**|| Another Spring ||** - ViCha SS Chapter-13 {UPDATED~PG 19} - Page 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Nira, actually it was a short update but worth of reading 😊 😊 😊 and thank god Parth didn't do anything which can have serious after effects.

But the thing he did I mean insulting in front of her friends was really irritating and disrespectful.😡 😡 😡 He is a shameless man.😡 😡 😡 How can he insult a lady like this with such cheap stuff? 😡 😡 😡

Thank god Viraf was there all time to support her when she need him the most he stood by her side and supported her totally. 😊 😊 😊

Parth is really a cheap man and he should have been beaten for his act.
But where did Chhavi go all of a sudden? 😕 😕 😕

Continue soon dear.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chapter !!!!
Truth & dare game kuchh toh hona hi tha!!

Wah priya proposed him !!!

Now it's chhavi turn or kya ankhon hi ankhon me ishara hua!!!

Propose or parth ko kabhi nai!!!

Lo ho gaya jiska intezaar tha!!!
Part showed his true face!!!

Kitni besharmi se chhavi ko galat sabit karna chahta that

Viraf ko do chaar de dena chahiye tha isko kaise insult ki inse chhavi ki!!!

Part itna hi achcha hota toh chhavi chodti hi kyun!!!

Ab kya hoga jab chhavi ki mata janegi!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Sorry I am late again
Its alright Khajju 😊
Fantastic update Di ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Thank you... 😳
Wow.. now there would be playing game 😊
I was thinking the Parth would do something blunder 🤢
And later we saw 😳
Yeah, Parth toh problem create karne keliye hi paida hua hai...🤢
So the first one was Priya 😊
And she already had proposed Tushar 😛
Wow !!!
😳
Now, it's Chhavi's turn 😊
Chhavi was little nervous 😳
But Viraf assured her and she took dare 😛
Awwee... They have so much understanding
Yes... 😳
The task was proposing Parth 🤢
Uff !!! the drunken Parth creating scene 😡
He had to take revenge na 😡
Aur kya!!!! 🤢
Chhavi had to announce the person's name as the situation went worse...
Wow!!! Viraf came beside her and confess their love
True gentleman 👍🏼
I like this part very much 😊
I'm glad that you liked that part... 😃
What was telling Parth !!!
He is such a cheap person 😡
It was expected, Viraf would be furious on him 😳
Cheapo... 🤢
Now, Chhavi was gone 😒
She must be feeling disgusted at the situation 😔
Yes...
But I am happy that everyone know about their relation now 😛
Now, one problem.. Chhavi's mother 😕
Chhavi's mother... 😕
Small but great update Di 👏 👏 👏
You know already I am fan of your writing 😃
So, need not tell how well you write ...
Just waiting for next chapter 😉




Yes , this update is a filler update...

Thank you so much Khajju for your comments...

Will update very soon... 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: irfan2

thank you so much and nice work



Thanks for the compliment... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the pm dear

Lovely to read your beautiful story

Miss them

Love to read about them

Wonderfully penned down

Abd i can go on and on with the praise coz i absolutely looovewedd r this syory sooo much
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey Nira, actually it was a short update but worth of reading 😊 😊 😊 and thank god Parth didn't do anything which can have serious after effects.

But the thing he did I mean insulting in front of her friends was really irritating and disrespectful.😡 😡 😡 He is a shameless man.😡 😡 😡 How can he insult a lady like this with such cheap stuff? 😡 😡 😡

Thank god Viraf was there all time to support her when she need him the most he stood by her side and supported her totally. 😊 😊 😊

Parth is really a cheap man and he should have been beaten for his act.
But where did Chhavi go all of a sudden? 😕 😕 😕

Continue soon dear.




Thank you Mahak for liking this Chappy...😊
Yes Parth is a shameless man and what he did was totally his plan...🤢
And about Chhavi...you will know this in my next update!!! 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Nice chapter !!!!

Truth & dare game kuchh toh hona hi tha!!
haan kuch toh hona hi tha...😉
Wah priya proposed him !!!
Yes...😳
Now it's chhavi turn or kya ankhon hi ankhon me ishara hua!!!
hahahaha...😆
Propose or parth ko kabhi nai!!!
Of course not!! 🤢
Lo ho gaya jiska intezaar tha!!!
Part showed his true face!!!
Aur kya!!!
Kitni besharmi se chhavi ko galat sabit karna chahta that
😡
Viraf ko do chaar de dena chahiye tha isko kaise insult ki inse chhavi ki!!!

Part itna hi achcha hota toh chhavi chodti hi kyun!!!

Ab kya hoga jab chhavi ki mata janegi!!!





Thank you Pooja for commenting...
Yes ab Chhavi ki mataji ka hi problem hai...



