~Ehsaas~ek mulaaqat.........SS....updated last part on page 16 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: ShagufElina

thanks dear...
Next part i wil update soon...





Can't wait!! Looking forward to it!! <3 <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: MastaT





Can't wait!! Looking forward to it!! <3 <3

sure dear...
Jald hi update karungi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3
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Main uske aur woh mere...itne qareeb...
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Pehle faaslaa tha ...par ab ...ab main uske paas baitha tha...usse baat karna chaahtaa tha par kaise karta...
Ek toh mere friend tafreeh le rahe the...baat karta toh pata nahi kya karte...
Main bhi chup tha...woh bhi chupchap baithi thi...
Ek ajeeb sa sukun tha...uss pal mein...woh meri kuch nahi thi...na meri dost...phir bhi...usske paas baithkar...mujhe ek khushi ka ehsaas ho raha tha...
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Itne mein ussne mujhse kaha
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Tara: hiii...i m Tara...
Maine kaha hiii
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Tara: abhi kaisi hai aapki chot...
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Maine kaha "chot"?????
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Tara: woh jabhi main aapse takra gai thi na...aap ko bus door ke patre se haath par kharoch aa gayi thi ...usske liye sorry...
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Maine apne haath par dekha ...waqai mere haat par kharoch ke nishaan the...mujhe toh uss dard ka ehsaas bhi nahi hua...aur issne ek jhalak mein dekh liya...
Mujhe toh uss waqt uska sirf sorry sunai diya tha...usske lehrate dupatte ki wajah se main usska chehra bhi sahi se nahi dekh paaya tha...sirf uski side jhalak aur uska sorry...
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Tara: Mujhe pakadne ke chakkar mein...aap ko kharoch aa gayi...uss waqt main bht zyaada jaldi mein thi...isiliye aapse sahi se maafi bhi nahi maang paayi...aur na hi thanks...abhi keh deti hun...
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~Sorry~ aapki kharoch ke liye...
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~Thank u~ mujhe girne se bachane ke liye...woh utarte waqt mera dupatta pair ke niche aa gaya tha isiliye main aap se takra gayi...
Thank god ...aap saamne aa gaye...nahi toh main bus se sidha zameen par munh ke bal girti...
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Yeh ladki itna kuch bol rahi thi...mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha...mere hosh udde hue the...main bas usse dekh raha tha...
Usske honte hill rahe the...woh kuch keh rahi thi...saath saath...uski aankhen bhi bolti thi...uski woh muskurahat ...bas main wahi dekh raha tha...phir realize hua...aur maine apni nazrein jhuka li...
aur kaha...
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Its my pleasure...no need to be sorry...
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tum thik ho mere liye kaafi hai ...maine ek dum dheere apne aap se kaha...
ussne poocha...
tara: aapne aur kuch kaha ...
maine kaha nahi toh...
Mujhe itna achcha laga...ussne mujhse baat ki...usse meri kharoch ka pata hai...aaahhh yeh kya ho raha tha mere saath...
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Yahan hum donon baat kar rahe the...
Wahan mere dost aage masti kar rahe the...unn logon ne antakshari start kar diya...
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Yug: hey Vasu...humari trip ka aakhri stand yeh bus hai...phir hum apne apne ghar chale jaayege...aur daily schedule mein busy ho jaayenge...phir toh weekends par hi mulaaqaat hogi...
Whats say...iss aakhiri pal ko yaadgaar banaya jaaye...hum games khelte hai...
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Vasu: awssummm idea dude...
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Meethi: toh der kiss baat ki...
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Adi : hey par khelna kya hai...
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Yug: hum khelenge simple sa game...antakshari...
2 team...ek mein main...rahul...siddharth...aur
2nd mein Meethi Adi aur Vasu...
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Adi: aur Mj??????
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Yug: ohhh haan...Mj...
kya woh khelega...i think woh busy hai...
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aur sab mujh par hasne lage...
Vasu ne mujhse poocha...
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Vasu:Mj kya tum kheloge...
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maine kaha...nahi...
Phir kya tha...mere dost...shuru ho gaye...woh aur unki masti...donon apni apni taraf songs gaa rahe the...maze udaa rahe the...main yahan usske saath bitha ussi ki baaton ko soch raha tha...
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ab yahan woh sab khub masti kar rahe the...
phir se Yug ko masti sujhi ...ussne Meethi se ishaare mein kaha...ki woh tara ko saath mein le...
Meethi bhi uske plan mein shaamil ho gayi...usne palkein jhapka ka haami bhari...ab inka plan Mj ko sataana shuru...
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Meethi: hum haar rahe hai Adi...
Yeh Yug jeet jaayega...isse zyaada gaane aate hai...mujhe itne gaane nahi aate...
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Vasu: haan yaar...mujhe is Yug se haarna nahi hai...
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Yug: loser loser...
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Meethi ne Tara ko awaaz di kaha...
hey u want to play with us...
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Tara: sure...
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Meethi: hiii i m Meethi...my husband Aditya...
They are my friend Yug...Rahul...and who is next to u is Mrityunjay...
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Ohhh shit ab isse mera naam pata chal gaya...
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Tara: hiii...i m Tara...
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Meethi : come here na...on Mj place...
Tara: ok...
Mrityunjay...
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Meethi: Mj...utho...usse yahan baithne do...suna nahi tumne...woh tumhe uthne ke liye keh rahi hai...
