MriAra FF BeInteha UPDATED Chapter-6 Pg22

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

That was really good Piya 👏 I still find it hard to believe its ur first attempt coz its too good to be a first attempt for sure 👍🏼 Do keep me updated when u post it

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Divya429

@Divya429

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Piya1702

Thanx divya...😊
infact after writing it,i was lil confused what i have written...😆

It's an amazing piece of work,Piya

Indeed a grt start !

Hw come u gt confused ...where u thinking abt mj 😆

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Piya1702

@Piya1702

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: FieryHeart
That was really good Piya 👏 I still find it hard to believe its ur first attempt coz its too good to be a first attempt for sure 👍🏼 Do keep me updated when u post it

Thankz a lot for appreciating it...😊
will PM u whenever i post itz next part...
yeah itz my first attempt in writing...
i never even tried to write actually...😳

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Piya1702

@Piya1702

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: dsnair

It's an amazing piece of work,Piya
Indeed a grt start !
Hw come u gt confused ...where u thinking abt mj 😆

lolz Divs...ofcourse i picturised MJ,infact Viffy,when i wanted to describe him...but u see,in this chapter he just makes the entry in the end...
baaki pura part to Tara ka hi tha😆
actually i got confused while reading it bcoz i felt i had described so many things in it that i felt it was in random order😛

Edited by Piya1702 - 11 years ago