**|| Another Spring ||** - ViCha SS Chapter-13 {UPDATED~PG 19} - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Superb start👏

Thank you Di...😊
Chhavi bhi na
she feel safe and comfortable with Viraf😳
AWWW just love it
He was okay with it
sitauation hi aesa hai
Haan Viraf ke ghar se jyada safe aur kya ho sakta hai... 😳
Chhavi is upset and it is obviuos😡
she tightly hugged him and cry
Viraf ka support mila aur thora aur waqt bitana hai
Aur Background music
kiya baat hai kafi sensational hai
Haan Di jahaan ViCha honge wahaan sensation toh hoga hi... ☺️
Again they hugged and feel each other 😳😳

From now I am speechless
The way you wrote it, it holds my interest, curiosity and attention😃
Uff really enthralling, enchanting and captivating.
Thank you so much Di... 😃
Now I am more falling in love with ANOTHER SPRING
I absolutely adore and it's always great to read your updates⭐️
Thank you... It means a lot... Thank you so much!! 😊
Really powerful update Nira👍🏼
you took me on the beautiful and smooth ride Nira

A BIG THANKS to you
👏

Need next update thora sa juldi
Ab to dil ki bechaini aur beqarari berh gayi hai
🤗




Will try to give update soon

And a big hug to you as you liked it and read it...
🤗 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Amazing update👏

Chhavi is update & she shld be...
This parth really mad..
.Bt parth ki wajah se WO hua Jo aise mumkin nai tha itni jaldi😳

Wonderfull song selection😳
Actually this song increased the sensation...

Great work!!! U did full justice to the romantic night...😳😳
Next update jaldi karna



Yeah now Parth is only want revenge so he did that...

Haan...true!!!

Thank you Pooja...

Yes, will update soon...

Thanks for reading and commenting... 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey Nira, thanks for update.
Thank you Mahak... 😊
It was sizzling and hot update..full of passion and need of love, support and trust for each other.
😊
Any girl would feel hurt if someone will try to put her down in this way. Parth is really a male chauvinist man who never respect a woman.
Yeah...true!!!
She was in state of a shock which made her silent. Her decision of not going her home was so right as she needs someone besides her at that time to support her and her decision.
And Viraf was the only person who could support her at that moment!!
She was emotionally drained out and only Viraf could have supported her. They are now one with their souls entwined and their love for each other will get deeper with it.
😳
All the love scenes were super hot and you chose one of my favorite songs which I thought once to use in one of my FF but couldn't use it for some reason.
It's my favourite song too...
Viraf loves her truly and will always support her.
Yes... 😊
Now let's see how her mom reacts when she comes to know that she has broken her relationship with Parth.
Yeah... 😕
Continue soon.




Thank you Mahak for reading and commenting

Will update soon...😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja



☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Mesmerizing Update Di 😳
Thank you Khajju 😊
Chhavi was so distress ...
But Viraf was there to pacify her 😊
Good Chhavi had decided go Viraf's home not to her home..
Then she would become more upset
Yes, Viraf's house was more safe than her own...
Chhavi was really shocked ...
When she opened up, she had broken down 😒
But Viraf soothed her very well..
He was right Parth is just her past ..
True...And we should forget about our past!! 😊
Chhavi just wanted to be his arms..
And the sensation had started between them 😳
Correct!! 😳
They just lost in each other by each passing second ...
The song is very appealing 😉
And it suited with the situation very well ..⭐️
😳 😳 😳
The love scenes were really passionate and sensual ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
You described them very well 👏
Thank you...
They became one spiritually and physically 😳
Their love have became more deep ...❤️ ❤️ ❤️
True!! 😊
I have become fan of your writing more 😳
You are just awesome Di ⭐️
Thank you so much Khajju...Itna praise!!! *Blushing* 😳
This update was really outstanding 👏 👏 👏
Thank you
Try to update soon 😉





Will update soon

Thank you for reading and commenting!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arpita25

Hey really a hot and passionate update.😳 I am happy that finally Chhavi took a right decision and Viiraf is there to support her in all ups and downs in her life.👍🏼 Parth is really a disgusting man.😡 Such man always want to let the wo is omen down and for satisfying their male ego.😡 Update soon.




Thank you Arpita.

Yes, They are always there for each other!!

Will update soon...

