ShivAnya SS Truly Madly Ghostly - Chap 4, pg 14 - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31
Firstly Hallelujah...Leonard cohen...always on a secured side of my playlist❤️...the mysterious neighbor and I can share our music
You gave a character build up to Sharanya which the show hasn't bothered to yet... probably because of medias res...but starting from the beginning is so gripping.

We got the guy on the first day... moreover we got his mesmerizing eyes to dream of .
You introduced the character and let the suspense build up by itself by revealing as less as possible...this is a very smart move too.

I'm totally in for this blissful ride.

Best wishes to you on this🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32
Wow. You are amazing what a start off.
Please PM the next update Lara.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
So sharanya met with Shiv! Interesting chapter.. waiting for the razzz of shiv 😉
Plz update as soon as possible.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Rein123

@devilonmoon

This is really good! Update this on wattpad too if you can...



Hey! First to comment on this chap... take hugs... 🤗

And thanks a lot.
Yes, I've updated on wattpad too -- with the video song. 😳
Permanent version there.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
Reply in blue.


Originally posted by: Nik03

Res

****
Unres

Lara special Supernatural 😳
Now that's gonna be something special!
N I am a fan of dark mysteries and specially supernatural...so a treat for me!
😃

Fantastic to know! 🤗
Let's see how things turn out...
Fingers crossed.😳

Coming to this one.
Truly Madly Ghostly...Title is perfect❤️

I'm super glad you liked it. 😃
Thanks!

And what a start to the start😳
Sharanya..got to know about her a lot!
The description of sudden movements, sound and the expressions is just simply awesome Lara!
It gave that much needed feel to me as a reader!

Mission accomplished then.

Mr. Daruwala...well a hatke character!
Some secrets and some revelations!
Can't say much about him as it'll be super soon now.
And the journey just started now!!
For now...he seems harmless but secretive and an interesting character!
Lets see though😛

We'll just have to wait and see about that. 😉
But a hint is that... most characters in this story will have some bad and good in them and not just the one.

Th floor is vacant..ah!
The feels here!
The Ghost star as you say being the reason😳
A Hot Ghostly neighbor!
Too much fun!
😛

No side-stepping the truth here... lol...
I guess it's quite obvious, isn't it? 😉

The neighbor...haaye!
The black avtaar..The height!
Guitar and the song..Perfect!!
The meeting and those eyes

For firm reasons I've decided to keep the total black/special effect eyes
for special occasions. 😉
(I just realized that I'm winking a lot.)

The night ended just like that?
Doesn't seems like that though!
There was this distinct noise that the balcony door would make when being opened very slowly ...It points out something😳

Definitely it points out something. 😎

All in all a gripping and captivating start Lara and am hooked!
Looking forward for this intriguing ride!

Yay!
I hope you'll enjoy the next chapters as well.

Thanks for the PM!
Please Do cont soon!
Lots of Love🤗
Nik

Thank you so much, Nik!
Your comment just made my heart so happy.❤️
Love you more, girl.
Take care.


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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
When will you update the next chapter dear?
Edited by Susmitasumi96 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
OMG! Lara, you're a genius. Absolutely loved the story-line and their first meet. ❤️

Continue soon and do PM me. 😃

~ Mrina <3
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Her neighbor is ghost ji ...

Its all vacant because someone paid for it to be that way , then told happy ji , to let her stay ...


Hallelujah instead makes me sleep its soothing ...

didn't it bother her that ghost ji didn't react to her AT ALL ??
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
First of all I am really sorry for being so late to reply 😆
Now coming to the story I am loving it like anything.I loved getting into Sharanya's mind for once and find out how she thinks and what she thinks.

Hmmm,so Sharanya disrupted Shiv's moment.I wonder what his reaction will be😉
Can't wait for the next chapter
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
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Beautiful start!
Looks like Shiv's eyes are not just pools of kala pani😆. She was enamored by his eyes otherwise the only scary thing about our "deewana" is his eyes.
Continue soon. I am waiting.

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