ARDHIKA SS - MMZ Season 2 (updated - Chapter 3 on pg 11) - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Hi battu how r u? Hope your hand has fully mended. Am so glad u updated yesterday. Yes a treat for d special Sunday. I was sooo happy to have finally c ur chapter 2 when I was scrutinising d forum since last week. I really couldn't b patient... I know I really did pester u with thoz pms. But couldn't help it yaar as ur ff ws abt arjun going through hell to get radhika. Well even I ws pissed off with tat ILU scene and had v got an extension v could have seen radhikas reaction if she had seen it. Since I guess u r going to make her c it I badly wanted read ur take on it. But I personally feel Sam too shares a little bit of blame... But radhika could have never come out of d mess unscathed. It would have definitely uprooted her life... Well as to fore shadowing I don't mind it as each episode takes us closer to ardhika.. so will b happy to read it. Besides ur characterization is plain amazing as u have included interesting and strong and reliable character(arjuns frd in his new firm). Moreover all d other characters have grown emotionally and professionally. It's treat to read urs. Definitely worth d wait. Plz continue.. if possible update once a week.thank u. Kudoos to u. Take care.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
battu...
I like like liked ur update...
first I thought it was very short...later realized that u covered all characters and their emotions and the lines/circumstances drawn towards arjun and his state of being alone in his hell...
liked arjun's bff...
liked the coded message...
on whole...update is awesome...

thank u...
get well soon...take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
so so so gud,wonderful,superb update.
loved it a lot
contains a lot of suspense n
seems so exciting..
plz update soon
looking forward for d nxt update eagerly..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: lavv

i didnt know abt ur hand...

hope u r dng good now...
happy Valentine's day to u too...
thanks for d update...



n d update was too good...

i liked jasmine ...her friendship vth arjun...

anantika z good in reading arjun's smile it seems...

i liked d cryptic message...it was really good...

really nice update...i enjoyed reading it...

i am already looking forward to read d next update...take care of ur health...


/// i liked this line from ur reply to Ramyagirish...
And I want him to go through hell... for making me see that toilet scene where he says ILU to Sam. ... even i dnt like dat scene...dat scene z not needed...upto flirting z fine...even though he didnt meant wat he said...n his situation z tough there...its not r8...so he needed little hell for sure//


Awww yes... i had a slight accident in december, I dislocated my shoulder bone from my collar bone, and since it was the right arm, I was completely out of circuit as far as any work was concerned. The post recovery care is much more painful because muscles pain like crazy, so have to take things slowly.

Other than that, brain is working full speed. 😃

I'm glad you liked Jasmine's friendship with Arjun. I wanted him to have that. After all he plucked himself from the only friend circle he had and moved to another city just so he could have Neil stop his Radhika sorties. Jasmine btw is an older woman, much older than Arjun even. Yet both found friendship together... see when Neil gets his chashni back... its not going to be all hunky dory. Sam will have her idiot to support her through the hell that's going to break loose. I wanted Arjun to have someone to fall back on. And Jasmine will be a perfect foil for that.

Anantika does not understand the smile actually... she makes her own interpretation of it. And its this interpretation thats gonna cause havoc later ... stop! stop! stop ... battu you will give everything away. shhh!

😆 😆

you liked Neil's sense of humour in his message... I scratched my head real hard over that one. Since i wanted Jas to know only the nicknames... Samandar singh, idiot, changoomangoo... i decided why should arjun go scot free on this... saala kitni baar hamare radhu ko woh anaap shanaap bol raha tha... pehle panauti, fir raaste ka patthar, fir behenji... iska bhi mujhe kachumbar banana tha, why should he be the only one to be called by his real name.

Uske naam ka bhi kabada hona chahiye, and then i suddenly remembered how Neil used to call him pineapple... and that's how the cryptic message was born. 😉😛

I'm glad you found the update good... thank you for chiming in.
Means a lot.

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love,
battu.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: esprit_00

LOVED it!!!! Welcome back - hope you are feeling better :)



Thanks babe!!! you saying you loved it, means a lot to me.

You know naaa... this is my first fan fiction ever. In fact i have never written fiction ever before this, so though i get nervous, i am also enjoying the process of writing tremendously. I cant believe that I am writing all this.

And I am so indebted to Ardhika, for being the inspiration... without them, I wouldn;t have ever mustered the courage to take something like this on.

***

about my hand... its still mighty painful. but i cant stop living life because there is pain. through out i am reminded of the Renoir quote - "The pain passes, but the beauty remains".

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Love
Battu.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: mmzmahi

Will be waiting for more! 😃..I hope this new girl finally brings Arjun and Radhika closer!


Thank you... 😊

About Jasmine... she ain't there to bring Ardhika together. But yes she will be there for Arjun, coz Arjun's gonna need her crazy in the coming days.

😆😆

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Love
Battu.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
OMG I don't know for how long I've been waiting for a story like this one. Thanks a lot for writing it. You are an amazing writer. I just can't believe it is your first story! It's so wonderful! And I really hope you recover soon.

