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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shagu, nice post 😆 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shagu awesome totally!! It's written so well!! Xx
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update!
Thanks for the pm! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Teena_


shagu...👏👏 👏


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MriArafan

Shagu, nice post😆👍🏼

thanks dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: MastaT

Shagu awesome totally!! It's written so well!! Xx

thank u so much Mohi...🤗

Mujhe bht khushi hui tumhe pasand aaya...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Archi21

Shagu ⭐️

haay kya Ulfat hai 👏

kya likh rahi hoo 👏

viffy ka haal 👏

chhavi ka tikha mizaj ⭐️

iss viffy ke haal par

~tera mushukuran naa ,
yu aa kar chale jana
kismat ka hai mil jana
tera dedar hua phela sa pyar hua
iss dil ko...~

Thanks Archu...🤗

Tumhe pasand aaya...mujhe bht khushi hui...

Viffy...ka haal...haha...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5:

Aaj ...aaj ki subah hum kabhi nahi bhool sakte...ek lamhe ne kya kya kiya...

Aaj ek aisi subah thi...jissne humein ek nahi do do khushiyan di...

Hawaa se baatein karna...aur dil ki awaaz sun...sabko sunaana...

Aaj hawaa mein jaadoo tha...humein apne saath baha le gayi...

Hum auditorium se bahar nikal class ki taraf jaa rahe the...soch rahe the...Meethi ne peeche se aakar humaari aankhen band ki...

Humne kaha...

Humari chhavi humse kahe...

Meethi se kabhi door na rahe...

Yeh hum aksar kaha karte the...woh issi tarah humaari ankhen band karti...aur hum yahi keh aankhen kholte ...

Humara bachpan saath guzara hai...

Meethi:"Aaye haye humari guddo raani...ab toh tumhare charche honge...sab badi taareef kar rahe hai tumhaari..."

Kya tumhe pata chal gaya...kya sachchi...humaari taarif ho rahi hai...

Meethi:"Haan meri guddo..."

Arre pehle tum humaari suno...aaj humaare saath kya hua...

Humne saara qissa suna diya...

Meethi ne kaha..."shakal kaisi thi janab ki...tumhare uss subah subah milne waale SAIYYA ki..."

"Saiyya ...kuch bhi mat kaho...hum maar denge...bata de rahe hai..."

"Arre par humne uski shakal dekhi nahi...ussne helmet pehna tha..."

Meethi: "dhat teri ki...tum bhi na...guddo...kamal karti ho..."

Jissne bachaya uski shakal hi nahi dekhi...

"Humein zyaada preshaan mat karo...jaao yahan se...nahi hum baat nahi karenge..."

Meethi: "Achcha achcha thik hai..."

Class attend kar hum donon ghar ki taraf nikal chale...

Cycle rickshaw mein baithe...baatein karte karte pata hi na chala kab humara mohalla aa gaya ...

Jaise hi humare mohalle se guzar rahe the...

Phirse Ek ladka humari taraf dekh muskuraya...jaane kya ho gaya hai kal se...

Har koi humein kyun dekh raha hai...

Humne nazrein neeche jhuka li...

Par yeh kya woh ab bhi muskura raha hai...

Phir kya humne gusse waali nazar se usse dekha...

Jab humne munh bigaadaa...chidaate hue...

Toh phir unn Sahab ki hassi gayab ho gayi...

Pata nahi...kyun...

Humara rickshaw aage badh gaya...humne mudd kar dekha...

Woh bhi humein mud kar dekh raha tha...

Phirse humne usse gusse waali nazar se dekha...

Aww ...uska chehra utar gaya...

Kehna toh nahi chahiye par shakal badi maasoom thi...bht pyaara lag raha tha...

Humaari gusse bhari nigaahon se chot khaakar...

Hum seedha baith gaye...

Rickshaw se utar kar meethi ko bye kaha...

Aur phir ghar aaye...gunjan bua humaara intezaar kar rahi thi...

Humare ghar mein sirf hum...baba...aur daadi rehte hai...bua bhi aksar aa jaati hai...aur thode din ruk kar jaati hai...apne ghar...

Hum sabki ki laadli hai...issi liye toh humein gudiya bulaate hai...

Hum iss ghar ki raani hai...

Daadi kehti hai...hum mein maan ki Chhavi nazar aati hai...hum unki parchaayi hai...

Isiliye Baba ne humara naam Chhavi rakha hai...

Aur maan humein pyaar se gudiya kehti thi...

Humara khayaal aisa hai...sab humse bht pyaar karte hai...par shayad nahi...

Bua: aa gayi tum...itna der kahan ho gayi...

Humne dheere se kaha...

"Woh bua"

Bua: "Bua bua ki kya ratt lagayi ho...hum nahi jaante kya...iee college jaana sab bahana hai...asal matlab matar gashti hai...amma main sach bata rahi hoon"

"Maaf kardo...kalse jaldi aayenge..."