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com



Thanks for the compliment... 😊

THANKS FOR REPLY ME
M_Nira thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: miniapplepie

Thanks for the pm dear
It's my pleasure sweetie...!!!
Lovely to read your beautiful story
Thank you...
Miss them
Same here
Love to read about them
😳
Wonderfully penned down
Thank you...
Abd i can go on and on with the praise coz i absolutely looovewedd r this syory sooo much




Ohhh Mini so much praise...

Thank you so much for reading it and commenting on it...!!!😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER - 12

"Chhavi...stop yaar...!!" Viraf held her hand and turned her at once. He was panting. Chhavi stopped, but kept her eyes down.
"Look at me..." he said. A weird kind of gloominess was scattered in the front pathway of the house. Chhavi's lips trembled once, as if she was trying to suppress her inner agony.
"Chhavi just look at me." He placed his hand gently on her left cheek. She just looked at him. Her eyes were absolutely flat, as if they were painted on cardboard. They had no depth.
"Where are you going like this? Come with me...I'll drop you at your home..." He went to start his bike. But his words did not seem to reach her or if they did, she was unable to grasp their meaning.
"I will not go home." Her calm tone approached.
Viraf was startled,
"What...? Why...?"
"I just don't want to..."
Again her soulless voice rose.
"Then where will you go at this time of night...?"
"Anywhere...It doesn't matter...and why should I go back home...and what should I say to them? If I told them that Parth insulted me they will misunderstand me for sure. My Ma will think that maybe I had done something wrong..."
She replied.
"But Chhavi...you need to go somewhere where at least you can feel safe..."
"Then I can go to your house...?!"
She cut him off. "That is the only place where I can feel safe..."
"Alright...come.."
Without saying a word she just gave him a nod.

The night was deep and dark and the sky was cloudy, there was no place left for a single star. The empty road was looking like a stream floating in an enchanting surrealistic mist. Chhavi was sitting at the back holding him, her hair fluttering in the wind. She was not upset or angry, she was hurt. An unbearable melancholy was gathered in a clot in her throat. She never imagined that Parth could do that actually, he could insult her like that in a nasty way. Viraf was constantly watching her through the rear mirror, Chhavi had become like a statue, like an emotionless doll. Viraf knew that she needed to cry or open up, the way she was suppressing her pain it would only give her more and more anguish. He felt an inflammation of pain twirling in his chest.


The roar of the bike stopped in front of his house tearing the serenity of the night. The neighborhood was almost sleeping, except some of the houses from where a faint sound of TV was coming through the windows. Chhavi got down from his bike followed by Viraf. He opened the door and they went inside. The drawing room was dark, only a corner lamp was burning keeping one side of the room lighted.
"You sit here..." Viraf said to her and went forward to switch on the light. He took off his blazer and placed it on the chair.
"No need to turn on the lights, the light will hurt my eyes..." She said again in that uncanny tone while sitting.
Viraf stopped and looked at her, she was looking like an effigy in that darkness, something unreal.

"Chhavi..." He said and sat beside her.
"I knew it...I so knew it...he was planning to do something, but I never imagined that he could do that...he could insult me like that..." her shaky voice replied. One big tear spilled from her eyes and ran down her cheek. Once that first tear broke free, the rest followed in an unbroken stream. Viraf reached out and placed a hand on her trembling shoulder. In an instant she hugged him tightly and buried her face in his chest. He pressed her against him, her whole body was trembling, she continued to cry without a sound. Supporting her weight with his left arm, Viraf used his right hand to caress her soft hair and she held him even more tightly. Viraf waited, in that position, he waited for Chhavi to stop crying.

After a quiet moment, she removed her grasp and looked at him.
"Are you alright...?" Viraf asked, looking directly at her teary eyes. She nodded.

He wiped a small tear drop from her wet cheek.

"Now forget it Chhavi, he is the past, just a bad memory..." He whispered. A cloud burst directly outside.
"You sit here, I'm just coming..."
He went to get up from the sofa, but faced a hindrance as Chhavi held his hand.
"Don't go, please..." She seemed drained of energy, limp.

{Background Music :

"Zara zara behekta hai

mehekta hai aaj toh mera
Tan badan main pyaasi hoon
Mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein..."


He looked into her eyes and put his arms around her. Instead of saying anything she just leaned into him and felt the heat between them. Felt his body, his arm tight around her. And her body began to tremble with the same anticipation she had felt the first time they had kissed.

"Hai meri kasam tujhko sanam
Dur kahin na ja
Yeh doori kehti hai
Pass mere aaja re..."

It felt so right to be here, everything felt right, like magic. Lightning cut through the sky outside and the rain started. Chhavi lifted her head off his shoulder, looked at him with hazy eyes, and Viraf kissed her softly on the lips. The slightest shiver went through her shoulders and then she relaxed and closed her eyes for several seconds. The opaque lights of the corner lamp cast the shadow of her lashes on her cheek, and he could see them trembling at the outline.