Thank you for reading and commenting!! 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: irfan2

very nice update thanks and update soon.





Thank you Irfan... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER - 13


The morning was unusually pleasant when Viraf woke up under the blanket. The sun had risen by that time and there was a soothing atmosphere after yesterday's rain. He turned his face and found Chhavi sleeping peacefully, her face buried into his chest. His lips curved in a smile automatically. She was looking like a baby. There was a peaceful silence in the room as the sun rays hit random spots on her body. There wasn't a part of that body that he hadn't caressed or touched or loved, but yet he knew that there were a lot of things that he had to discover, there was still more that he had to learn and love about this girl who had totally changed his entire world.

He leaned over, leaving a butterfly kiss on her forehead before getting up. But as his lips touched her forehead, she went up slightly and opened her eyes gradually.

"Good morning." He said in a whisper.

"Morning." She smiled, looking at him.

Things had changed. Above all, she had changed. Being with him, being in love with him, was like finally realizing that she was indeed alive. There had been a curtain that had prevented the light to sweep in and shine, which was removed now and was making everything much brighter.

"What, say something!" He said softly while removing the strands of her hair, which were covering half of her face.

"Nothing," she said and turned on his side, "Hey! where is your mother?" She asked quite randomly.

He rose up on one elbow.

"Ma has gone to her elder son's house."

"Ohhh! You didn't tell me that you have an elder brother too..." She goggled her eyes.

"Because this is not an important matter," he replied casually.

"Ok, so it means that we both are the only living persons in the house?" A child like grin covered her lips.

"Isn't it interesting?" He winked.

"I wonder whether you sent her there by yourself or not?!" She asked with a pseudo curiosity.

"But why would I do that?" He frowned.

"You know!! To take advantage!" She said as normally as possible while suppressing a severe giggle.

"Ohhh!" He raised his eyebrows, "Advantage!, you are so clever! Tell me one thing, how did you guess that?" He asked with concentrated eyes.

"Are you serious..." She was abashed.

"Yes! I'm serious, actually I did that so that I could take full advantage of you!"

"Really?" She said almost teasing him.

"Really!" He said in a husky voice and leaned forward to kiss her.

"Wait!" She tried to stop him, "Viraf, I've to go home." She tried to get up by pushing him back, but he held her hands and said in a whisper.

"Go then! Who is stopping you?"

She could feel that unbearable rush of heat in her veins. His warm breath was almost fanning her. Their lips were an inch apart from each other, when the doorbell cried out, tearing the moment in a brutal way.
They both jumped up abruptly and a totally disappointed Viraf lay down beside her.

"WTH!" He said dejectedly. Chhavi giggled seeing his facial expression.

"What is so funny about it?"

"Accha Baba! Go and check at least who has come." She said and got up wrapping herself with the bed sheet, took her belongings from the corner of the bed and left for the washroom.


When she came back from the washroom Viraf was not in the room, she came outside. This was the first time she was here. It was quite big for two people, a touch of sheer nostalgia scattered in every nook and corner of the house. A sweet smell of freshly cooked food was floating in the air. She saw the kitchen at the end of the corridor. She reached there and saw Viraf was making something.

"What are you doing?" She asked while entering.

"Making breakfast for you..." He replied without turning back.

"So you can cook too?" She asked, raising her eyebrows. "Impressive," she stated, standing beside him.

"I have many such talents to make you impressed!" He smirked.

"You know any girl would fall for you."

"I know, you are the best example of that."

"Very funny," she made a face. "What are you making?" She tiptoed to see the half made pancakes on the griddle.

"Pancakes..."

"Wow, I love pancakes." she said, giving him a smile.

Viraf placed the two plates on the dining table and they sat facing each other. Chhavi took the fork and knife to cut the pancakes into pieces, but stopped randomly and asked.

"By the way who had come then?"

"Just regular milk and newspaper," he replied.

"Ohhh."

"Now eat quickly or else it'll get cold." He smiled.

She nodded.


They came to the outside of the house. It was time for her to go home at last. His bike was standing in-front of the gate. She stood for a moment and witnessed the usual bustling morning. One or two curious eyes were already set on her.

"So, you are finally going?!" Viraf asked, leaning over the bike.

Chhavi stepped forward.

"Is there any option left?" She said in a gloomy voice. "You know today is the perfect day and I think I should tell my parents about us." She added.

