Mriara Story ~Tum saath ho ~ Part 6, page 12 up ! - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

It's a nice start for a new chapter.

Tara is angry but still she is allowing him to touch her.
Mj ka jaadoo hi kuch aesa hai 😉
Tara kitna sunarahi hai per Mj phir bhi care ker raha hai
Yahi to khubsurati hai MriAra ki 👏
Rain and thunder + Mj and Tara = romance , love and passion.
😳

Hoping that we will get this formula in your next chapter 😊
Barsat ki raat aur Mj Tara ka saath. 😳

Thanks for sharing mini.
Keep writing and be active on the forum.




Thanks alot dear 😃

Glad you enjoyed the chappy

Wont be able to update soon coz my files got deleted by mistake abd this storys parts

So will take sone time guys

Please forgiveme


This is something that im annoyed a lot on... Myy docs have been deleted now i gotto do smth to recover thrm or write it againm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Zehrin

my pleasure.. It's from mriara suhagraat scene... One of my favourite scene ignited with mriara sizzling chemistry..


Oh thanks a lot

But... The the hut one after she had nearly dorwned or when ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: kumari27

Nice chapter👏

Tara mj ka nok jhok toh hamesha hi lajawab hota hai😆

Mj ka Tara ko uthana😳

Barish toh aag lagayegi dono ke beech😳

Great effort dear
Continue soon



Thanks a lot dear

😃
Mriara in rain in thr stable ... 😳 😳

Will be updating soon ...

Thanku
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: irfan2

wow great superb and please wright other part soon



Thanks a lot

Will be updating soon
Glad you liked it

Thanku so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Superb part ⭐️

MJ was shocked and I was also 😆
Tara had fallen on floor
But when there was MJ nothing to worry 😉

MJ picked her in his arm and he had to do it forcefully 😳
As Tara was not going to listen to him 😛

MJ had genuine care for her so he didn't really care of her words 😊
It had started raining 😛

MJ removed her pain 😃
As expected Tara was not going to say thanks 😳

You described MJ so well 😉
Now Tara has to stay at stable 😛

Good going Mini 👏

Ps: I aleady have commented for part 1 😊




thanksa lot khadeja 😃

im glad you liked the part 😃

yes they both stuck at the stable 😳

thanku khadeja




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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Hi guys i first wrote a bi part bjt by mistake some files got deleted abd my story also ... Well ... Hope you enjoy this part and let me know how it is and please hit the like button

Part 3

In Shekhawat Villa
In A dark room... A well built body stsnding facing the window... A bronced well toned bare back sux pack abs... Abd a pair of green eyes were facing the window...it was raining ... Tall ...dark... Handsome ... The manhad everythibg a girl could ask... But... Hisheart... Was as dark as a coal...

Tara got up and sat down on the groubd ...
Mritunjsy turned around ...and looked at tara... Who was shiveribg as it was getting cold...
Mrityunhay noticed it ... He walked and took out a blanket and sat besides her ... Placing his back on the wall... Then... He looked at hr ... With love yet pain in his eyes ... He gebtly extended the blanket on her ... While she looked at him ...with herbeautiful bug brown eyes ... With love but mixed with all those questions ... Did he really send those gundas therr ... But... Why ?

She looked at him ... Hebwas shirtless...and from her mouth escapwd these words
T. Apko thandi nahi lag rahi ? Shirt pegen lijiye ...
M. Haan... Woh... Shirt geeli ho gayi thi ... Baarish ke wajah se ... Woh pura din baarish padi hain ...
Listening to his words... She felt a sudden sympathy for him...she moved closer to him and With her hands she started moving and placing her blanket over him ... Sharing it ... The feeling of anger had gone... there was only afeeling pain cobfusion ... Sge had said all that to him... Bt somewhere her hearrt waasbt agreeing that mj had sent those men to harm hrr... Itt had to ve someobe else... But who ?

In shekhawat villa ...
The man turned around and took few steps and reached his bed... From where he picked his black shirt and wore it... Then his phone statrtedringing ... He reaxhed thephone which was on the side table ... But ...as soon as he got there...the phobe stopped ribging ... He looked atthe number... Didnt seem familiar...

In the stable...
Mj loojed at tara ... Her concern for him... Tara was touching his skin while she was moving theblanket on... She nomerous times touched his chest and as by mistake ... And her arm was touching his as they were sharing the blanket with him... They were under the same blanket ... Giving her shivers right besides hinm... His arm was touching her arm... He was shirtless next to her ...
T. ( in her mibd ) ... Tara bachuj ... Yeh tu keval iss liye kar rahi hsi ...kyunki agar woh bheemar ho gaya to mujhe bhi ho jayegi ... So...
Mj looked at her... Her cheeks were pink... He saw how much presemce affected her ... Thosw cheeks...how much he wished to kiss them... His heart wanted to cage her in his arms and to hmfeell her close to his body and to fall aslep in her arms in this cold and rainy night...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Sorry I am late

Great update Mini ⭐️

At Shekhawat Villa who was he !!! 😕

MJ noticed Tara was shivering 😛
He placed blanket on her ❤️
Wow.. !!! they were looking each other with love 😳

MJ was shirtless ☺️
And Tara was caring about MJ 😉
She was now thinking MJ might not behind all her troubles 😛
Shirtless MJ and Tara were at same blanket 😳
And Tara was convincing herself 😆
She just did it as she would fallen ill ...

MJ's wishes ☺️
I wish that those would come true

Waiting for next part 😊

Edited by Khadeja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Thanks for the update
And
Sorry for late reply

Who was at Shekhawat Villa?
You added some mystery and I love mystery and thrilling stories

Stable mein donon aik sath
Barasti boondein aur MJ aur Tara ka saath

Oye so romantic

Phir Kambal bhi aik aur Mj bina shirt ke
Kiya kerti ho Mini
😳😳😳😳😳😳
( Ebi ke time pe hum sab Mj ko bina shirt ke dekhte hi medical help ke liye Bhagte they)

Mj ki wishes
☺️
Tum poori kerdogi I know😉

It is really nice and beautiful update
Thanks again !

Edited by SamreenJ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Superb update👏
Itna suspens😕
Yeh shekhawat villa me kaun hai..

Mj or Tara ek hi blanket me😳😳

Dono ko ehsaas hai ek dusare ki uljhan ka...

Tara bhi use kuchh samajh nai aa raha ki woh kya kare

Waiting for next


Edited by kumari27 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Superb update Mini

But Shekhawat Villa mei kaun hai?

Itna mysterious...

Any new character?

Wow...

MriAra ek hi blanket mei...

And upar se shirtless MJ...

So romantic...

Haiii...Mj's wishes...

Waiting for next chappy...

Update soon Mini...

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago

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