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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor Tara couldn't go to meet Mrityunjay as Aradhana was at home!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Even after Nirmala begged her, Kalavati wouldn't tell her about her firstborn and enjoyed the Queen pleading in front of her!!!!😈 😈 😈 😈

She should have realized that if Kalavati did not listen to her back then, then why would she listen to her now??😳 😳 😳 😳

Nirmala met her long lost son Mrityunjay and he took care of her hurt foot!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Nirmala's kiss to Mrityunjay revived the dull bloodline tree as it was a true love's kiss!!!!❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

She did feel something for Mrityunjay and that is why is thinking of him as well as her firstborn!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara noticed that the tree has started glowing and Nirmala was so happy!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Good to see the mother-in-law and would be daughter-in-law have a secret between them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

The Queen realized that the man in the woods was her son!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Mrityunjay had felt something for the woman he had met and was thinking of her!!!!

But Guruji is still not telling him about his family!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”






Edited by Shaina_b - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...
Superb update Archu...πŸ‘πŸ‘
Nirmala ko apna lost son mil gaya...Loved that part...so emotional...
looking forward to MJ-Tara meeting...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
update soon...😊
Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
U r an Awesome writer...dear. Keep it up.
Superb update :) :) :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifully written. .loved reading it..
Please update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
reser

Have unres my comment here..sorry for the terrible late😳

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108839955


THE HEART IS A LONELY HUNTER

Mj man...accept the fact now..she is the fragrance of goodness n love in ur life..

Take something to cover ur eyes to avoid compulsion by vampy...han take Tara's PYAAR ka CHASMAπŸ˜‰ she'll protect u from such elements ..areey wah mainey kahan na take something which belonged to Tara..the best evil weederπŸ˜‰

What Tara teh man has enamored u that extent ki ur losing ur senses-wa TSK TSKπŸ˜†

Interesting princess Meethi sharing some VAMPIRE GYAAN wid Tara (bhabhiπŸ˜‰)

Dont worry meethi my prince (my MJ) is already on the taskπŸ˜† lol agar Nandu nay MJ ko compel ya seduce kiya toh Tara would become a dangerous Vampire-NE than Nandu..uskey baal noochlegii agar MJ key aas pass bhe diikheygi toh🀣 I so can imagine itπŸ˜†

Dear Nimmo..plz use ur brains..woh witch tab nahi suni toh aaj jab beta jawan hai n bahu bhim lara hai n ye is in every intention to kill her..would the witch help u?

Super update.
Great going..its gettin super interesting.
Love & Regards
Sia

Edited by sankalp_prapti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sankalp_prapti

Loved Tara's smart dimak ki batti...Jayraj is too kind..abhi sey Tara ko MJ ki biwi banaey ki planningπŸ˜‰ab bahu hee betey ko ley ayegii.

SORRY FOR THE TERRIBLE LATE UNRES😳
Love the magical plant idea tooπŸ˜ƒ soon umm...not so soon ..well after the war..they might be a chotu little plant growing beside MJ's treeπŸ˜‰ under daddy's cool loving shadow
Waisey bolo Nandu ko envision karna kaisey haiπŸ˜† will she be like normal humans in her original form or have fangs n stuffπŸ˜›

Close friends ko busy schedule say time nikaal na padta hai..aaj iss ka experience bhi karliyaπŸ˜†
Yeh chudel πŸ˜› I mean Witch ki yyaadash bahut pakki hai
Ek Scarf key liye..gal what MJ say milney ka isey acha bahana nai milaπŸ˜‰ mummy say itna intimidatedπŸ˜†

Nandu u chotti gal...

Ahayeee MJ miyaa...abhi ek mulaqat theek say nai hue ladki say ..abhee say sapney sonchney lagey!!πŸ˜‰ koi nai agey future -wa main u'll get many chaNASSπŸ˜† to meet ur princess



Guruji: What are you thinkking MJ...
MJ: han..abt ur daughterπŸ˜†

OMG yeh kya MJ..shirt-wa aisey nikalogey toh ur future biwi will DROOL...
Yeh lo Tara is already in the business..I mean day dreaming business...and I thought the witch was best at it!πŸ˜†
Ohoo Tara wat thisy yaar..lust lust akrey hoo..sweat glowing like molta lava...lava mai chocolate lahoo (me at the moment:besharamm muchπŸ˜‰)

What yaar mera FF bhi aisey ek scene deney wala hai...n urs is too good..ab mera ff kaun padheyga😭

Horse ride...hayee...kya lagtey hai woh dono


Her scarf in which she looks beautiful is with Mj..kyun na ho..her beauty is his now..his own property..

@ARchi, Shai..my darlingsπŸ€—..u guys rock..superb Update.⭐️⭐️⭐️
Regards
Sia



@dimag ki bati: Apni Tara bachu smart hai πŸ˜‰
haha...haan naa FIL ki planning achiπŸ˜ƒ

@late: Koi baat nahi ⭐️Sia⭐️ jab time mile tab karo , no need to say sorry πŸ˜ƒ

@chhotu tree: Idea acha haiπŸ˜‰

@nandu envision: think her like a normal woman , except jab attack karti hai tab Vampire teeth bhi hote haiπŸ˜‰

@busy schedule: πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

@Witch ki yaadast: hahaa...πŸ˜†
@Scarf : bahana acha hai naaπŸ˜‰

@MJ-Guguji Convo :🀣 mujhe bhi wahi kehna tha πŸ˜‰

@MJ shirtless scene: ☺️☺️☺️
Tumhara FF main read karti huπŸ˜ƒ aur dusre members bhi read karte hai.

@horse ride: I wanted something like that in showπŸ˜ƒ

@scarf and beauty: agreeπŸ˜ƒ

Thanks Sia for loving it πŸ˜ƒ
πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful Write up ArchuπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Yippiee As predicted Nirmala Met Mj πŸ˜›i really liked how u penned Nirmala and Mj's Meeting .Now Waiting for Next part for Mj and Tara Meet😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb one...
finally queen come to know about her son...
plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Archi dear wonderful write up
I enjoyed the whole write up while reading
Loved the lovely write up on queen n his son it was so so touchy I wish they can meet up soon
Kalavati witch the evil faces downfall soon
Sad to see Mj n Tara could not meet
Thank for writing such a wonderful story have read a beautiful n lovely write up after many days.
Hoping to get an update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Poor Tara couldn't go to meet Mrityunjay as Aradhana was at home!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Even after Nirmala begged her, Kalavati wouldn't tell her about her firstborn and enjoyed the Queen pleading in front of her!!!!😈 😈 😈 😈

She should have realized that if Kalavati did not listen to her back then, then why would she listen to her now??😳 😳 😳 😳

Nirmala met her long lost son Mrityunjay and he took care of her hurt foot!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Nirmala's kiss to Mrityunjay revived the dull bloodline tree as it was a true love's kiss!!!!❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

She did feel something for Mrityunjay and that is why is thinking of him as well as her firstborn!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara noticed that the tree has started glowing and Nirmala was so happy!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Good to see the mother-in-law and would be daughter-in-law have a secret between them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

The Queen realized that the man in the woods was her son!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Mrityunjay had felt something for the woman he had met and was thinking of her!!!!

But Guruji is still not telling him about his family!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”




MIL-DIL bonding πŸ˜‰
Guruji must have thought some correct time to reveal about MJ's family

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