*'Tu Jaane Na!!!'* ViCha FF updtd pg.44 prt 16 on 26th September - Page 19

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

The song is very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
thank u Shai 😊 😊 😊

Finally the title track of your story and the timing couldn't be more apt than this!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Yes it was perfect for now.

Viraf is restless at not finding Chhavi!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

The song mirrors his feelings very well!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Always it happens that they become separated just as they are about to be together!!!!
He is always restless for her.😉 😉 😉

Viraf is thinking about the past when Chhavi had shouted at him but thank God no one was around!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Why doesn't Chhavi understand that Viraf is thinking of her well being??😕 😕 😕 😕

She is just not getting his point that he cares for her and cannot see her get hurt!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳
She never try to think with that point.🤔 🤔 🤔 She was just trying to get out his frustration.

She is disturbed over the incident with Pracheen but that does not mean that she would argue with her friend!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡

Viraf was so hurt when Chhavi said that she had no feelings for him!!!!
She was taking out her frustration not realizing how will it affect other. 🤔 🤔 🤔

He had started to fall in love with her even though he hadn't realized it himself yet!!!!❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
He realized it some how but don't know madam Chhavi kis duniye me hain? 😡 😡 😡

Finally he went to Chhavi's apartment to check!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

But she was not there and Viraf is wondering where is she??😕 😕 😕 😕

Obviously, specially when she is in that much upset mood. 😕 😕 😕

The convo with the security guard was funny and nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆

Yeah he knows Viraf na 😛 😛 😛

On the other hand, Chhavi is hurt and is angry at him!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

When she knows how despo Saba is then she should have smelt a rat at least!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Gusse k aage madam ka common sense kaam kahan karta hai?

Viraf's dream was so sweet and beautiful!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

😳 😳 😳

But it was interrupted bu Freddy's call and the proposal was left incomplete even in the dream!!!!

Yup wrong timing

It is good that Freddy shoved some sense into Viraf and reminded him of his celeb status!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

He just cannot wait outside her apartment like this and behave like a love sick puppy!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Freddy is a gem and he gave him the right advice to give her some time!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Obviously, as a friend he always knows what's good and what's not for his friend and tries his best to save him from any sort of problem. 😊 😊 😊

Chhavi has gone to Vinny's house and I really wish she had chosen someone else to go to!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Vinny is bound to brainwash her further against Viraf!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Ab kya kare? Us ko abhi ye samajh aani baaki hai. 🤔 🤔 🤔

This part is awesome!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Thank you Shaina for liking the update.🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

A sad and beautifully written update.
I loved how you used the song Tu jane nah
It matched perfectly with the scenes...
Thanks a lot that you liked my effort. 🤗 🤗 Tabhi is ka naam Tu Jaane Na rakha tha na. 😊 😊 😊

Viraf was tensed and Chhavi was sad.
You portrayed their mental turmoil nicely.
Viraf was right jab bhi kuch thik hone lagta hai kuch na kuch hota hai aur dono alag ho jate hai...
Thanks dear,😊 😊 😊 Sach me in dono k pyaare rishte ko kisi na kisi ki najar hi lag jati hai jaise.

Chhavi was angry with Pracheen and that is why she misunderstood Viraf and his love for her.
Par kahin aur ka gussa kahin aur nahi nikala jata na. 🤔 🤔 🤔

Viraf Chhavi ki apartment tak pahoch gaya
And gate keeper bas chalu ho gaya with "Apko kahi dekha hai..."
😆 😆 😆 He was concerned for her.

Viraf's dream...
But beech mei Freddy ke call...
Freddy was right he should think about his celeb image too.
Sab kuch sochna padta hai being a celeb.

Chhavi Vinny ke ghar gayi
Ab ye uski brainwash na kare!!!
She will regret later that why did she chose that place. 😛 😛 😛

Brilliantly written part!!!

Continue soon!! 😊

Originally posted by: kumari27

Part 6 ...

Wow ek birthday party me pehle ka flash back...

U started fb on good note...
thank you dear 😊 😊 😊

Viraf planned party for chhavi is very good surprise.

