Mriara Story ~Tum saath ho ~ Part 6, page 12 up !

Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Nice chapter👏

Tara mj ka nok jhok toh hamesha hi lajawab hota hai😆

Mj ka Tara ko uthana 😳

Barish toh aag lagayegi dono ke beech😳

Great effort dear

Continue soon

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sketie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Zehrin
Hello mini...
Thanks for the update... Mriara and rain...
The combination is deadly...
Ab kya hoga... 😳
Pls continue soon...

Hi dear

My pleaure writing on mirara

Yes i love rains and the rain will play cupid in this mriara story

Will update soon
Thanks a lot

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Nira Mukherjee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: miniapplepie
I promise the next chapters r gonna ge longerthan this one ...

Thank you so much

Thank you so much!!!!

we really need a long chapter!!!! 😛

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irfan2

@irfan2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

wow great superb and please wright other part soon

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Khadeja Akter

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Superb part ⭐️

MJ was shocked and I was also 😆
Tara had fallen on floor
But when there was MJ nothing to worry 😉

MJ picked her in his arm and he had to do it forcefully 😳
As Tara was not going to listen to him 😛

MJ had genuine care for her so he didn't really care of her words 😊
It had started raining 😛

MJ removed her pain 😃
As expected Tara was not going to say thanks 😳

You described MJ so well 😉
Now Tara has to stay at stable 😛

Good going Mini 👏

Ps: I aleady have commented for part 1 😊

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sketie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Khadeja
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Sorry for late comment

Great update ⭐️

So Tara had run away 😕
She bumped into MJ 😛
And MJ hold her in his arms

Tara was so scared 😲
But she felt that MJ's stable will be safe for her 😛
And she hugged him 😳
MJ was shocked 😊
After all she is Tara and so unpredictable 😉

MJ tried to comfort him 😊
But Tara misunderstood him 😕

Actually what was happened with Tara that she was so scared 🤔

Like this story 😛

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Thanku dear 😃

Glad you liked it

Actually ..i didnt want to reveal it now... It something mysterios...that you will see the upcoming parts... i can only tell yiu tgat its the interrsting element in my story...

Soon there will be flashbacks. ...well...im not gonna end your ibterest 😃

Thanks a lot dear

Thanku so much

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sketie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Zehrin
Hello mini...
Thanks for the update... Mriara and rain...
The combination is deadly...
Ab kya hoga... 😳
Pls continue soon...

And ...if you dobt mind...could you please tell me of which episode is your dp iimage from ???

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sketie

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Posted: 9 years ago

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