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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Nice update !!!

It was nice to see chhavi & her family happy .

Thank you Pooja... πŸ˜ƒ
Yes she is happy!!

Viraf bhi na apni maa ko jaane diya BT uski mom bhi bina viraf ka soche chali gai.

Viraf was right woh maa ko unki wajah se bheja !!!!
Haan...
Parth nai sudhar sakta kaise dekh raha that woh
πŸ˜†
Waah kya sawal kiya hai chhavi ne or viraf ne bhi khoob jawab diya...
😳
Romantic end!!!!!

Update soon



Yes will update soon!!!

Thank you Pooja for your lovely comments!!!! πŸ€— ❀️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Superb start Nira πŸ‘and sorry for late comment😭
So finally woh call chhavi keSIR ka thamein kuch dar gayi thiAur good news mila
Acha hai
Baley baley hogayi yeh to chhavi keliye
Its alright Di!!!! πŸ˜ƒ

Haan good news... 😊
Chaavi ki mom khush hogayi
Yeh bhi acha hai
πŸ˜›
Viraf kitna udas hoga uski mom jarahi hai
Aur mom bhi udas hai
Sad moment
But viraf's reply to his brother
Mind ko blow kerdiya
πŸ€ͺ
Shekhar ji bhi na
Superb hain
Sahi pukda chavi ko
Father are girls first boyfriend
Yeh bat yahan sahi suit kerti hai
I agree... πŸ˜‰
And papa is sach mein Too Much hain
I love him DIL se
Me too... 😳
Hmm party mein to uss parth ke sath jana tha na
Mein bhool gayi thi
Uske dil mein hai kiya
Bohot tough insan hai
Aur
Besharam bhi
Aur kya!!!!🀒
I love their house
Beautiful and classy
You described beautifully
Thank youπŸ˜ƒ
Chhavi decorations nahin viraf ko hi dhoond rahi thi
Naughty
πŸ˜†
Tushar bhi na
Kuch bhi

Chhavi's reaction

Chhavi kitni straight forward hai
I love her attitude
Haha...kuch jyada hi straight forward hai!!!! πŸ˜‰
Aww chhavi ko poochna tha woh kaisi lug rahi hai
Cuuutteee
Viraf bhi na itna hotty aur sensual hone ki kiya zaroorut hai
True!!!! ☺️
Abhi to romantic mood howa tha aur
Chapter khatam

Not fair Nira
πŸ˜›
Loved every moment of it!!
Continue and keep up with ur good work! It's really amazing update.πŸ€—


Hahaha...aage aur bhi bahot kuch hai , sare shikayatein dur ho jayegi!!! πŸ˜‰
Thank you so much Di for your comments!!!!
Will continue soon!!! πŸ€— ❀️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Nira nice update. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I have some doubts over Parth's intentions as I think he can do anything big more to that Urmilla is in his favor.

Chhavi's dad is really nice.😊 😊 😊 Both of his parents are happy to know that now she can do a job and in this way she will be self dependent. 😊 😊 😊 He teased Chhavi and as being his father he know her well. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

I didn't like him coming in the party with Chhavi.😑 😑 😑 Only Viraf had the rights to come with him and romance with her
but I know the situations are complicated.

I wanted to see them romancing but u took that moment away from us and wrote to be continued in that part. πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Viraf was really mesmerized to see Chhavi in that diva avtaar. I want to see them romancing more and more. 😳 😳 😳

Continue soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Sorry for late comment Di πŸ˜”
Its alright Khajju 😳
Marvelous update Di ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Thank you πŸ˜ƒ
Chhavi was happy and woke up early πŸ˜›
She gave the good news to Urmila πŸ˜ƒ
She was proud of her daughter and should be 😊
😊
Viraf's Maa was going and he agreed for his Maa 😊
After all he genuinely loves his mother πŸ˜›
He was going to miss her πŸ˜’
Of course, he will!!!! 😊
Shekhar teased Chhavi about the party πŸ˜‰
This father-daughter bonding is really lovely ❀️
And you portrait it very well Di πŸ‘
I'm glad that you liked that scene!!! 😊
Shekhar knows his daughter very well and gussied the good news πŸ˜ƒ
I hope very soon Chhavi can give the first one good news πŸ˜‰
Hope so... πŸ˜‰
Parth had come to take her to the party 😳
Who told him to come ??? 😡
And how he was drooling her 😑
He forgot that their engagement cut off... What a lie !!!
What do you expect from a guy like Parth?!
Ok, finally they reached πŸ˜›
Priya welcomed then warmly 😊
Chhavi was observing decor but I think she was searching Viraf πŸ˜‰
You are right!!! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
Viraf was looking dashing
Oh !! Chhavi was mesmerized by her man 😳
And when their eye met
😳
Uff !! Tushar's question
And everyone called that Parth her husband 🀒
I know they don't know anything but...
Chhavi was irritated and replied angrily ...
Yes!!!! πŸ˜†
Chhavi is so straight forward πŸ˜›
Directly went to talk Viraf πŸ˜ƒ
She asked how she was looking, of course she wore this just for him πŸ˜‰
O ho !!! Viraf froze by her beauty 😳
❀️
Viraf flirted with her 😳
This scene was so romantic
Oh ! who called 😳

Great update Di πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

And waiting for next πŸ˜‰



Thank you Khajju for you lovely comments!!! πŸ€—

Will update soon!!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey Nira nice update. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I have some doubts over Parth's intentions as I think he can do anything big more to that Urmilla is in his favor.