He called every one for this occasion ...
He wanted to make her happy and he was successful in doing it 😊 😊 😊

Yeh saba ko chhavi se problem kya hai.birthday wish nai kiya.

Dimag me kuch plan aur ho to kahan banegi dono ki?😡 😡 😡

Chhavi guessed right that party planned by viraf...

absolutely 😃 😃 😃

Yeah parcheen kyun aa gaya...

Kitna cute cake session tha use disturb kar diya parcheen ne.

Viraf was not happy so I m also not happy.

Us ko koi like nahi karta but vo hai hi aisa chipkoo kabhi bhi kahin bhi bin bulaye aa jata hai. 😡 😡 😡

Parchhen kitna self obssessd hai samajhta hai sabhi ladkiyan use hi pasand karti hai.

Yeah us ka dimag on the top jo rehta hai humesha.😡 😡 😡

Chhavi ne bhi achcha answer diya ki Vinny bhi shayad pyar karti hai...

Aur kya jab sab k liye aisa hi sochta hai to vo bhi karti hogi pyaar.😆 😆 😆

Achche khase surprise ka kabara kar diya...

He is a cursed person, jahan jayega bus tabahi karega. 😳 😳 😳

Parcheen na ata toh shayad viraf propose kar deta...

May be or may not be 😛 😛 😛

Originally posted by: kumari27

Part 7...

Nice update !!!!!

thanks dear 😊 😊 😊

Vichha kitne khush the ...

BT saba kabhi change nai ho sakti...
Haan ye hai tabhi to life me interest bhi bana rehta hai. 😆 😆 😆

She came to party without invitation...

Chhavi ka gussa hona toh banata hai BT Freddy be sambhal liya sab

Yeah Freddy has controlled some damage like a true friend 😊 😊 😊

Saba kaise itne cheap comments kar sakti hai.

Chhavi ka reply adoption wala was damn good.

Yes she is cheap and there is no doubt in that. 😡 😡 😡

Faint hona was seriously sick action ...

Chhavi ka angry hoke party chhodna was not good.

She should have give a chance to Viraf to say his point

Vahbiz or Freddy ka tease nice scene...

thanks dear 😃 😃 😃

Achcha hua Freddy ne viraf ko bahar bula liya or use bata diya that chhavi left...

He should have varna baad me Viraf bolta mujhe bataya kyoun nahi.

Ab kya karenge Mr.Patel kaise manayege unhien.

Originally posted by: poorvi16

Thank u so much for a reminder msg actually I was a bit busy till yesterday. 😊
It's fine sweetheart 😃 😃 😃

Nice update. 👏 👏 👏 👏
Thank u 😊 😊 😊

I hate Saba, she is a bitch.😡 😡 😡 😡 She wants Viraf any how no matter how dirty she plays.😒 😒 😒
Yeah she did it just to spoil their relationship. 😡 😡 😡

Chhavi is sad and I just loved the song. She is finally at her friend's place.🤔 🤔 🤔
Yup she is here finally. 😛 😛 😛

Let's see what happens next and how Viraf Chhavi ko manata hai.

Originally posted by: kumari27

Again superb update!!!!

Fab song u choosed...

Thank u my lovely friend 😊 😊 😊

Viraf was searching for her BT he didn't find her.

Upper se aise flashbacks my god viraf ki halat kharab hai...

Fb was.not good itni badi ladai achcha hua koi nai tha .
Yes whatever happened between them was between them only.😊 😊 😊

Guard bhi mast hai viraf pareshan hai or woh ebi ko yaad kar raha hai.
Acchi cheejin kaun bhool sakta hai but hiding his stress he smiled for him this thing make him Viraf. 😳 😳 😳

Kitna sweet dream that viraf ka BT dream me bhi propose pura na ho saka...
Yes wrong time of Freddy when he called. 😆 😆 😆

Viraf & Freddy ka convo was sweet .