Hum jaldi se...apna baig rakhne gaye room mein...jaise hi upar kamre mein gaye...achanak humein uss ladke ki yaad aayi...aur Meethi ki baat...

Humne kaha...waise woh white shirt waala...maasoom soorat tha...par seerat...ufff...

White shirt...woh smile...

Hum ghabra gaye...

"Arre humne yeh kya kar diya..."

Hum baahar jaane ke liye...neeche aane lage...dhadkanein tez ho gayi...saansein...tham rahi thi...

Humne yeh kya kar diya...

Jaldi jaldi neeche bhaag kar aaye...jaise hi darwaaze ke baahar kadam nikaalna chaha...Ki usse mile...

Bua ne phir awaaz di...

"Kahan chali guddo Raani...phirse matargashti karne...abhi aayi ho...phir bahar jaana hai..."

Humara qadam wahi ruk gaya...

Kya karein woh chala jaayega...

Hum jaldi jaldi...chhat ke liye tezi se duadne lage...

Wahan bua chillane lagi...yeh ladki daud daud kar...dharti aasmaan ek kare hai...

Hum aur tezi se bhaagne lage...

Aur chatt par pohnche...saans upar neeche ho rahi thi...bhaag bhaag kar...

Hum bhaag kar kinaare gaye...aur neeche sadak par jhaankne lage...

Chatt ki kinare par latak...sadak par dhundne lage shayad kahi nazar aa jaaye...phirse woh bike...aur white shirt waala...

Shakal bhi jaan paaye toh iss tarah...

Woh nahi tha...humne kya kar diya...woh humein smile de raha tha...aur humne...

Apna kadwe karele jaisa munh bigaad kar...usse gusse se dekha...

Ab kya hum udaas ho gaye...woh toh jaa chuka tha...

Hum dheere dheere qadam badhakar...chalne lage...aur neeche utar aaye yahi sochte sochte...

Jissne humari madad ki...humne kya sila diya...

Par galti humaari bhi nahi hai...ek toh humne uski shakal nahi dekhi thi ...usspar se...kal se humein kuch zyaada hi ladke pareshaan kar rahe hai...

Jab kal raat woh ladka aur subah woh badmaash ...jo pareshaan kar rahe the tab kuch na kiya...

Aur jab uss ladke ne smile ki ...jo humein jaanta tha...humne usski class leli...

Meethi ko batate hai...humne kya kar diya...

Ho sakta hai...baat choti hai...par humaare liye bht badi hai...

Humne kisike hasste chehre ko bigaad diya...

Bua ne awaaz di...

Hum neeche aa chuke the...

Shaam ho gayi...humne khana banana shuru kar diya...kitchen mein...

Jaldi se sab ready ho gaya...

Utne mein baba bhi aa gaye...

Baba humare...duniya ke sabse pyaare pita hai...

Humne unka haath dhulaaye...aangan mein...

Aur khana parosa...

Jab tak woh khana khaate...hum unhe...kitchen ki deewaar se lag ka khade hue dekhte rehte...ki ab woh kuch kahe...aur hum kuch sune...

Baba bht kam baat karte hai...ek dam shaant mizaaj...pehle woh aise nahi the...

Maan ke dehaant ke baad aur kam bolte hai...

Hum chaar saal ke the jab maan ka dehant hua...tab toh hum kuch nahi jaante the...

Kab hua ...kaise hua...bua batati hai...woh beemaar thi...

Hum bachpan se apne baba ke ek ek lafz ko tarse hai...

Hum chahte the...woh humein paas bulaaye...

Humein apni god mein bithaye...

Hum se pyaari pyaari meethi meethi baatein kare...

Par kabhi aisa hua nahi...

Dil ke kisi kone mein ek nanhi si khwaahish janam leti thi...phir toot ke bikhar jaati thi...

Ab toh unn tukdon ko bhi sametna jaan gaye hai hum...

Humein yakeen hai...dil ke darwaaze par ek na ek din dastak hogi...

Humari nanhi si khwaahish ek din zaroor poori hogi...iss aas mein kayi saal guzar gaye...

Par humaari aas na chuti...aur na chutegi...

Hum roz issi tarah...deewaar se lag karke...baba ko chupke chupke dekhte hai...

Woh kabhi kabhi...humaare sar par haath pher dete hai...

Jab hum khaane ke baad unke liye meetha le jaate hai...

Uss ek lamhe se humara din guzarta hai...aur raatein kat'ti hai...

Baba ko bht pyaar hai humse...par zaahir nahi karte...

Daadi se aksar humaara qissa sunte rehte hai...humaare baate har ek baat daadi se poochte hai...

Agar bua daantti hai...toh maine suna hai...mere saamne nahi kehte...

Par bua se kehte hai...akele mein...

"Bachchi hai ...naadaan hai...samjha diya karo..."

Yeh sunn...humaari aankhon mein aansun aate hai...labon par hassi aati hai...dil mein ek lehar si duadne lagti hai...

Phir woh nanhi khwaahish panapne lagti hai...