Coming to the update, I guess Arjun was imagining Radz and Miss Julliet :p thought it was for her. Poor miss Julliet :p. I actually pity the women who work with Arjun. They don't know that only one woman can grab his attention and that is his beloved wife Radhika. Poor them :p

I don't have a good feeling about this Ana. I think she is going to create problems for ArDhika. Is she going to try to pull them apart? Then I'm saying in advance that I hate her! No one messes with my ArDhika😡

And yes I want Arjun to go through a real hell and I just can't wait! Please update this story soon. Every chapter is suspenseful and I really can't handle it. Please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon if possible. Love you😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: bajarbattu


Awww yes... i had a slight accident in december, I dislocated my shoulder bone from my collar bone, and since it was the right arm, I was completely out of circuit as far as any work was concerned. The post recovery care is much more painful because muscles pain like crazy, so have to take things slowly.

Hope u vl recover very soon...take care of ur health n dnt strain much...

Other than that, brain is working full speed. 😃... yah...we totally understand dat gal...

I'm glad you liked Jasmine's friendship with Arjun. I wanted him to have that. After all he plucked himself from the only friend circle he had and moved to another city just so he could have Neil stop his Radhika sorties. Jasmine btw is an older woman, much older than Arjun even. Yet both found friendship together... see when Neil gets his chashni back... its not going to be all hunky dory. Sam will have her idiot to support her through the hell that's going to break loose. I wanted Arjun to have someone to fall back on. And Jasmine will be a perfect foil for that.

Anantika does not understand the smile actually... she makes her own interpretation of it. And its this interpretation thats gonna cause havoc later ... stop! stop! stop ... battu you will give everything away. shhh!

😆 😆

agreed totally vth u abt Anantika...i got her interpretations...hav to say wrong interepretations...n looking forward to see how u r gng to unfold d story..

you liked Neil's sense of humour in his message... I scratched my head real hard over that one. Since i wanted Jas to know only the nicknames... Samandar singh, idiot, changoomangoo... i decided why should arjun go scot free on this... saala kitni baar hamare radhu ko woh anaap shanaap bol raha tha... pehle panauti, fir raaste ka patthar, fir behenji... iska bhi mujhe kachumbar banana tha, why should he be the only one to be called by his real name.

Uske naam ka bhi kabada hona chahiye, and then i suddenly remembered how Neil used to call him pineapple... and that's how the cryptic message was born. 😉😛


truly speaking, mera sense of humor thoda kam hai yaar..meine tho vaisa bilkul nahi socha...lol...i was like d message was well portrayed...bcz after 5 years(i think i am r8..), still he was in his memory of apple, pinapple n orange n sweet details as fresh like today...making it to portray dat today also he nevr gave up on those days...n making arjun also see dat...i know, mein thoda jyadha hi sochthi hun...

I'm glad you found the update good... thank you for chiming in.
Means a lot.

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love,
battu.



take care...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Hiii BAttu,...How could I missed reading your update,...

RES,...

Will comment sooner,...I'm in cloud nine after knowing you updated second chappy,...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: bajarbattu


Awww yes... i had a slight accident in december, I dislocated my shoulder bone from my collar bone, and since it was the right arm, I was completely out of circuit as far as any work was concerned. The post recovery care is much more painful because muscles pain like crazy, so have to take things slowly.

Other than that, brain is working full speed. 😃

I'm glad you liked Jasmine's friendship with Arjun. I wanted him to have that. After all he plucked himself from the only friend circle he had and moved to another city just so he could have Neil stop his Radhika sorties. Jasmine btw is an older woman, much older than Arjun even. Yet both found friendship together... see when Neil gets his chashni back... its not going to be all hunky dory. Sam will have her idiot to support her through the hell that's going to break loose. I wanted Arjun to have someone to fall back on. And Jasmine will be a perfect foil for that.

Anantika does not understand the smile actually... she makes her own interpretation of it. And its this interpretation thats gonna cause havoc later ... stop! stop! stop ... battu you will give everything away. shhh!

😆 😆

you liked Neil's sense of humour in his message... I scratched my head real hard over that one. Since i wanted Jas to know only the nicknames... Samandar singh, idiot, changoomangoo... i decided why should arjun go scot free on this... saala kitni baar hamare radhu ko woh anaap shanaap bol raha tha... pehle panauti, fir raaste ka patthar, fir behenji... iska bhi mujhe kachumbar banana tha, why should he be the only one to be called by his real name.

Uske naam ka bhi kabada hona chahiye, and then i suddenly remembered how Neil used to call him pineapple... and that's how the cryptic message was born. 😉😛


I'm glad you found the update good... thank you for chiming in.
Means a lot.

-
love,
battu.


Hiii. I read ur ff just now. couln't help but commenting. After reading ur ff n all the comments i hav come to conclusion that everyone is on verge of revenge from arjun. lol. Well well Me too counts in this category.

i liked ur commented lines frm the chap 2. why should he be the only one called with his real name. lol. it was superb. I really liked the crypt message. it was too gud. No wonder ur brain is working on full speed. 😃. I loved this ff truly. i wish u a speedy recovery n hope everything goes fine.

Juliet n her romeo. Sorry for saying this modern juliet, ur romeo has become devdas 5 years ago, 😆.
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