Kitni achchi tarah se viraf ko sambhal liya...
Obviously that's why he is true friend of him. 😊 😊 😊

Chhavi bhi kitne gusse me hai ek baar pehle baat toh kar leti...

Na sun ne ki aadat hi hai us ki, last time bhi us ne yahi kiya tha.

Waiting for next .

Originally posted by: varshita

Hey Vartu I am sorry that I am late but better late than never. 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉
Yup very true 😆 😆 😆

I enjoyed this update.😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 The high voltage drama and it's outcome as Chhavi left in anger. 😆
You seriously enjoyed it??? 😛 😛 😛

The perfect thing was the song u chose and in the best way you presented.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 It's tough now for Viraf to manaofy Chhavi but I am sure he can do that.😉
He can as he is really the charmer.

So she has not gone to her house instead she chose her friend's home, hmmm interesting..
It was needed as she need someone this time.

Continue fast.

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Awesomely written Vartika
👏👏👏
All songs and lines are superbly matched with each situation 👍🏼
thanks a lot darling that you liked my effort. 😊 😊 😊

Viraf was very depressed 🥺
Kiya kiya flash back arahe hain ussey😭
AAyenge hi kyounki us ko dar lag raha hai ki kahin fir se vo Chhavi ko na kho de.

Aur jo dream acha tha usmein bhi piyar ka izhar nahin hopaya👎🏼
Ho jayega na...at least Chhavi ne mana to nahi kiya tha na? 😉 😉 😉

Yeh chhavi bhi na over reacting ki dukaan hai😡

Kabhi kisi ki baat sun ne ki aadat to hai nahi us ki. 😡 😡 😡

Freddy ne kitne ache se viraf ko sambhala
Sachi love him he is a diamond ⭐️❤️

Yeah, he should understand the whole situation first. 😔 😔 😔

Nice update
Next update ka intezar rahega
Thanks dear, I think u got that na? 😉 😉 😉

Thanks dear for writing this.
🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: arpita25

Hey really nice update.👏 Finally in this update you chose the song which made the tittle Tu Jaane Na.😊
Thanks a lot that you liked that and it has to be used after all it was with the tittle. 😊 😊 😊

I was really sad with the happenings in this update (I mean all sad).😔 I hate Saba but I am surprised no one tried to find how come she came here when she was not invited in to the party.😕
Us ki to aadat hi hai kabab me haddi ban jane ki. Irritating uninvited guest. 😡 😡 😡

My poor Viraf baby went in search of Chhavi but couldn't find her.🤔
Ha ab to jana bhi chahiye jab vo akele chale gayi hai vo bhi itne raat me. 😕 😕 😕

I am happy she is not alone at that time as she needs some support badly. I am not sure how will Vini respond.😕
Yes, friend's ki choice me abhi bahut kuch seekhna hai us ko.😉 😉 😉

I love the kind of response he got from the watchman even he know him so well.😛
😆 😆 😆

Do update fast.

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Once more sorry for late reply.😔
It's really fine dear 😊 😊 😊

Sad but well written update by you.👏 You have written it very beautifully.👍🏼
A big thank you again. It was destined to be happen.

I could feel the sadness in his thoughts. He almost reminded all the beautiful time he spend with Chhavi.🤔 Where did she go all of a sudden when he was trying to search her?😕
You will come to know that very soon.😉 😉 😉 Vo kabhi nahi bhoolega vo sab yaadein. 😭 😭 😭

Oh haan you showed that she has reached at her friend's place but vo bhi wrong friend.😛 I mean if I am not wrong she is Vini na? 😉 She will never help her.😒 She will always accuse Viraf and try to make out the sense that she is right and Viraf ditched her.😡
Really true, aise dost se hazar dushman hi acche hote hain jo kabhi aap ko sahi suggestion hi nahi dein. 🤔 🤔 🤔

But again my question is the same what is bothering her the most.😉
Ye to ab un ko khud hi sochna padega. 😉 😉 😉

The lyrics of the tittle song of your FF is really touchy. I just loved the way that watchman recognized him and tried to help him. 😊
Thanks and that was actually touchy 😊 😊 😊