Unka itna kehna...humaare liye...qaafi hai...

Woh do bol...humaare liye marham hai...jo zakham bua humein pal pal deti hai...

Woh har pal humein khari khoti sunaati hai...

Pehle hum bht rote the...par jaise jaise bade hue...

Usse apni zindagi ka hissa samjh...aur bua ka pyaar samjhte hai...unki daant phatkaar ko unka pyaar samjhte hai...

Humne apne gird ek daayera bana liya hai...dhaal ki tarah...humein kisi baat ka bura nahi lagtaa ab...

Na koi shikwaa...na koi gilaa...na koi gham...bass khushiyan hi khushiyan...

Baba ki khaamoshi ko iqraar samajhte hai...unki khamoshi mein khud ko talaashte hai...

Unki aankhon mein apne liye...bas pyaar hi pyaar dekhte hai...aur kuch nahi...

Unhe khush karne ki koshish karte rehte hai...kisi na kisi din woh humein gale se lagayenge...

Jaane kaunsa woh waqt tha...humein yaad bhi nahi...jab unhone humein gale lagaya tha...

Par humein ummeed hai...

Hum khana khakar...sone ke liye gaye...Meethi ko bhi baat batani thi...

Chhatt par...hum aur Meethi mile...humne baat batayi ...ussne kaha...

Meethi: "agar tumne yahi dekha hai...toh phir woh zaroor dobaara bhi aayega...tension mat lo humari jaan..."

"Achcha...hum tumhari jaan hai..."

Ussne phirse humaare gaal kheenche aur kaha..."haan haan"

Chalo ab gana sunao...aaj...

Gaana...thik hai...par sirf do line...

Arre guddo humara fav...

Thik hai...

~Tose naina laage Piya saawre...~
~Nahi bass mein ab yeh Jiya saawre...~

~Tose Naina laage mili Roshni...~
~Tose mann jo laaga mili zindagi...~

~Mohabbat toh ek jaaveda zindagi hai...~


"Haaye tum kitna meetha gaati ho...ab hum chalte hai...thik hai..."

Woh apni chhat par se neeche chali gayi...

Hum bhi apne kamre mein aa gaye...aur dinbhar ka nazara aankhon ke saamne ghumne laga...

Aaj ka din kuch naya tha...saari nayi cheezen...

Uska milna...bike ride..hawa se baatein...humara gaana...aur woh galti ...

Chehra purkashis tha...

Aankhon mein saadgi thi...

Muskurahat khili thi...

Jo humne bigaad di...

Yeh keh hum hass pade...aur muskuraane lage...

Aaj jo khushi dil ko haasil hui...

Pehle kabhi mehsoos na hui...

Hawa ka rukh aur dil ki awaaz...

Itni masarrat ki justujoo na hui...

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Dusre din...hum aur Meethi college gaye...

Class ke notice board dekha...

Humara naam select ho gaya tha...PC ke liye...

Hum Class se 5 ladki...5 ladke...the...

Saath mein ek aur list lagi thi...

PC ke liye...sabko apna ek ek performace ready karna tha...

Aur sabse shocking...

One juniour wil be with one seniour...

Matlab har juniour ka saath dene ke liye...ek seniour...

Aaj se 13 din baad hai...aur woh list kal lagegi...ki kiss juniour ke saath kaunsa seniour hoga...

Yeh college ki duniya...ghar ki duniye se ek dam...alag...

Zindagi ke do pehlu...

Yahan har koi apni masti mein magan...hassi thithole...masti...mazak...friends...groups...class...events...bilkul alag...

Ab hum kya karien ...hum hairaan aur pareshaan...

Ab karein ...apna naam cancel kara den...

Kyunki isske liye college...mein extra time dena hoga...jo ki hum nahi kar sakte...

Hum fuaran councel member ko dhundne lage...

Ek member mila...humne usse baat ki...

Ussne kaha...

Aap GS se baat kijiye...wahi aap ko bata sakte hai...kya karna hai...

Ab Hum GS ko dhunde...

"Kahan milenge...GS..."

"Woh toh aaj nahi aaya hai..."

Hmmm...hum class attend kar donon ghar ko chalne lage...socha...GS ka naam toh pata nahi...

Arrr Meethi...GS ka naam kya hai...

Meethi: "Pata nahi...uss list mein hoga..."

Hum phirse list dekhne gaye...

Wahan likha tha...neeche...

General secretory...~~Viraf~~...
Ab inn janab ki khoj karni hogi...




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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Shagu⭐️
👏👏👏👏👏👏

Kya bakhubi rishto ki pechan karayi hai tum ne👏

Chhavi ka apne papa ke pyar ke liye intezar⭐️😭

uss intezar ke bahut khub baya kiya hai tum ne👏

Chhavi ka uss anjan ladke ke liye bhagna😉😃

intezar hai aage kya hoga😉

kya mil payege Viraf-Chhavi😉

Edited by Archi21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Awesome Shegu.😃👏👏

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