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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Beautiful update

Enjoyed reading it!!!

Beautifully executed...

Tara imagined MJ beside her...and I loved that scene , you described it beautifully!!!!

The goons were sent by Arjun...

So much mystery!!!!

Update soon Mini...

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter...


Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Only one comment...acha nahi tha kya part ? Guys pkease if you like the part than please comment and encourage
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Hey finally read all parts.

This is beautiful specially the fifth one.

I just loved Tara imagining MJ besides her and I know soon she will come to know that he is not the bad man who want to kill her.

Between that who is this Arjun? I mean to whom you consider playing Arjun's character?

Continue soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Nice start Mini

Barish ki boondein aur kisi ka saathromantic hota hai per jab MJ aur Tara sath hoon to thrilling aur passionate hojata hai sab kuch
Lovely scene

New character Arjun
Nice

Tara ka sharmana uff
Aese sone ko mila dil mein ladoo phoot rahe honge
sharmana to formality hai bas😳😳😳


Oh to woh goons Arjun ke they
But mystery abhi baqi hai
Hmmm

Tara ki imagination kafi wild haiN
You are very good in romantic scenes
The way you describe it
I enjoyed it.

continue soon

Thanks Mini
This part is very good and you have done it beautifully.šŸ‘
šŸ¤—
Piyar ki jhappi
Edited by SamreenJ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Sorry for my late comment

Wonderful Update ā­ļø

Rain and MriAra are very deadly combination 😳
Tara fallen asleep by MJ's side 😊
MJ couldn't able control himself šŸ˜‰
The scene was beautiful Mini šŸ‘

MJ found sleeping Tara lovely
She was embarrassed šŸ˜†

The guy was Arjun and Jairaj's friend son ...
Why he was after Tara !!?? 😔

Wow !! the song is very beautiful Mini 😊
And Tara's imagination ā˜ŗļø
Kya kya imagine karte hai yea log šŸ˜‰

Tara thought MJ is a bad man but her heart knows he is a good man šŸ˜›

Great update Mini šŸ‘
Continue dear ... 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
THANKS NICE WORK GREAT IAM LIKE YOUR STORY
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Beautiful update

Enjoyed reading it!!!

Beautifully executed...

Tara imagined MJ beside her...and I loved that scene , you described it beautifully!!!!

The goons were sent by Arjun...

So much mystery!!!!

Update soon Mini...

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter...

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Thank you nira

M glad you liked it

Mystery will be thre with arjun

Will update this weekend
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey finally read all parts.

This is beautiful specially the fifth one.

I just loved Tara imagining MJ besides her and I know soon she will come to know that he is not the bad man who want to kill her.

Between that who is this Arjun? I mean to whom you consider playing Arjun's character?

Continue soon.



thanks a lot dear

her heart knows somewhere that hes not behind all this

i was imagingin sham from ipkknd to play arjun

thanks a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

<font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" color="#cc6666">Nice start Mini

</font><font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" color="#cc6666">Barish ki boondein aur kisi ka saath</font><font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" color="#cc6666">romantic hota hai </font><font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" color="#cc6666">per jab MJ aur Tara sath hoon to thrilling aur passionate hojata hai sab kuch</font>

<font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" color="#cc6666">Lovely scene</font><font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" color="#cc6666">

</font>
<font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" color="#cc6666">New character Arjun
Nice

Tara ka sharmana uff
Aese sone ko mila dil mein ladoo phoot rahe honge
sharmana to formality hai bas😳😳😳</font><font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" color="#cc6666">

</font>
<font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" color="#cc6666">Oh to woh goons Arjun ke they
But mystery abhi baqi hai
Hmmm

Tara ki imagination kafi wild haiN
You are very good in romantic scenes
The way you describe it
I enjoyed it.</font>

<font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" color="#cc6666">continue soon</font>

<font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" color="#cc6666">Thanks Mini</font>
<font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" color="#cc6666">This part is very goodand you have done it beautifully.šŸ‘</font>
<font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" color="#cc6666"> šŸ¤—</font>
<font face="Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3" color="#cc6666">Piyar ki jhappi</font>





Thank you so much samreen

Yes i love writong rain sequences on mriara

Thry are so hot n romantic in rain

Arjun ke gundi the joinhobe kisnap kiya tga tara ko ayr usse laga ki mj ne kiya hoga but she knows somewhere hes not tye one

Thank you dear

šŸ¤— to u tu
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Khadeja

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#CC33FF">Sorry for my late comment

Wonderful Update ā­ļø

Rain and MriAra are very deadly combination 😳
Tara fallen asleep by MJ's side 😊
MJ couldn't able control himself šŸ˜‰
The scene was beautiful Mini šŸ‘

MJ found sleeping Tara lovely
She was embarrassed šŸ˜†

The guy was Arjun and Jairaj's friend son ...
Why he was after Tara !!?? 😔

Wow !! the song is very beautiful Mini 😊
And Tara's imagination ā˜ŗļø
Kya kya imagine karte hai yea log šŸ˜‰

Tara thought MJ is a bad man but her heart knows he is a good manšŸ˜›

Great update Mini šŸ‘
Continue dear ... 😃</font>




No problem khadeja

Thanks a lot

My fav is mriara n rain coz they sooo amizing

The reason will be out why hes is after her

Yes its one of my fav song

Tara sonewhere sure knows hes has a nice heart

Will be updating soon

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