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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: TINAMONI
Wow what an wonderful update! !!
Thanks very much. ..it's just Beutiful. ..
I can clearly visualise mj and tara in that wood with horsr5 and mj's flying hair!!!!
Loved it
Please update soon! !...

thanks dear 😃
update after 5th june 😊

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Greys_Anatomy
Amazing archie maaa aagaya itne dinno baad SS padne mein 😃

Plz next update jald se jald kerna 😉

Loved the way you compared your story with the actual story 👏

Hats off 10 stars ⭐️

thanks dear 😃
update after 5th june 😊

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Dilsha
Loved it archu.
Tara MJ meeting was sort of like in the show. MJ Tara on Maria that is so something I always wanted to see on the show.
Nandu ban gayi chudail that is the perfect title for her.
The prophecies first part is fulfilled. I think Tara will get the pearl for MJ as he can't enter the palace but she can. MJ Tara lost in each other's thoughts this is something that happens in the show as well. When both r near they can't take their eyes off each other and when they r away they can't stop thinking about each other. Hopelessly in love I say.
Waiting for the next update

thanks Dilsha 😃
well i am trying to mix EBI with my thoughts 😊

to know more keep reading 😉

update after 5th june

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: fraser

imagination power increase with great explanation and you done that job prefectly..
take ur time but update

so sweet 😳
update after 5th june 😊

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: -lake-
wonderful story of wonderland

thanks dear 😃

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Archana

@Archi21

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Banner Updated 😊

Edited by Archi21 - 11 years ago

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Beautiful!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I loved the way you included the pearl and the Enchanted forest along with MJ and Tara in the banner!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Shaina_b - 11 years ago

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Shagufta

@ShagufElina

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Banner is just awsummm...

Now a good start...excited...

Yayyy ...going to read...

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Shagufta

@ShagufElina

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Archu...👏👏👏👏👏

Part 1...

Ohhh my...fairytale...fantasy land...my fav...

It was awsummm

I cant explain...how much happy i m...

The best thing...ek taraf Mj...dusri taraf Tara...donon ko protect karke rakha hai...

Tara Mj ka hathiyara hai...my god...i love tht idea... 👏👏👏👏👏

👏👏👏👏👏

Awsummm👏👏👏👏👏

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Shagufta

@ShagufElina

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Archu👏👏👏👏👏

Tara's beauty...hair...dress kya describe kiya hai...👏👏👏👏👏

Nandu chudail ...kally ke saath waah👏👏👏👏👏

Mj...waaah...kya bayan kiya hai...usse...👏👏👏👏👏

First meeting👏👏👏👏👏

strong like a wall but soft like a flower. She bumped into a man, who was over 6 feet tall, had strong hands, a beard and hair tied up in a ponytail. Tara was going to fall but was saved by that man. She was in his arms with his strong hand on her bare back and her wide eyes looking at his face. The man was drinking her beauty through his eyes.

Trees showered flowers on this spectacular moment due to a gust of wind. The whole Enchanted Forest was happy to witness their meeting which would lead to fulfillment of the prophecy.

Beautiful...👏👏👏👏👏

Kya kahun samajh nahi aa raha...👏👏👏👏👏

👏👏👏👏👏