Chhavi's dad is really nice.😊 😊 😊 Both of his parents are happy to know that now she can do a job and in this way she will be self dependent. 😊 😊 😊 He teased Chhavi and as being his father he know her well. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

I didn't like him coming in the party with Chhavi.😑 😑 😑 Only Viraf had the rights to come with him and romance with her
but I know the situations are complicated.

I wanted to see them romancing but u took that moment away from us and wrote to be continued in that part. πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Viraf was really mesmerized to see Chhavi in that diva avtaar. I want to see them romancing more and more. 😳 😳 😳

Continue soon.



Glad that you liked this update!!!! πŸ˜ƒ

Yeah of course!!!

Parth can do anything!!! 🀒

Yes, situations were complicated so she had to go with Parth!!!

Yeah, I know😳

We all want to see them romancing more and more!!!!
Thank you Mahak for your lovely comments!!!

Will update soon!!! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 11


When Chhavi came back to the hall, it had totally changed. A big table was situated in the middle and Tushar and Salil were arranging the chairs.

"What is this? What is happening...?" Chhavi asked while sitting down.

"We are going to play truth or dare..." Priya replied and placed an empty beer bottle in the middle.

"Hey Parth..come na..." Salil exclaimed from there. Chhavi turned and saw him in the drinking parlour.

"You guys play, I'm just coming. Last drink.." He held his glass high. Chhavi shook her head and turned forth.

"Ok! Everybody has come na?" Malvika's sharp tone rose, she took a glance around the room once. "I'll do the first spin..." She said with excitement.

"Go ahead..." The boy next to her encouraged her.

She spun the bottle; and the bottle stopped directed towards Priya.


Everybody clapped and some of them whistled.

"So Priya truth or dare...?" Malvika was too excited.

"Truth..." She replied giving her a small nod.

Malvika took one look at Tushar and said, "So tell us how did Tushar propose to you?"

The hall burst out with hullabaloo. Priya chuckled.

"Actually, he had never proposed to me, it was me who proposed first!"


The girls from the room started laughing.

"Yaar, what the hell man? You had never proposed?" Salil asked, looking at Tushar.

"Arree!" Tushar took a second to think before giving them an explanation. "It was so sudden...that is why." He scratched his head.

"So you have to take dare and you have to propose to her..." Viraf said with a smile.

"Now stop it guys, it's my turn." Priya said and spun the bottle and it stopped facing Chhavi.

"Truth or dare...?" Priya asked.

Before she could say anything, everybody from the room started shouting with "Dare", "Dare."


"This truth thing is very boring, take dare..." Neil said while sitting down facing her.

Chhavi understood that she had to take dare, she looked at Viraf from the corner of her eyes. He gave her a nod.

"Ok..ok dare."

"So you have to say I love you to your would be husband..."

"Wow! Now this is something interesting..." Someone commented from the back.

Chhavi became numb for a moment, she looked at Viraf who too was in a shock hearing this sudden proposal, his smile was fading away.

"Arre say to Parth na! What are you thinking...?" Priya asked, she was surprised to see her so flabbergasted.

"C'mon! Chhavi, don't be shy..." The room started encouraging her with claps.

"Priya..." Chhavi gulped down the rest of her sentence, because actually there was nothing she could use to clarify her problem.

"Chhavi, what is the..." But she stopped as Parth's voice came like a sharp shaft.

"Why would she say to me? I'm not her would-be husband. Am I Chhavi?" He said, looking directly at her. He was trying to walk, but his legs were tottering.

The rest of the members of the room shared a surprised glance with each other.

"What do you mean? Are you drunk...?!" Shruti couldn't believe her ears. Parth and Chhavi had been together for several years and now it was completely unbelievable to assume things like this. Parth was still holding his glass in his hand.

"Does it matter baby??? She has seriously broken up with me because..." He turned and faced them all, "Because, she is in love with someone else..." Parth gulped down the rest of the drink and put the glass on the table with a bang.

"Really Chhavi? I can't, believe, you are in love with someone else. With whom..?" Tushar asked.

"The way she was reacting then, I already had a feeling that there is something unusual..." Salil gave his sarcastic comment, which made the situation more grumpy.