"I know it'll be tough." He held her hands.

"No, it wouldn't, because I love you, and you are the most important for me beyond everything." Chhavi said looking in his eyes.

And as soon as she completed her words, they felt a presence beside them. Viraf turned at once and saw the same boy from Savitri's office. The boy stood there facing Chhavi for a second and then turned at Viraf and said in a suppressed voice, "Madam wants to see you, she said it's very urgent." He again looked at Chhavi who was a little confused with the mention of 'Madam' for the first time.

"Anything else?" Viraf's firm voice startled him back and he shook his head.

"I'll meet her." The boy stared at Chhavi some more and then left.

"Who is this Madam?" Chhavi asked in a confused tone.

"She is a political personality, this area is in her control." He replied while giving her the extra helmet. She wore it and tried to fasten the chin strap, but after several tries she couldn't fix it properly. She looked at Viraf with a cute pout, he couldn't control his smile seeing her expression and fixed the strap, when her soft and tensed voice rose.

"Viraf, why she wants to meet you?"

"Hey! It's nothing serious, actually she has many issues with our locality so it must be for this..." He tapped her face gently.

"Should we start?"

Chhavi nodded.

The door of their flat was wide open. She frowned because she sensed that something very bad had happened. She entered gradually and saw her mother sat there with a pale face and her father was standing beside the window.

"What happened?" She asked almost in a dried tone.

Her voice created a mild excitement in the room. Urmila looked at her and then looked towards the front.
Chhavi didn't notice that there was another person present at the room too.

"Hi Chhavi, how are you?"

She turned at once to the direction from where this greeting came and she felt as if her heart would stop beating.



TO BE CONTINUED. . .

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mast update.. 👏 👏 👏

I just loved the refreshing effect in your FF of the morning when they got up. Having your loved one around you makes you feel fantastic and makes your day.

Viraf was really naughty and I just love the passion in him. Their unsaid commitment for each other was just beautiful.

Who the hell was disturbing them when they were about to romance? Who was that guy? Is Viraf not hiding anything from Chhavi?

I just love this lovely and cute Viraf who was cooking breakfast for her. She was really right any girl would fall for such guy. People always poke in other's lives without seeing theirs.

She was right she must not waste more time and tell about it to her parents.

Why that man of that madam was staring at Chhavi? Why was he taking so much interest in Chhavi? Is Savitri in love with Viraf, obviously not I think. I don't want her to hurt Chhavi.

This must have been Parth who want to spoil Chhavi's life's calmness. After all this man ego can't accept that a woman rejected him and chose a better man.

Continue soon darling.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice start
👏
What a beautiful morning

Subah ki kiran ke saath uska chehra khila khila
Teri bahon ka suroor aur meri mohhabat ka nasha mila howa

Chalo mom ka jana acha hi howa

Kuch hum aikleye kuch tumhari batoon ka saath
Koye rehta darmiyan to yeh mosam na hote

Ab yeh kon agaya jisne romance pe tala lugadala😡
Duniya badi berahem hai

Milan ke mosam mein youn chan se kisi ajana
Jese behti lehron mein toofan ke badal

Viraf ne nashta bhi bana dala
Chhavi to sach mein lucky hai then

Q na tum per piyar aye
Tum ho hi aese jaanaan

Acha hai chhavi ajj sabko butade
This is the right time actually👏

Aik to yeh Savitri viraf ko hi bulati rehti hai
Ab kiya kaam hai woh bhi urgent?
Aur yeh sahab itna ghoor q rahe hain
Savitri ne jasoosi kerne rukha hai kiya?

Gher pe yeh zaroor Parth hoga
After all itni asani se kaise chup reh sakta hia
Lugta hai buda wala dhamaka hone wala hai😲

Beautifull and romantic update Nira
🤗
Please continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great start!!!
Smooth & nice morning!!!!

Viraf is adoring her sleeping beauty!!!

Oh he wants to learn some more thing for chhavi...

Forehead kiss is too romantic...

Itne romantic environment me bell kisne bajai...


Its always be fun to imagine viraf cooking for chhavi...

Savitri madam irritate kar rahi hai...yeh banda itna chhavi ko ghoor kyun raha tha...something fishy...

Yeh parth toh nai hai jisne welcome kiya...


Superb update...

Continue soon if possible

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