and met you and thought that you don't really regret whatever you did years back I just... I just lost it...I thought you were still the same...arrogant and selfish...and then I couldn't stop myself from doing what I did' he said and looked away feeling guilty

'It's all ohkay shravan...what you did was even right because I have hurt you a lot and your anger towards me Is justified' 'no sumo...what I did was not justified at all...I have hurted you...we were best friends sumo still I did all that and accused you for something which you can never think of doing...I was just so blind in all that anger and disappointment of meeting you like this that I did so much without even realizing the Impact of it and see today because of me you are in so much mess...I am really very sorry' 'please shravan, who should be sorry about her actions is me...I did so wrong with you...I am really sorry shravan and just because of my selfishness I lost you..my best friend' she cried and he just starred at her with moist eyes

'We can be friends again sumo' he said after a moment and she looked up at him surprised...her expression telling him that she didn't believed what he said 'I am not joking sumo...this is what I want...my best friend...I know a lot had went wrong but we can set it right...right?' He continued and she just smiled wholeheartedly...a smile so full of happiness that he couldn't help but smile back

Ten years, it's been ten years since he had felt that sense of peace, since he had smiled truly, it's been ten years since he had taken life as a blessing, because it's been ten years since he lost her...he thought that he would never get her back because she lost him herself, she was the one who pushed him away and she should have tried to approach him..he knew that If she had ever tried to apologize, just try, he would had return back and cleared it all..but she never did that and he accepted that he was nothing to her...

Sumo wasn't just his best friend, she was someone he fell In love with and have even confessed it to himself, may be in past ten years he had tried to explain and proof it to himself that there is no love anymore neither there would be any but after these long ten years he have realized that it was just a lie to compose himself and his bleeding heart...the love was always there even though he had given his best to not to express it ever again

Today when he is in hee room, in front of her and living that dream which he saw uncountable times in past 10 years he just couldn't believe his luck that finally they have sorted it all out...although things went out of control but he was glad that they managed it all

'So friends...again?' He asked forwarding his hand towards her...she at first looked down at his forwarded hand, then at him but then she just moved forwards wounding her arms around his neck, hugging him warmly 'thank you so much shravan...for giving me my best friend back...' she said as her eyes moistened and he placed his hand around her back hugging her in return 'doston ke bech mein no sorry and no thank you' he said breaking the hug trying to lighten the atmosphere and she chuckled 'yeah right...dosti ka rule number 1'

'Ohkay now being your friend, I have to give you something' 'what' 'first promise you won't say no' 'promise' she said with a smile and he took out a pouch from his pocket 'keep it' 'what's this?' 'Check yourself' he replied and she emptied the pouch on bed to find her mother's jewellery in it 'shravan how did you...?' 'I followed you earlier when you went to sale it' 'shravan...how can I keep it...I have sold it...' 'and I bought it...now I want to gift it to my best friend...what's wrong in it?' 'Try and understand shravan it's not at all right' 'sumo listen' he stood up and sat beside her taking both her hands in his 'the one because of whom this all happened in first place is me' 'no it...' 'shhh let me complete'

'If I wouldn't have done all that then this all...' 'shravan it's not like that' 'listen to me sumo...so I just want to rectify my mistake and you can't stop me...I want to do it for my best friend...please just accept it...for the sake of our friendship' he requested and she sighed 'fine I will keep it' 'great' 'thanks' 'again' 'ooops sorry..no actually no sorry...and yeah I am taking back my thank you also...' 'yeah sure..take it back...I don't like keeping thank you's too' he said shrugging his shoulder and they laughed 'I missed you so much shravan' 'I missed you too sumo...' 'please be with me always...' 'I will' 'promise' 'promise'

'But for now I will take my leave...papa must be waiting for me and we are meeting tomorrow right for holi' 'of course' 'then see you tomorrow...bye' 'bye' and as he left she lied flat on her bed hugging her pilow dear 'finally, I got my best friend back and I will never let you go shravan..because my heart knows it's not just friendship...there Is a lot more...' she thought with a beautiful smile playing on her lips

He walked out of Tiwari Killa happy and content and drove back to his home... 'dost wapis mil gaye, wo din dur nahe jab pyaar bhe wapis mil jaega...I will win your heart sumo... kyun ke tum mere dost bhe or mera pyaar bhe...' he smiled wide looking forward to a great and beautiful future

That's it
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Edited by asyaarshilover - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Finally they have become friends again
Amazing end to their hatred and starting of their love story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ek achcha sa epilogue milega please?????
Something related to luv-shuv??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Lovely Update.😊
The Whole TS was Amazingly explained.😊
Please write like this.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update!!
Loved it!
Write more often!
Thanks for the PM 🤗

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