Chhavi was in a state from where she couldn't even escape, now she could understand why Parth was so calm that day and even today in the car, because he was planning to insult her in this party. She tucked a loose strand of hair behind her ear.

"Yes, actually..." She got up from the chair and was about to tell the truth when she felt a warm touch on her hand, she turned her face at once and saw Viraf who was standing beside her.

"Actually Parth it's a very personal matter, but if you insist...I think I should give you the answer on behalf of her..." He stopped for a moment and then added.

"It's me..." The hall was covered in pin-drop silence.

"What...?" A faint expression came from Neil's side.

"Yeah it's Viraf...I'm in love with Viraf..." Chhavi said, as Viraf held her close.

"You both are...but...we didn't know...from when..." Priya was stunned.

"It's a long story...I'll tell you later..." Chhavi replied.

"Why only her Chhavi, tell me too nah...!" Again Parth's fuddled tone rose, "What he did to you in particular, which I couldn't...?!" An indecent smile played on his lips. He came one step forward to her.

"Parth..!!!" She growled, "You are insulting me."

"Oh really...!!!! I'm insulting you? And what about me sweetie...??" He asked gritting his teeth. "Oh, I know, Actually, I've gone old, so you need a new partner..."

"Parth..." Viraf screamed, "Don't you dare insult her." His rageful voice shut all the voices in the room.

"Cool down dude..." Parth placed a hand on his shoulder gently, "She is too good na...?" He winked.

Viraf grabbed his collar at once, "How dare you...?"

Salil, Tushar, Neil and everybody from the hall came running towards them as Viraf was almost going to beat him up.

"Leave him, Viraf, leave him..." Salil exclaimed while trying to stop him.

"Shame on you Parth...don't you have any sense of ethics? You just can't insult a girl like this..." Tushar shook his head looking at him.

"Chhavi...Chhavi..." Malvika's sharp tone came as a halt to their mayhem which made them all turn back and they saw Chhavi who was leaving the room with her steady steps.

"Chhavi...wait...listen...!!!!" Viraf exclaimed, he looked at Parth and removed his hand from his collar, and ran behind her.

TO BE CONTINUED. . .
Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry I am late again

Fantastic update Di ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Wow.. now there would be playing game 😊
I was thinking the Parth would do something blunder 🀒
And later we saw 😳

So the first one was Priya 😊
And she already had proposed Tushar πŸ˜›
Wow !!!

Now, it's Chhavi's turn 😊
Chhavi was little nervous 😳
But Viraf assured her and she took dare πŸ˜›
Awwee... They have so much understanding

The task was proposing Parth 🀒
Uff !!! the drunken Parth creating scene 😑
He had to take revenge na 😑

Chhavi had to announce the person's name as the situation went worse...
Wow!!! Viraf came beside her and confess their love
True gentleman πŸ‘πŸΌ
I like this part very much 😊

What was telling Parth !!!
He is such a cheap person 😑
It was expected, Viraf would be furious on him 😳

Now, Chhavi was gone πŸ˜’
She must be feeling disgusted at the situation πŸ˜”

But I am happy that everyone know about their relation now πŸ˜›
Now, one problem.. Chhavi's mother πŸ˜•

Small but great update Di πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
You know already I am fan of your writing πŸ˜ƒ
So, need not tell how well you write ...
Just waiting for next chapter πŸ˜‰

Edited by Khadeja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice start NiraπŸ‘

Wow truth and dare
Wah priya proposed tushar
Interesting

Viraf ke ishaare bhi samajh mein ate hain
Bohot khoob

Dare choose kiya
Kafi daring hai Chhavi

Parth bhi na bohot chalu hai
Koya soacha per Viraf ne sara plan chopat kerdiya

Per parth is very ugli and selfish
Usko aik do punches to milne chahiye they

Inna munna sa update but interesting tha

Atleast vicha confessed their love
And I am happy!

Aub parth aur chhavi ki mom kiya kareinge
Isko janne ka intezar rahega

Thanks nira update keliye
Keep writing like this
πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Nice start NiraπŸ‘
Thank you Di😳
Wow truth and dare
Wah priya proposed tushar
Interesting
😳
Viraf ke ishaare bhi samajh mein ate hain
Bohot khoob
hahahaha... πŸ˜›
Dare choose kiya
Kafi daring hai Chhavi
haan daring toh hai... πŸ˜†
Parth bhi na bohot chalu hai
Koya soacha per Viraf ne sara plan chopat kerdiya
haan... πŸ˜†
Per parth is very ugli and selfish
Usko aik do punches to milne chahiye they

Inna munna sa update but interesting tha
Thank you So much Di...😊
Atleast vicha confessed their love
And I am happy!
😳
Aub parth aur chhavi ki mom kiya kareinge
Isko janne ka intezar rahega

Thanks nira update keliye
Keep writing like this
πŸ€—





Thank you so much Di for your comments

Will update soon...!!!! πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 9 years ago
thank you so much and nice work

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