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Haan haan...isse aage kuch keh na saka...ussne mera naam itne pyaar se pukaara...woh khadi ho gayi...main jaise hi window seat ki taraf move hota...bus ne itne tezi se turn liya...aur woh phir mere upar...ohhh she was in my arms...ussne donon haaton se mujhe pakda hua tha...saare baal mere face par...aur mera haath uski back par...uska face mere left shoulder par...
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main usse sambhale hue tha ...phir jab bus seedhe chalne lagi...ussne dheere se apna sir mere shoulder se uthaya...aur meri taraf dekha...phir ussne uthne ki koshish ki...par phir se gir gayi aur uske donon haath meri gardan ke peeche...aur meri god mein...
Maine zor se kaha...
...Sambhal ke...
...mera haal bura ho gaya...jisse main itne der se admire kar raha hun woh meri baahon mein...she was litrally sitting in my lap...
Ohhh mere hosh udd gaye...usse itna qareeb dekh kar...
main usse dekh raha tha...aur woh mujhe...phir kya tha...hum donon hadbada gaye...woh jhat se meri god se uth gayi...hum donon sharam se paani ho gaye...pehle main akela tha...par ab mere dost the...
Arre yaar yeh kya ho gaya...woh phirse jagah par baith gayi...
Ussne phir kaha...sorry...
Maine kaha ek minute...tum pehele bahar niklo...phir main ander jaata hun...hum donon khade ho gaye...phir pehle main ander jaa kar bath gaya...aur phir woh meri seat par baith gayi...hum donon ek dusre se nazrein milaane ko qatraa rahe the...
mere doston ne yeh sab dekha pata nahi kya soch rahe honge...
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Main khidki ki taraf munh karke baith gaya...
Nazrein mila nahi paa raha tha...ussi ke khayal mein duba hua tha...woh meri seat par baithi thi...par maine phir nahi dekha...
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Meethi:come ahead...waise bhi Yug khada hai...tum yug ki place par aage aa jao...Vasu ke paas...
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Thank god woh aage chali gayi...
woh Meethi ke saath baatein karne lagi...par woh bhi utni hi ghabra gayi thi ...
Uthte waqt woh meri taraf dekh rahi thi phir aage jaa kar Vasu ke paas baith gayi...
par main khidki ki taraf face kar baitha tha...pretend kar raha tha...mera dhyaan nahi hai uss par...par mera dil dimaag ussi ke baare mein sochne par majboor tha...
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ussi ke ehsaas ka asar mujh par chaya hua tha...
uski khusboo ka asar...
uske choone ka asar...
uski baaton ka asar...
Itna jaldi kaise mitta...
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Unn logon ne phirse khelna start kiya...
Ab Meethi jeet rahi thi...kyunki Tara gaana bata rahi thi ...aur Meethi aur Vasu gaa rahe the...ussne ab tak gaana nahi gayi thi...
Phir ek aisa point aaya...tara ne gaana toh bataya par...meethi aur Vasu ko gaana nahi aata tha...phir kya...Meethi aur Adi ne zidd ki...
tara se gaane ki...ussne kaha thik hai...
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Kehte hain...
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara.
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Maano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
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Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
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Kaise hum jaane, hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
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Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
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(humsafar toh tha main uss waqt...usske saath bus mein)
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Jeene ki wajah hi yehi marna issi ke liye
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Kehte hain
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye
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yeh gaana sun ...meri toh jaise duniya badal gayi...
Sach mein uska aur mera kya raabta tha...kya ehsaas tha...kaise main jaanta...
uss gaane ne mere dil ki haalat bayaan kar di...
kya woh bhi aisa sochti thi ...mera dil bechain ho gaya...
yeh ussne sirf gaana gaaya ya phir...ya phir iss ke phiche koi ehsaas tha...
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Mere liye iss gaane ka ek ek lafz pathtahr ki lakeer ban gya tha...
bilkul aisa hi main feel kar raha tha...
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sach mein kuch toh hai tujhse raabta...wahan woh gaana gaa rahi thi...aur yahan main yeh sab soch raha tha...
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Meethi ne kaha Mj tum bhi gao...uska kehna tha main start ho gaya...bina soche samjhe...
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Meharbaani jaate-jaate mujh pe kar gaya
Guzarta saa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya
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Tere nazaara mila, roshan sitaara mila
Taqdeer ki kashtiyon ko kinara mila
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Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri sauhbat mein duaayein hain ussi ke liye
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Tere milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere hi jaise kisi ke liye
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Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fiqar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye
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hum donon ne aakhiri para saath mein gaaya...
Sab hairaan...hum donon ka gaana sun kar...
Iss par sabne zor se clap kiya...
mere doston ne toh tara ki taarif mein pull bandh diye...
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Vasu: tara ...u r just awsummm dear...
Meethi aur Adi...tum zabardast ho...
Kya samaa bandha hai...dear...superb...
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Ab meri tarah sab uski aawaaz ke qaayel ho gaye ...
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iss tarah...uska aur mera raabta qaayam hua...
aur humari pasand ek bani...music...
Aur usska ehsaas...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Wow beautifully written!! These chapters have never failed to impress me!! Well done keep it up!! Awaiting next chapter!! Xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Do I have to say anything about this...
MAn I m short of words...