"Yuhi baras baras
kali ghata barse..."

She looked at him and felt the moments of separation gradually dissolve into passion. Viraf got up from the sofa and carried her in his arms, thunder boomed loudly and another downpour started.

"Hum yaar bheeg jaye
Iss chahat ki
Barish mein..."

They came to the bedroom. He made her sit on the bed. She brought her hand to his face and touched his cheek, brushing it softly with her fingers. He leaned in slowly and kissed her again, still soft and tender.

"Meri khuli khuli lato ko suljhaye
Tu apni ungliyo se
Main toh hoon isi khwaish mein..."

And she kissed back. She closed her eyes and parted her lips as he ran his fingers up and down her arms, slowly, lightly. He kissed her neck, her cheek, her eyelids, and she felt the moisture of his mouth linger wherever his lips had touched.

"Sardi ki raaton mein

Hum soye rahe ek chadar mein..."

The world seemed dreamlike as she pulled back from him, the light of thunder setting her face aglow. Without speaking, he took off his tee, while watching her and listening to her soft breaths.

"Hum dono tanha ho

Na koi bhi rahe iss ghar mein

Zara zara behekta hai

Mehekta hai aaj toh mera

Tan badan main pyaasi hoon

Mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein..."

When he finally finished, he came closer to her and touched her face gently, and she smiled softly at him. Leaning in, she kissed his neck softly as she helped him remove his tee shirt.

"Music"

She lifted her head and allowed him to kiss her. With that, he slowly reached for her. He removed the strap of her dress gently and kissed her on her shoulder. He lifted her dress and ran his finger slowly across her belly before raising her arms and slipping it off.

"Tadpaye mujhe teri sabhi baatein

Ek bar aye dewaane.."

She felt short of breath as he lowered his head and kissed between her breasts and slowly ran his tongue up to her neck. His hands gently caressed her back, her arms, and she felt their heated bodies press together, skin to skin.


"Jhootha hi sahi

Pyaar toh kar..."

He ran his tongue along her neck while his hands moved over the smooth hot skin of her, down her belly, past her navel and up again. He was struck by her beauty. Her shimmering hair trapped the light and made it sparkle. Her skin was soft and beautiful, almost glowing in the chiaroscuro.

He felt her hands on his back, beckoning him. She lifted her head and kissed his chin and neck, breathing hard, licking his shoulders, and tasting the sweat that lingered on his body.

"Main bhooli nahi haseen mulakatein

Bechain karke mujhko..."

She ran her hands through his hair as he held himself above her, his arm muscles hard from the exertion. He lowered himself and lightly rubbed his chest against her, and she felt her body respond with anticipation.
He did this slowly, over and over, kissing every part of her body, listening as she made soft, whimpering sounds while he moved above her.


"Mujhse yun na

Pher nazar..."

He did this until she couldn't take it anymore. He looked at her.

"This is the first time na, so it will hurt...but I promise next time it won't..." he whispered.
She giggled and said mildly.

"I've faith in you..." and kissed on the tip of his nose.

"Roothega na mujhse

Mere saathiya yeh vaada kar..."

He started out slowly and when they finally joined as one, she cried aloud and pressed her fingers hard into his back. She buried her face in his neck and felt him deep inside her, felt his strength and gentleness, felt his muscle and his soul. She moved rhythmically against him, allowing him to take her wherever he wanted, to the place she was meant to be.

"Tere bina Mushkil hai

Jeena mera mere dil mein...

Zara zara behekta hai

Mehekta hai aaj toh mera

Tan badan main pyaasi hoon

Mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein..."

She opened her eyes and watched him in the dim light of the room; the curtains of the room were flowing in the crazy wild winds. The luster of lightning was sparkling every so often like a spell. She saw his body glisten with crystal sweat and watched as beads rolled down his chest and fell onto her like the rain outside. And with every drop, with every breath, she felt herself, every responsibility, every facet of her life, slipping away.

"Hai meri kasam tujhko sanam

Dur kahin na ja

Ye doori kehti hai

Pass mere aaja re..."

Their bodies reflected everything given, everything taken, and she was rewarded with a sensation she never knew existed. It went on and on, tingling throughout her body and warming her before finally subsiding, and she struggled to catch her breath while she trembled beneath him.

"Aaja re aaja re"

Exhausted, he lay down beside her. Her eyes fluttered open and she smiled and reached up to touch his face. He put his fingers to her lips, gently, to keep her from speaking, and for a long time they just looked at one another.


"Aaja re ...e...e..."

"I don't know how I could have lived without you for as long as I have. I love you, more than you can ever imagine and I always will..." he whispered to her.
"I love you too, and I can't live without you..." she said while burying her face into his chest. She wanted him, needed him now more than ever, like nothing she'd ever known.



TO BE CONTINUED. . .

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago

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