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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ezbeedscrittore


Lol, thanks, we readers really invest in our stories...
I liked this chapter..
I am enjoying Suman's kickass nature, like Shravan please go to hell if you can, or else I'll make this hell for you, hahahaha
Pushkar is adorable, and I want him to ignite some jealousy in Shravan, because a jealous Shravan is the best
Keep up the amaing work..


Sure, sure, Jealosy track will be there... sooner or later. Let's see... šŸ˜‰


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome update

The ending was surprising but not more than his amuse way of greeting Suman.
Uff mamiji! She will not let a chance away to taunt and badmouth Suman.
I am eager to read your plans to speed the matter of Sharavan hearts and the shock treatment.
Update soon


Thanks dear!
And yep, you're right about mami, I hate that bad mouthing habit of hers. It's so irritating, even in the show. 🤢 Someday, I'll so teach her a lesson in my story. Total revenge. 😈
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: an_chau

Hi, I've been a silent reader, but this is getting too interesting to stay quiet anymore... ;)

The best part - the painkillers!!! What a darn good way to show that he notices more than he lets on... But damn that ego!
Loved the update... looking forward to see how Sumo manages to repay the 2.5 crore... and thanks for the pm...


Hey!
First of all - take this massive bear hug. šŸ¤—
Thanks for deciding to comment.

About the ego, yep - that's one of the main problems here. šŸ˜•
Let's see what happens next. Take care. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Amazing update lara..
Sumo starts her strategy to earn more and her staff ladies so good and helpful..
ShraMan scene was good..
He wanna have a conversation with her but she was in no mood ..if sumo don't want pasta then they can give me I love ...
The painkillers..I know that guy cares for her but just don't show..but still enjoying their fights and care..


Thanks!
Oh, you love pasta! Mamma mia... I do too, but only when my mom cooks it. Homemade pasta is like heaven to me. ā¤ļø
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon


Hmmm... you've got lots of dream regarding her future, it seems. 😊

But I'm afraid that she can not buy her parents' house. This story is not entirely following the exact facts and happenings in the show. I'll surely have her parents' house included later but Khurana here isn't the owner of that property or any of Tiwari properties. Pheww...

Thanks for your idea by the way. You know, what I've in mind for the future is so similar to yours, except the buying her parent's house part. šŸ˜‰ Shhh... keep it a secret if you got what I mean.

Take care.


are Khurana does not need to make his entry if could be been someone else or through estate agent but never mind I am loving how you are taking this story ahead 😊 I am liking what you are hinting at 😈 looking forward to it actually me wanting her to buy her parents house blame that episode of the show Sumo looked so happy when she to her house and everything was so beautiful
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manisha771

I have read all the chapters of ur FF..it's beautiful... Please continue soon... eagerly waiting for next chapter


OH... ā¤ļø thanks you sooo much!
Will cont asap.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: andy1245

vry nic update jst want shravan to realise his mistake soon n u r a luvly writer hope u gv d nxt update asap


Hey, thanks! Will updt soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Amulya--

WOW... HEART'S WORK IN PROGRESS... PAINKILLERS... LOVE THEIR FOOD CONVO


Yep, šŸ˜‰ heart's already getting doses of medicine, will increase it when the time comes.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pearl100

Hey Lara 😃 thank you dear for considering my idea šŸ¤— ...thank you soo much for the PM... Absolutely brilliant chapter ...I'm soo glad that suman started right away with her ideas rather than waiting for a while...Love the staff who gave her the much needed space and put her situation in to consideration...Good that sharvn notices things very well and he gave her the much needed pain killers...Slowly she will start expanding her business and may be you can introduce some professional (may be a friend )who is well versed with stock markets to help sumo out ...she needs to invest the money may be after a while and then start earning well...Till then take care.


Hmmm... let's see what situation calls for in the future. 😊
Thanks.
And take care you too.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87

Thanks for appreciating my idea. šŸ˜› šŸ‘šŸ¼.

But you also have to keep in mind the capital constraints. Sumo only has Rs. 15 lakhs in her savings and this sort of expansion will really need money.

Well now, I also have a request, can we have a write-up about Shravan, (in a third person POV), when he is not around Sumo, so that we can form an unbiased opinion about him.


Hmmm... will keep in mind, sure. But it is already very clear that she is nowhere near achieving her target yet. This is the first step and she's a long way to go yet. Let's see how she gets there. 😊

About Shravan's POV, I do have something in mind, but a while later, okay? 😳 For now, it's needed that we not only know but also live through - to what extent Suman is going to get confused about Shravan.

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