ShivAnya SS Truly Madly Ghostly - Chap 4, pg 14

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: nish_vir
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Beautiful start!
Looks like Shiv's eyes are not just pools of kala pani😆. She was enamored by his eyes otherwise the only scary thing about our "deewana" is his eyes.
Continue soon. I am waiting.

Thanks!

lol... no... they're not yet kala pani. 😉

But things may change in the future...

I mean, special things like that calls for special occasions.

Updating in a while...😃

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

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Originally posted by: orion23
Lara 🤗

Zoya!

Firstly, many apologies.. I'm quite late..
I'm on the slow train to winning the race 😆
At least reaching the finish line..

No worry, dear!
You commented and that's it, that's what matters. 😃

Anyhow, first part is here

And you are trying something new! Your experimentation only ever leads to genius

Well, let's see what happens this time...😳

Moving on, finding him! Love the title!

Thanks!

A home, a sedan, a comfortable life.. Sounds good!

It's like - let's give her all the good before the bad.
You know how evil I can get with the twists and drama. 😆

I already like this Mr. Happy Daruwala! Or is it a saya that's making him be like this, only time will tell😆 I'm a skeptic anyway, add a dash of Lara and a hint of a saya and my mind wheels churn like never before!

Only time will tell, buddy, I agree to that... only time will tell.😉

But yes, it's a fact that too much of everything definitely calls for
some suspicion. 😈

Ah! So apartments on the floor are empty! "Maut bhi, na jise rok paayegiii..."😎

*claps on that.😎

Guitar strings! Black attire! Tall frame! Jaw line, swoon-worthy! Hair falling on his face! Ek Deewana Tha! Ek Deewana Tha!❤️

Ek Deewana Hai! Ek Deewani hochuki! 🤗

He has deep brown pupils! Well, the depth in them sure can drown anyone! ☺️

Sure...
Black eye balls are reserved for special occasions. 😎

He came to her room! He is

He came over to see what was wrong with the girl maybe.
I mean - the floor is empty because of who-shall-not-be-named,
and here the girl is just...

Lara! What an explosive start! Loved it!!!!!!

I'm super happy knowing you liked it! Yay!
Thanks! 🤗

I answered all your question above in the running comment while reading 😆

Yep, I see... and I love your running commentary. ❤️

I can't wait to see how this unfolds!
I'm hooked!
🤗

*jumps in joy

Cheers!

Zoya!

Thank you so much, Zoya!
Like always, your comment has made my heart so happy.
Love you!

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Reine Lobo

@Rein123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

@devilonmoon post an index page for all the chapters along with the page numbers if possible...

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Rein123
@devilonmoon post an index page for all the chapters along with the page numbers if possible...

It's already on page one. Read my very first post and you'll find the index there at the bottom.

Clicking on the chapter name will direct you to the chapter easily.

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Sumi

@Susmitasumi96

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Plzzz update ta next one! Cant wait!

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

So part two is here

I read it the same day you posted, I was too lazy to comment 😆

But that's good, I shall re-read it now😃

Sharanya disregarded the open door as a mere act of carelessness...

Ah! If only she knew, strange next-door neighbor was with her the whole night

Peace treaty thought! Me likey! Me likey very much!

Human brain's mechanism! Word! I couldn't agree more! Brain loves comfort. It is hardwired to protect. Only, we no longer are pre-historic and hence that much of fear is not needed. Who will tell that to the brain? 😆

I absolutely love how you describe happenings. Its spot on!

So she's back home! And look who bumped into her ❤️

Holy popcorn! She can see him!

Poor thing, he must be so flustered.. Like how even 😲

The lights doing a number and the faint Shiv from him! My gosh! Slayed! Its a good thing I can imagine Namik in there and its 🤪Top it off with the fact that even his teeth are hot

I can't wait!

This is so exciting!

Love and hugs!

Zoya!

Edited by orion23 - 7 years ago

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Apoorva Kushwah

@akrocks77

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Amazing Chapter ...LARA!!!

Excited for the next chapter

Apoorva

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Shiv was shocked that someone could see him. I think, if ghosts really exist, that's what they would feel if any alive person were able to see them. 😲

I felt his mind would be in a chaos with Sharanya being totally chirpy and apologizing for the previous night. I loved how you wrote down Shiv's by the mere description of his eyes and the lights flickering in the corridor.

Loved this! ❤️ Thank you for the PM. 🤗

~ Mrina <3

Edited by -Mrinalini- - 7 years ago