Ardhika FF (w/ NeSam)- Missing Pieces -Updated Act 11, Pg 32, 18/11

lovv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

it was really nice...

wen i was reading forth scene, i just wanted to see dat one screen...

hmm..waiting to see how sam z gng to apologize...

not only slapping, dat insult in d office z too much...so just wanted to see hw it unfolds...i knw radhika vl go n hug sam in d first instance she sees her...

i thought sam vl apologize to radhika's paretns for slapping her n all...

these ppl r more good than radhika it seems...may b bcz of dadaji n mala's sake...

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esprit_00

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

@Lovv

Yeah scene 5 was supposed to be Sam-Radhika stuff. As for Radz family, they don't know the complete truth and I don't think they want to either as long as their daughter is happy and her marriage is back on track. Plus Sam earned brownie points / part redemption in the parents' eyes when she helped dada-ji in his plan to reunite Ardhika.

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iheartChai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

My condolences E for your loss

This chapter was so nice...the epic confession scene read just as romantic and passionate as what was played out in the actual episode.

Cannot wait for the next chapter. I am sure tying up the lose ends...Sam and Radhika's apology scene is next 😊

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esprit_00

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Sweets101
Lovely lovely lovely...thanks for the pm

Thank you!! I shall definitely PM everyone out once i update the next chapter.

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esprit_00

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: hermoso
Loving the way all puzzles r getting fixed . Finally radhika nd arjun united .grt going .

Thanks, I tried to keep it as in line with the actual story that played out on screen. I think my next chapter will have a cute Arjun Radhika interaction.

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esprit_00

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Huma-
loved ittt

Thanks! 😊

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esprit_00

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: Aishwarza1
Aaaww this was so sweet 😳 Wish it was shown like this in the show I could imagine the whole situation!! Best part was Majnu Arjun 😉 Will be waiting for the next act 😊

Thanks ... i shall try and update next chapter end of this week.

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esprit_00

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: Aradiv
You are such a romantic, Esprit!! Was smiling all through the read. Absolutely loved it! :-)

Thank You!!

I am so bad at writing romantic stuff to be honest.

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esprit_00

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: -rosel-
Awsome again...loved it...i loved the part wer radhika questions arjun and asks if her dadaji and mom being part of the plan and arjun's visit to hrisikesh the previous week...and neil sensing sam's guilt...

I am glad you liked thta ... I always wondered how things would have panned out right after the love confession, heheee so that was my imagination taking over (in a logical manner).

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esprit_00

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Posted: 9 years ago

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