*'Tu Jaane Na!!!'* ViCha FF updtd pg.44 prt 16 on 26th September

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Part 7...

Nice update !!!!!

Vichha kitne khush the ...

BT saba kabhi change nai ho sakti...

She came to party without invitation...

Chhavi ka gussa hona toh banata hai BT Freddy be sambhal liya sab

Saba kaise itne cheap comments kar sakti hai.

Chhavi ka reply adoption wala was damn good.

Faint hona was seriously sick action ...

Chhavi ka angry hoke party chhodna was not good.

Vahbiz or Freddy ka tease nice scene...

Achcha hua Freddy ne viraf ko bahar bula liya or use bata diya that chhavi left...

Ab kya karenge Mr.Patel kaise manayege unhien.

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Again superb update!!!!

Fab song u choosed...

Viraf was searching for her BT he didn't find her.

Upper se aise flashbacks my god viraf ki halat kharab hai...

Fb was.not good itni badi ladai achcha hua koi nai tha .

Guard bhi mast hai viraf pareshan hai or woh ebi ko yaad kar raha hai.

Kitna sweet dream that viraf ka BT dream me bhi propose pura na ho saka...

Viraf & Freddy ka convo was sweet .

Kitni achchi tarah se viraf ko sambhal liya...

Chhavi bhi kitne gusse me hai ek baar pehle baat toh kar leti...

Waiting for next .

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Samreen

@SamreenJ

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Awesomely written Vartika
👏👏👏
All songs and lines are superbly matched with each situation 👍🏼

Viraf was very depressed 🥺
Kiya kiya flash back arahe hain ussey😭

Aur jo dream acha tha usmein bhi piyar ka izhar nahin hopaya👎🏼

Yeh chhavi bhi na over reacting ki dukaan hai😡

Freddy ne kitne ache se viraf ko sambhala
Sachi love him he is a diamond ⭐️❤️

Nice update
Next update ka intezar rahega

Thanks dear for writing this.
🤗🤗🤗

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poorvi16

@poorvi16

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Thank u so much for a reminder msg actually I was a bit busy till yesterday. 😊 😊 😊 😊

Nice update. 👏 👏 👏 👏

I hate Saba, she is a bitch.😡 😡 😡 😡 She wants Viraf any how no matter how dirty she plays.😒 😒 😒 Chhavi is sad and I just loved the song. She is finally at her friend's place.🤔 🤔 🤔

Let's see what happens next and how Viraf Chhavi ko manata hai.

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varshita

@varshita

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Hey Vartu I am sorry that I am late but better late than never. 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

I enjoyed this update.😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 The high voltage drama and it's outcome as Chhavi left in anger. 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

The perfect thing was the song u chose and in the best way you presented.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 It's tough now for Viraf to manaofy Chhavi but I am sure he can do that.😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

So she has not gone to her house instead she chose her friend's home, hmmm interesting..

Continue fast.

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Samreen

@SamreenJ

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha


A big thank u Nira dear for such lovely comment.🤗🤗🤗

Kahe cofuse ho Vartika
Eee hum hain samreen 😆

Chalo khair hai
Koye nahin 😉

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arpita25

@arpita25

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Hey really nice update.👏 Finally in this update you chose the song which made the tittle Tu Jaane Na.😊
I was really sad with the happenings in this update (I mean all sad).😔 I hate Saba but I am surprised no one tried to find how come she came here when she was not invited in to the party.😕 My poor Viraf baby went in search of Chhavi but couldn't find her.🤔 I am happy she is not alone at that time as she needs some support badly. I am not sure how will Vini respond.😕 I love the kind of response he got from the watchman even he know him so well.😛 Do update fast.

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Once more sorry for late reply.😔 Sad but well written update by you.👏 You have written it very beautifully.👍🏼 I could feel the sadness in his thoughts. He almost reminded all the beautiful time he spend with Chhavi.🤔 Where did she go all of a sudden when he was trying to search her?😕 Oh haan you showed that she has reached at her friend's place but vo bhi wrong friend.😛 I mean if I am not wrong she is Vini na? 😉 She will never help her.😒 She will always accuse Viraf and try to make out the sense that she is right and Viraf ditched her.😡 But again my question is the same what is bothering her the most.😉 The lyrics of the tittle song of your FF is really touchy. I just loved the way that watchman recognized him and tried to help him. 😊

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 9 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Kahe cofuse ho Vartika
Eee hum hain samreen 😆

Chalo khair hai
Koye nahin 😉

sorry my mistake.😲 😲 I will edit it soon.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: Khadeja
Fabulous update ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
thanks Khadeja 😊 😊 😊

WoW !!! starting with 'Tu jaane na'...👍🏼

Viraf was being restless for not finding Chhavi 😒
Always happens it, they just become separated
Yes, because he loves her more than anything 😳 😳 😳

Why Chhavi didn't understand Viraf thought of her well being..😔
She didn't get his point...
She never gets it I think she doesn't want to get it.

She was disturbed about that Pracheen but that's not mean she should argue with her friend ...
Viraf was hurt totally that Chhavi had no feelings about him 😒
Yes, she could have listen to him silently before any judgment.

Viraf had gone to Chhavi's apartment 👍🏼

In the whole serious part the conversation with security guard was funny 😊
I just wanted to change the mood of everyone 😛 😛 😛

Chhavi has not returned...
It was obvious Viraf's anxiety 😔
He was worried actually he wanted to know how is she right now. 🤔 🤔 🤔

On the other hand Chhavi is hurt ...
She should know how despo Saba is 😵
But after all she saw them and now thinking something is between them as always 😲
She never uses her brain and neither she takes anyone's advice. 😔 😔 😔

Viraf has gone to sleep and dreaming about Chhavi 😊

It's good Freedy remind Viraf that he is a celebs and he just can't roaming like this ...👍🏼 👍🏼
It will good for now Viraf go back...
Yes, it doesn't suit his repo as being a celeb you always have to be cautious.

Chhavi has gone to Vinny 👍🏼
That's good after all she need someone by her side ...
Yes but not someone like Vini who was always anti ViCha 😡 😡 😡

The part is little sad but i know that is part of life...

You are doing your job graet 👏

Thank you dear for liking my work 😊 😊 😊

Update soon 😃