Shagu.. mwah... love u for this
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Worldpeace

Do I have to say anything about this...

MAn I m short of words...

Shagu.. mwah... love u for this

thanks Bani...
Love u too...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Awesome update 👏 👏

Shagu⭐️

kya likhti ⭐️ hoo - ye baar baar kehne ko majbor kar deti hoo 😃

MJ-Tara ke beech ki nazdikiyo😳 ko kya khub baya kiya hai👏

ek - ek ehsaas⭐️ jo tum ne likha hum ne mehsus kiya 👏

Tara ka itna accurate observation⭐️

MJ ka please hona Tara ke observation se 😃

Trip n fall😳 ka scene too mano mere samne chal raha hoo😳

Itna kafi nahi tha😉 , phir doono ne song gaya 👏

aur kya song selection👏 hai Shagu ⭐️

aaj tumhari taref mein lafz kam paad rahe hai ⭐️

😃

pure update ko padhne samay mere face par 😃 aur sukun tha 😊
Next part ke intezar mein..😉

Ehsaas[HUG]
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Archi21

Awesome update 👏 👏

Shagu⭐️

kya likhti⭐️ hoo - ye baar baar kehne ko majbor kar deti hoo 😃

MJ-Tara ke beech ki nazdikiyo😳 ko kya khub baya kiya hai👏

ek - ek ehsaas⭐️ jo tum ne likha hum ne mehsus kiya 👏

Tara ka itna accurate observation⭐️

MJ ka please hona Tara ke observation se 😃

Trip n fall😳 ka scene too mano mere samne chal raha hoo😳

Itna kafi nahi tha😉 , phir doono ne song gaya 👏

aur kya song selection👏 hai Shagu ⭐️

aaj tumhari taref mein lafz kam paad rahe hai ⭐️

😃

pure update ko padhne samay mere face par 😃 aur sukun tha 😊
Next part ke intezar mein..😉

Ehsaas[HUG]

