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Posted: 6 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ronshaan

will read when time permits. 

thanks for sharing 


read it when ever you get time 😊


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronshaan

Nice progress in the story.. seems like she was talking about him because she ended her talk with the saying you know him. it has to be himself.


You are a smart woman indeed 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 4






He was confused as how could he know about whom the girl was talking.  He was enjoying the song remembering the girl who he saw today.

The song finished.


RJ: "So listeners our sweet girl is going to tell us the name of the boy."


Girl: "He talked about me today publicly on..."
(There was some disturbance in the line so the call could not be completed)
And then the call ended.


RJ: "Hello... Hello. Well we were not able to know the man's name but I am sure by now the man must have known how much this girl likes him.
With this, today's show ends. Bye folks, listen you tomorrow.  Till then keep loving and singing.


~Ek nazar mein bhi pyaar hota hai maine suna hai...~"





After the show, Neil was thinking for a while about whom she was talking. 
"She said I know him and today that boy publicly talked about her."


"Who do I know?" he questioned himself before leaving his chair.


He talked to the technical team and retrieved the girl's number and thought to call her the next day as it was too late to call an unknown girl and ask the name of the boy. 


He had never asked for anyone's number before from the technical team when a call had ended abruptly, but this call had left him with no option but to go till the end of this conversation. He was excited for tomorrow.



Next morning when he was at a shop, suddenly he remembered something. He kicked himself for not being able to connect the dots. 


Was he not helping his teacher by taking some bags with him? Was the caller his teacher's daughter? And above all, was she the same girl who he saw yesterday? These questions where making him anxious, so he reached for his bike and started out to find the answers himself.



In the next five minutes, the whole conversation with the girl replayed in his mind and he smiled. He had even talked about her. 

"How could I forget that?" he smiled thinking this.



He reached a door and taking a short deep breath, he knocked. A girl opened the door. 

He went down on one knee and said, "Hey you beautiful, I love you," and chuckled.


"So you came to know my address?" said the girl standing there, crossing her arms over her chest.


"Yes Tara, I figured it out just now. Last night, I was simply lost in you and so I was unable to figure it out," he chuckled rubbing the back of his neck.


"Why didn't you tell me yesterday when you saw me on the street that you liked me?" he asked standing up on his feet.


"I thought it's better it is unsaid then to regret saying something which is never going to happen," she said slightly biting her lower lips.

"I love you Tara," he said with sincerity in his voice.

"Love you too Mrityunjay," she murmured.

They hugged.



The Radio played.

~Ek nazar mein bhi pyaar hota hai, maine suna hai ...~


Both smiled listening to it.





--- The End ---




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Story: Archi21 😳
Editor: ⭐️ Shaina_b ⭐️
(Thank You for making it readable 👏)

 I hope you have enjoyed reading this short story 😊
Edited by Archi21 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34
Oh it was so short. 
MJ figured out and didn't fear to meet her and let her know he likes her n she liked him too. that's nice story. 
good writing. keep it up/

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Posted: 6 years ago
#35

It has come to an end 😲
So soon ..
It was so lovely ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 

Okk coming to the update it is great !!! 👏 👏 👏

Neil was so confused. 😆
Then the girl told the boy talked about her 😉
Before Neil could ask the call was disconnected 😛

After the ending of show he still thought.
He also tried to call her and wanted her number. 😛 😛 😛
Still he didn't understand .. 😆

Oh ! finally he realized 😃 
Now, he remembered he had helped his teacher and the girl was her daughter 😊
And the girl by whom he was mesmerized was the same girl.. 😳

So showing the courage he went to her house  👍🏼
And directly proposed !!!!

She asked how he found out.
He told her his own messy condition 😆 😆 😆

MJ asked why she didn't tell.
Tara said her hesitation.

Tara also expressed her feelings.😃

❤️ * Happy Ending * ❤️

This story was so so cute ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 
I have left no new words for your praising.. 😊
You always come with some simple and beautiful idea that blows our mind. ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Keep writing like this 👍🏼

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ A lot of love for you  🤗  🤗 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
Neil is obviously confused that how can he know the guy!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

So he was remembering the girl he saw today while listening to the song just as the girl must be thinking of her love!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊    

The girl said he talked about her publicly but the call got disconnected before she could say his name!!!   

After the show he is still thinking about her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Good that he got her number because he is surely curious about this call!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

But still he hadn't understood!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆

Now he remembered that he had helped his teacher and the girl was her daughter!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally he realized that the girl he was mesmerized by was the same girl as the one who had called!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 👏 👏 👏 👏

So gathering up his courage he went to her house!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

I loved the way he directly proposed to her!!!!❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

She asked him and he told her how he figured it out just now!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara, in turn, told him about her hesitation because of which she didn't tell him yesterday!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Finally Tara and Mrityunjay expressed their love for each other!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Their hug was so cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

So it ended with the song which described their story perfectly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This part was fantastic!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

It was a beautiful and perfect ending to the story where they got together!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

It was awesome and a very cute and wonderful story!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏




Edited by Shaina_b - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: ronshaan

Oh it was so short. 

MJ figured out and didn't fear to meet her and let her know he likes her n she liked him too. that's nice story. 
good writing. keep it up/


Yes, it was short 😊

MJ is genius (sometimes 😉 )

Thanks for loving it 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
I will read and then comment
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Posted: 6 years ago
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loved the description of Tara.mrityunjay is already lost in her. perfect song for the situation..ek ladki.but he is restless to know if she noticed him gazing at her...if she would slap him.😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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he can be relieved as she was not eating him up..she just passed by his side.he is observing her minute expressions.so cute.naughty guy loved her fragrance.she smelt like lily.naughty.is that her name or not?naughty guy didn't reveal her name. but the name is as beautiful as her.sweet.5 minutes love story..the end.he is wrong for sure.this is just the starting of his love story.waiting to know her pov