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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sashnihaa

Amazing Lara! Really liked how you described in detail what Suman was going through! I was able to feel what she was going through. And omg Shravan!! Kind of pissed of at him and not excuse he can tell he cares about Suman but he didn't have to be so rude to her either!

Overall loved this chapter & thanks for the pm :)

Thank you & please let me know when you've got the chapter done! :D


Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far, just wait - massive twist in the next chappy.
Of course, I'll let yaa know when I updt. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .shivi396

Amazing Chapter
Really need to Know What Shravan's POV.
But really enjoying Your writing Style.
Yeah I notice every damn thing;that Clicking & what Text He received??
*Really Want you to update it ASAP*


Answers will be given in the next chappy. 🤗
Thanks, I'm glad that you liked my writing style. The anticipation to know Shravan's POV / his thoughts and feeling - that's exactly the purpose of this writing style. So, it's a good thing I guess, that you're eager to know what's going on in his mind.

Updt coming in a minute. I'm just putting it up to upload.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: PALAK19

omg...
u write so welll...
realllyyy they got clicked nd daboo nd suman bonding is fabulous...plzz update next part fast

And thanks for pm


Thanks a ton! ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome update

Well, i was awe when Shravan saves Suman from the b*stard Khurana but then i was pissed off at him when he brought money.
I think the click sound is of a camera that may belong to Suman.
I am eager to know what you have plan more for Sharavan and Suman.


My master-plan will be revealed in the next chappy which I'm going going to upload in a moment. Will be eager to know your opinion about it.
Thanks! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago


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My evilness in all it's glory! 😈 Hard time for Suman and then for Shravan waiting ahead. Tell me - how many of you're excited?

I thought to not include a temple but a formal setting of signing papers / drawing a contract in stead. There will be promising drama afterwards that I can assure you about. 😉

So, what is your opinion about my - limited thrid person POV - wrtiting style? Shravan's POV is missing, I know, but sometimes guessing what's going on in one of the lead role's mind - it holds a kind of anticipation; excitement. I hope you're having those vibes, are you?

And I'm proud to say that almost all of you got the reason of the clicking noises absolutely right. My readers are very smart! 👏👏

Another very very important thing I've got to request you all about. That is - please keep your eyes opened if anyone's copying, stealing - plagiarizing anyone's story. It's very wrong and illegal to copy someone's work without their permission and claim it as yours. So, let the author know and report it to the authority of the forum if you find that kind of case happening. I'm serious about this because it had happened to me not long ago.

Phewww... back to the chapter - please don't forget to press the like button and leave a comment or two. 🤗 That will make me very happy and encouraged.

Love yaa all, ❤️
Lara.
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
I hope Sharavan's nature of jumping on to conclusions won't cost him much in his future.
I wish a day would come when someone will notice suman and it would be greate if that person be Sharavan.
Looking forward to read the drama after their marriage.
Edited by Javeria3991 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
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Unress

Damn,this story 👏
Seriously, actually it gives the feel like we are watching show /episode
#Hallucinations 😆
I am loving it.
Poor sumo, tough time ahead


Awesome 👏

Please include shravan's pov 😳 please
Edited by --fero-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ouch my heart!
Well turns out it was pictures... the media I tell you
But I really hope shravan sees her for who she is before its too late.. well it's never truely too late for redemption but still.. I understand the way he sees it, with the money and all.. but I wish he gave her a chance to explain.. which I'm sure you'll do justice to😳

Amazing update, keep them coming🤗
Thanks for the PM😳
Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a dreadful update
While reading it was sending shiver down the spine
Shravan's misunderstanding increased with Suman's pain
please make him see sense in his thoughts
And marriage so sudden
Waiting what future unfolds for them
And thank you for pm
And dedicating last chapter to you
Thank you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Lara!!! Superb update.. Very excited to know what's going to happen next. So shravan left so abruptly in the previous update to clear the matter of those pictures...finally they are getting married ...feel sorry for sumo, hope shravan soon realises that sumo is doing all this only for her family.. Update soon 😊

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