ONCE UPON A TIME IN WONDERLAND (SS)||Complete - Page 4

Originally posted by: Archi21

yes dear 😉
chalo 3 incidents ke naam bhi bata do

tara reached at capital...kalavati and tara saw eachother...mj-tara met...

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Thanks for loving this😃
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Mein ne kabhi wo show nahi dekha hai

The way mj walk n talk made me imagine this story

u imagined chhoti Tara👏

Agar tum ne likha hota too i am sure ye aur acha hota😉

Wow what an wonderful update! !!

Amazing archie maaa aagaya itne dinno baad SS padne mein 😃😃😃😃

Loved it archu.
Tara MJ meeting was sort of like in the show. MJ Tara on Maria that is so something I always wanted to see on the show.
Nandu ban gayi chudail that is the perfect title for her.
The prophecies first part is fulfilled. I think Tara will get the pearl for MJ as he can't enter the palace but she can. MJ Tara lost in each other's thoughts this is something that happens in the show as well. When both r near they can't take their eyes off each other and when they r away they can't stop thinking about each other. Hopelessly in love I say.
Waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: Archi21

Thank u... 😃
thanks for loving it

but it is not so good without your imagination power
what u imagine is also important

next part will take time 😉

imagination power increase with great explanation and you done that job prefectly..
take ur time but update

Originally posted by: BloomBelievix

Wonderful write up archi 👏 👏 👏
Keep it up 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Thanks archi for this write up and also pm 🤗

Thanks dear 😃

Originally posted by: TasrinS

Very nice...👏

thanks 😃

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

I love the way your story is following the original story in a way and is still different and unique!!!👏

Kalavati is getting the help of a vampire now!!!!😔

Finally Tara can visit Storybrooke and good to know about Aditya and Meethi's wedding!!!!😊

Tara is looking beautiful!!!!👏

Ab Kalavati ki nazar Tara pe padh gayi hai aur pata nahi kya hoga aur Tara kaise bachegi usse!!!

I loved Mrityunjay and Tara's meeting as it was just like in the show!!!!😳

He saved her from falling and they were lost in each other!!!!

Their meeting has started the chain of events that would lead to the prophecy being fulfilled and now Kalavati's end is not far!!!!👍🏼

Tara is such a chatterbox and Mrityunjay is so quiet and they are totally opposite of each other!!!!😊

Mrityunjay on Maria with his hair flying in the wind is a sight to behold!!!

Govind knows that Tara and Mrityunjay would together defeat Kalavati but does he also know that they are made for each other??😛

Good that Nandini got a scolding but we need to kill Nandini as that would weaken Kalavati!!!!😳

Tara will be going to the palace and I hope she somehow makes a way for Mrityunjay to enter Storybrooke!!!😊

Tara can't stop thinking about Mrityunjay and I guess she has fallen in love with him!!!😳

Mrityunjay has found Tara's scarf and now he has something of Tara to remind him of her!!!!😊

I hope they meet again soon!!!!😊

The chapter is awesome!!!!👏

Thanks Shaina for lovely n lengthy comment 😃

ur help made this update beautiful 😃

@govind : u guess
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