ohhh Archi...thanks...
Mujhe bht khushi hui tumhe itna achcha laga...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Part 4
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Usski awaaz...uska andaaz...uska ehsaas...
Kya tha khaas...jo main khud ko rok na saka gaane se...
Mere uske saath gaane se...mere doston ke chehre ki rangat badal gayi...
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Yug ne mujhe dekhkar ishara kya...kyaa baat hai...
Wahan Adi mujhe dekhkar Meethi se keh raha tha...Bhai ne toh samaa bandh diya...
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aur aage... Woh sharmayi si...sabse taarif sunkar khush ho rahi thi...par mere aage thi main uska chehra nahi dekh paa raha tha...main apni hi jagah baitha tha...ussi soch mein mubtela...kahin usse bura na lag gaya ho...par main iss tarah...usske saath gaana...mujhe bohot bohot zyaada pasand aaya...
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aisa laga...
meri adhuri baat ko lafz mile...
Meri raat ko subah mili...
Meri zindagi ko ek roshan sitara mila...
Meri awaaz ko mukammal karne waali ek dhun mili...
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najaane uss raat...mein kinn kinn...lamhon se ...ehsaason se...jazbaaton se guzar raha tha...
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Chahta tha waqt wahi tham jaaye...uss raat ki subah na ho...
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Yahi soch raha tha ki maine phirse suna...
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woh aage baithi thi...meri seat ke wahan rakhe guitar par usski nazar padi...ussne kaha...
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Tara: Vasu...yeh Guitar kiska hai...
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Vasu: ohhh...Yeh Mj ka hai...Mj bohot achcha guitar bajata hai...aur uski awaaz mein toh jaadoo hai...
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Tara: awaaz mein toh waqai jaadoo hai...maine suna abhi...
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ohhh woh meri taarif kar rahi thi...uski yeh baat sunna tha ki...
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Vasu ne kaha...
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Vasu: Mj...ek aur song ho jaaye...Tara sunna chahti hai...guitar ke saath...
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Tara: Vasu maine kab kaha...
Vasu dheere se Tara ko kehne lagi...
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Vasu:arre agar tumhara naam loongi...toh kuch nahi kahega...hum kahenge toh nakhre dikhayega...
Tumhe sunna hai ki nahi...
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Tara: hmmm
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Vasu: Mj idhar aage aao...
Maine nahi kaha...Vasu uthkar peeche aayi aur mujhe khich kar aage le gayi ...
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Vasu: Tara tum ander ho jao...
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Tara ander ho gayi window seat par...ussne mujhe usske baaju mein bitha diya aur mere haath mein guitar de diya...
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Kaha ab gao...
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Main aur woh...phirse ek saath...saans atki hui thi...aur gaana ...kya gaaun... .
Yug aur Vasu khade mujhe cheers kar rahe the...
Meethi ne kaha...
Mj kuch romantic sa ho jaye...
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Maine usski taraf ek nazar daali...
Mere paas baithi...woh apni haseen aankhon se mujhe dekh rahi thi...
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Maine apni aankhen band ki...
uske khayaalon mein kho gaya...bina soche samjhe shuru ho gaya...
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Main teri ankhon mein rehta hoon tujhe pata na chale..
tere har pal mein guzra hoon
tujhe pata na chale...
Kare toh phir kya kare tere bin kaise jiye..
ankhon mein pyaar liye bolo kahan kahan phire...
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Khafa to hum bhi hai tum bhi ho humein pata na chale..
judai ka mujhe gham bhi hai koi aisi khata na karein...

Kare toh phir kya kare tere bin kaise jiye..
aankhoon mein pyaar liye bolo kahan kahan phire...
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Sajni paas bulao na ki dil aaj toota hai aaj toota hai
sajan maan jao na ki woh aaj rootha hai aaj rootha hai
koi usey manaye na Jaane ja dil tujhe hi chaaahe na
oooh ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo
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Humein dil se bhulao na yehi ab kehna hai..
ab kehna hai tum paas aaona aaona...
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Dere nare dere na na re...
(Sajni paas bulao na Sajan maan jaona Sajni paas bulao na)
Sajni paas bulao na ki dil aaj toota hai aaj toota hai
sajan maan jao na
ooo ooo
ooo wooo ooo
oo

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Aur phir maine apni aankhen kholi...gaate waqt sirf uska tasawwur mere dimaag mein...aur woh mere qareeb baithi thi...jab aankhen kholi toh sirf usko dekha...
Uske chehre ka rang udaa hua tha...aankhon mein halki si nami thi...
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Yeh mera waham tha...ya phir usse mere ehsaas ka andaaza ho gaya tha ...nahi nahi...aisa nahi ho sakta...
maine aisa kuch nahi kaha...
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Sabhi taali bajane lage...
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Vasu: Mj tumne isse pehle aaj tak ...itna achcha kabhi nahi gaaya...
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Meethi: Mj kya hai tumhe...kiss baat ka asar hai...itna asar awaaz mein...
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Yug: Bhai mere...aisa performance...kahin pyaar toh nahi ho gaya...
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Maine kaha...bakwaas mat kar...main uske jawaab ka intezaar kar raha tha...
Phir ussne kaha...
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Tara: tumhaari awaaz mein kashish hai...gehrayi hai...purity hai...kabhi khona mat...usse...
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Main kya kehta...jinki baatein woh kar rahi thi...woh sab ussi ki wajah se hua tha...khona lafz sun kar mujhe ...ab usse door hona yaad aa gaya...khone ka darr toh tha...woh mujhe phir kahan milne waali thi...yahi khayal tha...ek raat ki iss mulaaqaat ka gehra asar mujhpar ho raha tha...woh mujhpar haawi ho rahi thi...
par maine kaha...
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Thanks...aur uthkar peeche seat par aa gaya...
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Usska yeh kehna...mere dil ...dimaag par chaa gaya...
Mujhe sirf wahi sunai de rahi thi ...wahi dikhayi de rahi thi...
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~ tumhaari awaaz mein kashish hai...gehrayi hai...purity hai...kabhi khona mat...usse ~
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Ab kya karun main iss ehsaas ka...
Edited by ShagufElina - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Omg mj singing...
Shagu I really want this to happen in show too...

Hey can I request you something. ..

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