MriAra FF BeInteha UPDATED Chapter-6 Pg22

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faizari

@faizari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Piya 🤗

you made me cry with this beautiful love story 😭

i saved this story in my Tab,😛

when ever i read...its reminds u 😊

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Piya1702

@Piya1702

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: FieryHeart
U ended it so soon? 😲 Anyways liked reading it n hope u can start another one when u get the time 😳
Coming to the update, MJ didn really say he didn wanna get married na? He was nice to Tara when he met her 😕 I thought they'd be happy together but what is this? Poor Tara! It was his family who got the proposal in the first place. Y should he be mean to Tara abt it? Its sad he realised his love when it was too late. Ending was beautiful but sad. Very sad 😭

That was really good for a first attempt Piya 👏 Hope u come up with another MriAra story.

U ended it so soon? 😲 Anyways liked reading it n hope u can start another one when u get the time 😳
well actually i wont be active much from now on...so i thought to end-up rest of the story in one-go!!hats why i ended it so soon...

Coming to the update, MJ didn really say he didn wanna get married na? He was nice to Tara when he met her 😕
Well actually he was really nice to Tara when he met her...even during farewell n all...this was his way of behaviour when he was around any girl,he had the habit of swooping them off the feet...n he was a nice guy...
I thought they'd be happy together but what is this? Poor Tara! It was his family who got the proposal in the first place. Y should he be mean to Tara abt it?
he dint wanted to marry Tara n had cleared it to her the nite his family had come to see Tara...yet Tara choose to Maary him...this angryied him...I wish i could have written the chapters of in-between from MJ-Tara's wedding to the end...it would have made there relation much more clear to u all...
but the time constraints ceased me to do so😭
Its sad he realised his love when it was too late. Ending was beautiful but sad. Very sad 😭

Yeah thats the key - the ending ...n the moral of the story😊

That was really good for a first attempt Piya 👏 Hope u come up with another MriAra story.

Thanx dear...u knw what,when i started writing this story, i actually dint had an xact story with me...I just had the characters n the end of the story in my mind!!!rest,i cooked-up everytime i sat to wrote a chapter!!😊
N m glad u liked it!!!😳

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Piya1702

@Piya1702

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: BlueJasmine
This is the reason they say that - in every single moment...say love u to your loved ones ...cause u don't know wht next moment will bring fr u...

Very well said Jui...😊👏

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Piya1702

@Piya1702

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: Archi21
Piya ⭐️

beautiful 👏

BEINTEHA 😭 😭 😭

Thanx Archu...m glad u liked it😳

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Piya1702

@Piya1702

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: faizari
Piya 🤗

you made me cry with this beautiful love story 😭

i saved this story in my Tab,😛

when ever i read...its reminds u 😊

Faiza🤗
M sorry that it made u cry!!
n m glad it reminds u of me...😳
dont worry we'll stay in touch😊

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Piya1702

@Piya1702

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: TasrinS
Beautiful...
Awesome

Thnx Tasrin!!😊

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Kaay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

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Piya that was a beautiful story! I just loved it!

And the moral... it's one of my favourites... Love may last forever but not the lover!

Thank you for such a lovely story!

-- Kiret

Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago

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Piya1702

@Piya1702

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf
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Piya that was a beautiful story! I just loved it!

And the moral... it's one of my favourites... Love may last forever but not the lover!

Thank you for such a lovely story!

-- Kiret