ViCha FF - from reel to real Chapter 15 PART 2 UPDATED PG 18 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
Loved it and enjoyed the argument update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: mastaTmohi

๐Ÿคฃ loved it. Update soon!! ๐Ÿ‘


Thanks so much lovely! โค๏ธ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sathisuzz

Loved it and enjoyed the argument update soon.


Yay glad you loved it! Yep sure will ๐Ÿ˜Šโค๏ธ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

It was really really cute to see Chhavi jealous!!!!๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

She even called the woman who Viraf was laughing with chudail in her mind without finding out who she was!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

I love the way she barges into Viraf's dressing room without knocking!!!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Yeh Saba itna sawal kyun pucch rahi hai??๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค”

Saba has like no other job but to interfere where she shouldn't be hmmph ๐Ÿค”

Viraf had to blab about the pancakes to Saba!!!!

Why can't he just be a bit more careful about what he says??๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Chhavi should not have said that about the pancakes as it was bound to make Saba suspicious!!!!๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค”

Waise Viraf wasn't too far away from the truth when he made that remark about Chhavi's hero entry!!!๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

It is a big issue if Saba comes to know of this and Viraf should really be more discrete!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

It was sooo cute when Viraf comforted Chhavi after her outburst!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

He is just so sweet and adorable and understands her fears!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

What exactly is Viraf planning??๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•I hope it is not something too crazy!!!!๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค”

Viraf I know you watched that movie in your teens but you are not Raj of Dilwale Dulhania Le Jayenge!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I just hope he doesn't do anything that involves Chhavi's parents!!!๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜”

Well you'll just have to wait and see what his plan is ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

This part is very good!!!!๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Thanks Shaina โค๏ธ




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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Another lovely update

Please sub acha acha rukhna
Hope ke surprise acha ho
Chavi ki jealousy bhi kamal hai

Raha bhi na jaye aur saha bhi na haye
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Hey Shagufta just read ur FF which is superb and loved it's tittle more which is reel to real.

We normally read the fics based on reel life but only a few people dare to write it with so much beauty.๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

I am a Viraf and Chhavi fan as well but couldn't watch it properly when it telecasted first time but now I am watching it properly and loving this pair.๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Your FF is awesome and keep on updating me and do pm me regularly.๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks so much Shai for suggesting me this FF.
๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

<font size="2">Hey Shagufta just read ur FF which is superb and loved it's tittle more which is reel to real. </font><font size="2"><font size="2"> </font></font><font size="2"><font size="2"><font size="2"></font></font>

We normally read the fics based on reel life but only a few people dare to write it with so much beauty.๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

I am a Viraf and Chhavi fan as well but couldn't watch it properly when it telecasted first time but now I am watching it properly and loving this pair.๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Your FF is awesome and keep on updating me and do pm me regularly.๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks so much Shai for suggesting me this FF.</font>
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Hi Mahak!
Thank you so much for reading and taking the time out to also leave behind this sweet comment!
I'm glad you enjoyed it and I will definitely pm you when I put up my next update ๐Ÿ˜Š
Aah well they say it's better late than never so it's great that you're loving ViCha just as much as we do over here.
โค๏ธ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Hey guys,

Back with Chapter 11! This was a tough chapter to write so that's why the update took extra long this time. Anyways enjoy and as always, leave behind your thoughts!
Recap: Viraf has something planned regarding his secret relationship with Chhavi. Will his plan be successful or will things go sour between ViCha?

Viraf's POV:

It was a real challenge trying to coax Saba into giving me a couple of days off from shoot and it was even harder to convince Chhavi about why I was taking a break. After the shoot had wrapped up, I was hoping that Chhavi had gone home by herself because if I had to drive her home then she would do everything possible to get the reason out of me. I tiptoed to my dressing room, poking my head around every corner, hoping to dodge the eyes of Chhavi just in case she had been waiting for me. Her dressing room door was wide open and the lights were turned off too so it was pitch black inside. I felt slightly relieved knowing that I would escape the interrogation queen and I proceeded to stroll in my room casually. I flicked on the light switch and a scream emanated from my mouth when I saw Chhavi standing in front of me.

"Arey kya hua? Did I scare you?" Chhavi said while laughing at my scared face.

"Yaar obviously I got scared! I didn't think I was dating a bhootni!" I retorted as I placed my hand over my heart, waiting for the heart to beat normally again.

"Ok ok I'm sorry that I scared you but even I didn't know I was dating a scardey-cat either. Now tell me why are you taking time off shoot?" She said while grabbing me by the shoulders and forcing me to sit down on the bed.

