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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kennashreign

Great story. Read it from the beginning. Enjoying every bit of it. Is it possible to give Shravan a RUDE shock. Something Suman related.

Ok, enough with my rambling! Looking forward to your next update. 😊

PS: I'll pm you the SHOCK details.


I've already got it planned. 😳
Thanks for commenting, dear and for your suggestion too.
Take care.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

Yeah go girl become a super successful chef and become a successful business women along with it👍🏼👏 and about feeling of being homeless I want her to buy her parents house in future and that would be HER OWN house not to mention sentimental and emotional value it holds it could also come in handy when Sumo leaves tha. place while Shravan would be going majnu for her 😆 and she doesn't wants to go to her mama-mami's place and doesn't have anywhere else to go she can go to her own home it will also make her independent in a way :) Shravan buddy you really need to have a meeting with a doctor asap for that messed up head of yours and a love doctor for your heart 😆


Hmmm... you've got lots of dream regarding her future, it seems. 😊

But I'm afraid that she can not buy her parents' house. This story is not entirely following the exact facts and happenings in the show. I'll surely have her parents' house included later but Khurana here isn't the owner of that property or any of Tiwari properties. Pheww...

Thanks for your idea by the way. You know, what I've in mind for the future is so similar to yours, except the buying her parent's house part. 😉 Shhh... keep it a secret if you got what I mean.

Take care.


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinkionly

That was amazing!!! I kinda had a feeling that deep down Shravan still cares for her... I almost feel like he married her in a hurry to protect her after the incident? But that could also be my over imaginative mind lol 😆


Maybe... maybe... 😊 Let's see.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Lovely update
I like this suman more
Seriously shravan is such a jerk
Maybe suman was wrong in the past but shravan had no right to be villain to her
Love their scene that he do care for her
What is this?? Two more accusations on suman
Her mami is a gone case
But when will truth come out
I'm eagerly waiting for revelations and aftermath
Continue soon


Thanks!

And yep, you're true. While one was wrong in the past, another is now. 😕
When will the truth come out? Soon... I guess. 😉

Will cont asap. Tada...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Hey lara!!! This update was a bang on!!! Our Mr.Khadoos is back 😉
I really liked sumo's determination n efforts to pay off her debts. She wants to get freed asap instead of being trapped in a loveless forced marriage. But it isnt a total loveless marriage coz our hero do cares for her 😉 ...shravan needs a jor ka jhatka 😉 .


Hey!! 😃 Thanks.
Let's see what happens next. Take care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Can we have a long update, really long update asap!??
In love with ur story n writing. Cn't help it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: potterginny

Lara!
This was stunning. Especially the painkiller giving.
And how Shravan initiates their conversation. Every time. He's got it really bad. Wish Suman would read between the lines. But khair, Suman toh Sumo bhi hai..self respect ke aage kuch dikhne se raha.
But I think she gets confused by his gesture at the end. Wonder what she'll make of it.

Don't forget to pm me for the next update. I don't want to miss it.

Love,
Ginny


You're right about Sumo. 😳
Yep, let's wait for the next chapter and she what she brainstorms out of his - pasta and painkillers.
Sure, will pm yaa, Ginny. Tada. ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: EDKV_Ciara

A good chapter... And thank you for the surprise update... Please update asap!!
Love,
Ciara 😊


Thank you! Will updt asap.
Love yaa. Tada...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MittuArsha

Hey I have been reading this FF silently for sometime now but never acknowledged. The reason being: Your FF is a masterpiece and I could not get myself to compliment something that was way to good. I loved every bit of the chapter or should I say the story.You have done a tremendous job in potraying Suman's feeling. Would love it if you could write a chapter which states Shravan's feelings.

Seeing this chapter I can totally feel that Shravan still cares. Hoping to read from you soon and waiting for the shock treatment 😆

The ROTI part was hilarious and the PAINKILLER part *lambu cares*



Hey!
Thanks a ton for deciding to comment, dear. I really am happy that you did.
🤗

And also, thanks for all your kind words. 😳 I hope you enjoy reading all the future chapters as well.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ammiey

Shock treatment haan?? hmmm...amazing !!! very much excited !!

okay so now the update...a total fab piece of work lara seriouslyy !!! 😳
enjoyed a lot !!
cant wait to see how slowly he gets a shock treatment by our beloved lara 😳
achhe se dena treatment in an amusing way 😳
updattee soonerr plzzz again i would plead this !! seriouslyy cant wait for the next part 😳😃
totally loved the way he banged the bottle of painkiller this shows he noticed how much pain she was in 😳 u still care shravan malhotra !!! cant run away from the reality my friend !!! and the truth is no matter what ever u do to her u still love ur sumo !! 😳❤️ and it cant be changed


Oh, thank you! ❤️
haa haa... sure, acche se treatment karenge. This mental institute will not leave a stone unturned for his recovery and for the next twists to tether his heart to the destination. 😈

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