Ardhika FF (w/ NeSam)- Missing Pieces -Updated Act 11, Pg 32, 18/11 - Page 16

Originally posted by: aartee22

please dont stop here...

this is so beautiful..a few more chapters plz...

Originally posted by: jey3ram

Esprit,...

cox of my upcoming exams,i missed ur story updates but today i gave it a try before starting my studies n completed all the missing parts,...

What to say,...u r beyond the level of normal appreciation from me,...M so choti to appreciate u deary,...👏👏👏

But one word as Rose said u r my inspiration in most of the things.U r perfect critic n now u proved u r perfect writer too,..

i started my day with ur missing parts,...& loved ur poem too,...

Now its time for my usual schedule,...& i wanna gift sth to u,...& please continue ur missing pieces,...i ll read it despite my busy schedule.

This is for my sweat heart Esprit for her wonderful writing

P.S:I pasted the same in ardhika thread too n my love for u will never lost ever deary🤗

Originally posted by: Ramyagirish

Hi it's beautiful.. lovely and fantastic. Please continue. If possible bring in a suaag a raat...😉. Also bring in their sweet cute and their tashan moments. In short bring in Wat made them ARDHIKA in ur style and .That's y we still love them. It's kind request please don't stop here. The dress and earrings were lovely. Also I personally feel Arjun should also apologize after all he did hurt her a lot. And also he should regret calling her a behenji... He he... It's my personal feeling. But definitely continue. Thank u for d update.

Originally posted by: bajarbattu

Finally!!!!!

I was so worried I wouldn't get back my account... but magically your PM did the trick. And I'm so glad to be back, after this looong break to see such amazing story being penned down by you. 👏

Take a bow!!!! You excelled today. 🤗


Loved the small details you've put in, like the blush kurti... awww so sweet of Sam to buy her a pink dress (a colour that arjun loves) she is going all out to make it all right between them both, in such a thoughtful way. Its her way of healing their relationship... and i liked it that she gave it to her as a wedding present, specially after that episode the PH showed where she throws all her wedding gifts on Radhika and insults her in front of the entire Song bird!

Yeah that was the point ... i thought rather than Sam apologizing over and over, it's best for her to right all the wrongs she did. It started on the show when she conspired with Dada-ji to reunite Ardhika... then the wedding gift (especially after the scene she created at BS)... so this was a start. In fact that's why i made her re-introduce herself as a Malhotra (Neil's wife) - it was a symbolic gesture.

Me like... 😛 can we have more such turnaround moments between Sam and Radhika, where one by one she rights all the wrongs done to Radhika in the name of Arjun. For me that will cement their healing and pave the way for a renewed bond that will never ever break!

awww... NEIL... such a nautanki he is. Lovely song you made him sing. That was ace writing. But what took my heart away was ... his open smile when Radhika knocks on their room. Thank you for reiterating that he always believed in her. I was watching that episode where he tells her to eat her mangalsutra... and somewhere in that epi he says... Meri chaashni aisa kar hi nahi sakti... awww gosh! I love that "meri chaashni" bit and I love Neil for owning her so much despite his love for Sam. This is not a brother sister bond, this is not even a girl-boy friend bond... this is complete ownership on a completely different level, and I am so happy that Indian television gave us this bond... they are like soulmates that are not romantically inclined to each other... if you know what I mean! THAT"S RARE! VERY RARE!

I know what you mean. It's a true friendship bond IMO ... even in the beginning episodes he truly cared for 'his chashni'. And honestly, this was the easiest & most fun bit for me to write!!

He just knows her so well... so when he opens the door in your story and flashes that smile in her in abject pleasure... oh! I got glimpse into a very rare relationship, so thank you for that!


...And last but not the least Arjun!!!! OMG... such a GENTLEman he is literally... you made him read her diary... and i just loved that banter between them. It was amazing... him saying you write dark stuff... he never expected her to do that, for him she has always been light personified, so he was taken aback by all that pain she obviously had been through when he was not a part of her life. And her revealing that it was so ... so easily.

She didnt mind that he'd read her diary, she wants her life to be an open book to him, that was her cue to share everything about herself with him and quietly asking him in an indirect way to share himself with her.

I wanted to showcase some real and normal moments between them, yet still intimate on an emotional level. Because to me, though they know each other, but now that all barriers between them no longer exist, there is a different type of intimacy and light-heartedness. So I was trying to write that out.

...and in the end, i loved that embrace that started with a soft kiss. In my mind I can imagine and reimagine that one embrace again and again... it was penned so gently. so gracefully... that note of GRACE was a good point to end this piece on.

This was quite a challenge to write for me... mainly because i am not that good with romance. But I am glad the "tenderness" I tried for in my writing came across. I didn't want to make it teeny-bopper or overly cheesy or all smut / fluff. So that's a tough line to walk on when writing. And I am so happy you loved the end bit. 😊

for both being so much GRACE in each other's lives.

Thank you espirit! ❤️ This was one of the most finest you've ever wrote on Ardhika.

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much love,
Battu.

Originally posted by: esprit_00

Wow, such a lovely compliment coming from you is heart-warming... as I have always loved reading your views on DYM when the show was on. You've always been so poignant in describing Arjun & Radhika's characters, so this means a lot to me 😳.

My comments in green above.

Thank you so much!!

Originally posted by: nisha_hc_bs_dd

beautiful !!!

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

so beautiful update

Originally posted by: mmzmahi

This was really well written..I loved the part when Neil notices Majnu Arjun looking at his lifeline and in turn teasing him.. In the show,Neil suspecting something was up between Ardhika would have been great..I'm glad that you incorporated that part in your story

Originally posted by: Midhula3110

I totally loved dis part.. D way dey are taking deir life slowly n steadily ahead is penned down beautifully 😊 👏