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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jaane kis baat ki wo mujhko sazaa deta hai.
Meri hasti hui aankho ko rula deta hai.
Hai ishq e joonun me mere asar kitna.
Wo her roz naya imtehaan leta hai.
Hai uski ye ada bhi khoob aye dil.
Khud hi dard deke dawa deta hai.
Main bhi dekhungi tujhe maang kar ek din.
Log kehte hai maangne se khuda milta hai.
Hai jamaane se zara alag wo mera masiha.
Jab bhi milta hai koi zakham naya deta hai.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woww..im so mesmerized with this whole 👏...such beautifully explains there relationship with this poem...i just loved this felt like reading again & again
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Posted: 11 years ago
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absolutely loved the poem..described perfectly the emotions of tara . are u a poet or what? if not, u should become one... 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hai jamaane se zara alag wo mera masiha.
Jab bhi milta hai koi zakham naya deta hai.
so so apt..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil

Woww..im so mesmerized with this whole 👏...such beautifully explains there relationship with this poem...i just loved this felt like reading again & again

thanks.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pieryrose

absolutely loved the poem..described perfectly the emotions of tara . are u a poet or what? if not, u should become one...
👏

mujhe shayari karna poem likhna bahut pasand hai. Nbt forum pe main her epi ke liye ek shayari likha karti thi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg!! this is brilliant,..
read it like 10 times in a row & feel like reading it again and again...

so aptly described...👏👏👏
please write more...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! Thats beautiful. Love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haye dil khush kar dia...

This is totally ebi type poem

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