ShivAnya SS Truly Madly Ghostly - Chap 4, pg 14 - Page 5

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Those eyes... They were truly missed..

Interesting start Lara !

Thanks for pm!😊

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Wow Sharanya met ghosty Shiv already. Poor girl couldn't imagine he could be ghost not human. His eyes were brown not dark black how it is in the show not pale face so she might not felt suspicious about him.

Yep, had the first meet-up take place immediately at the start. 😃

And yes, Shiv's appearance is different here in my story - but that maybe only for Sharanya 😉.

So Sharanya's neighbour is ghost🤣 that's whole floor is vacant is that floor haunted?😲

Maybe you just hit the accurate answer. 🤗

It's intriguing

Thanks for PM Lara

Thank you so much!

I'm so glad to know you found it intriguing.

Love yaa...

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Wow Sharanya met ghosty Shiv already. Poor girl couldn't imagine he could be ghost not human. His eyes were brown not dark black how it is in the show not pale face so she might not felt suspicious about him.

So Sharanya's neighbour is ghost🤣 that's whole floor is vacant is that floor haunted?😲

It's intriguing

Thanks for PM Lara

Originally posted by: Ranified009

Firstly Hallelujah...Leonard cohen...always on a secured side of my playlist❤️...the mysterious neighbor and I can share our music

You gave a character build up to Sharanya which the show hasn't bothered to yet... probably because of medias res...but starting from the beginning is so gripping.

Hallelujah! Yeah!

*I'm imagining Shiv and you high-fiving. 😉

I mean, Hallelujah got the best lyrics written of all time.

I just need to listen this song at least once every other day.

It's my thinking song!

And... character build up - that's the most important thing for me.

The process of building up a character with details, without over-doing it,

is quite painful... yes. But those are some crucial bones of any story.

I'm super glad you liked it. 🤗

We got the guy on the first day... moreover we got his mesmerizing eyes to dream of .

You introduced the character and let the suspense build up by itself by revealing as less as possible...this is a very smart move too.

Thank you!

I'm totally in for this blissful ride.

Best wishes to you on this🤗

Thanks a lot, dear!

Love you so much.❤️

Originally posted by: nileshni679

Wow. You are amazing what a start off.

Please PM the next update Lara.

Originally posted by: Susmitasumi96

So sharanya met with Shiv! Interesting chapter.. waiting for the razzz of shiv 😉

Plz update as soon as possible.

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

OMG! Lara, you're a genius. Absolutely loved the story-line and their first meet. ❤️

Continue soon and do PM me. 😃

~ Mrina <3

Originally posted by: Africanqueenkel

Her neighbor is ghost ji ...

Its all vacant because someone paid for it to be that way , then told happy ji , to let her stay ...


Hallelujah instead makes me sleep its soothing ...

didn't it bother her that ghost ji didn't react to her AT ALL ??

Originally posted by: --BlackSheep--

First of all I am really sorry for being so late to reply 😆

Hey! It's okay, dear.

I'm so happy that you commented. 🤗Take hugs.

Now coming to the story I am loving it like anything.I loved getting into Sharanya's mind for once and find out how she thinks and what she thinks.

You'll get to get into her mind more now.

It has just started. 😉

Hmmm,so Sharanya disrupted Shiv's moment.I wonder what his reaction will be😉

Can't wait for the next chapter

Haunting ka satyanash kar di ladki nei... lol

No wonder he came over to see what was wrong with the girl. 😆

Oops! Did I just say too much? 😕

*sighs

Alright.

Will updt in an hour, by the way. 😃