"Errr Pune jaa rahi hoon main isliye. You know it's my niece's b'day so I thought I would surprise her," I said nervously hoping that would be enough to stop her from probing further.

"Oh accha that's so sweet! She will love that surprise but Pune is only about two and half hours by road so it's not really necessary for you to take more than a day off. Mujhse kuch chupa rahi ho kya?" She asked while she placed herself next to me on the bed.

"Arey Sherlock Holmes ki maa, actually Maa has requested that I stay a bit longer. Apparently kuch jaroori kaam hai jo mujhe karna hai," I said as I pulled her in for a side hug.

I actually wasn't lying this time and with Chhavi's confused face, even I began to wonder why my mother had specially requested that I prolong my stay in Pune. For some weird reason, I wasn't getting good vibes from this request but I have to go if I want my plan to work.

"Hey I'll drop you home and I have to set out for Pune tonight as well toh jaldi karo," I said nudging Chhavi who was falling asleep in my arms.

Through the whole drive from here to her house, I was silently praying that she wouldn't ask me any questions about my Pune trip and to my relief, I found her dozed off in the passenger's seat with her mouth slightly ajar. I pulled up near her house and called her gently to wake up.

"Oh! Hum ghar pahoch gaye kya? Was I snoring?" She asked me while rubbing her eyes profusely.

"Nahi mera sleeping beauty toh snore nahi kartha but she keeps her mouth slightly open to catch the mosquitoes flying around," I said as I lifted her out of my car in my arms.

I planted her feet down on the ground, right in front of her door, and watched as she fumbled to open her door due to her drowsiness. She turned to me frowning and extended the keys over to me.

"Please tum kar do na. Patha nahi aaj itna neend kyun aa raha hai," She said as she leaned up against me.

I opened the door and slowly walked in with Chhavi's body still leaning on me. I pointed her towards her room but instead of going towards it, she beckoned me to give her a tight hug.

"Don't go for so long Viraf. This is the first time we'll be away from each other for so long. Mujhe toh bhul nahi jayogi na?" She said sleepily as she wrapped her arms more tightly around my waist.

"Haha I'm only going for 3 days and before you know it, I'll be back shooting with you. Also who can forget this face which has a built-in mosquito catcher," I joked as I softly planted a kiss on her lips.

She mumbled a soft bye into my chest before untangling herself from that tight hug. Before she trudged off towards her room, she held my face with one hand and propped herself up to kiss me on the cheek.

"Drive safely ok and pahoch kar mujhe text ya toh phir phone karna. I love you," She said to me while stroking my face with her hand.

I kissed her on the forehead before heading out towards my car but I could feel my stomach churning as I got further and further away from her house. I didn't know if it was my hunger or my dread that was causing my stomach to do somersaults. Obviously, I had various reasons to visit Pune but my most important reason is to tell my parents about my relationship with Chhavi. I knew I had to make the first move and try to at least have my parents convinced before even attempting to handle the Patna crowd. However, it was the thought of my mother's request that had been lingering at the back of my mind and a thought that accompanied me through the drive to Pune.

Chhavi's POV:

I could barely stay awake as I struggled to change into my night suit. I washed my face to somewhat wake myself up so I could finish off some of the house work before going to bed. I was headed towards the kitchen when I heard my phone vibrating.

Hey are you free this Sunday? Dheeraj and I are going out for lunch so come join us. Also heads up, Pracheen will be there. Take care x

I read out Vinny's message, half disappointed that it hadn't been Viraf, but the thought of Pracheen being there scared me a little. I had somehow managed to cancel that coffee date with the excuse that I had a very tight shooting schedule but Sunday is my off day so if I cancel, I need a really good reason. I racked my head for reasonable excuses but I had suddenly gone blank. What am I supposed to do?

Hmm dilemmas for both Viraf and Chhavi ahead. Why has Viraf's mum requested him to stay in Pune longer? Will Chhavi go to the lunch date or will she come up with a solid excuse to cancel the meeting? Well you can leave your theories and also your feedback in the comments. Catch you guys later with my next chapter soon ๐Ÿ˜Š

Shegufta x
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
I don't know what should I say after reading this beautiful update.
ViCha's dressing room scene was so nice...I don't know why, but it reminded me of that post-leap hugs scene... Balram Parichay 'Pandey' wala...
Viraf's dialogues...hilarious...
And their dilemma...nicely written...
Hope jyada problem arise na ho..
Though my intuition is saying that Chhavi keliye kuch problem create ho sakta hai...
Update soon...
Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG what an update!! I'm left exhilarated to know what happens next!!!!! I loved it, the dilemmas are awesome specially Viraf ๐Ÿ˜†!!!!
Update sooon please!!
Edited by mastaTmohi - 10 years ago

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