Dil ki Dhadkan SS Part 3 Updated pg 2

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DIL KI DHADKAN PART 1
Mumbai the city known for cinemas...people with gold heart..😊
lived a person...named ARJUN MEHRA who was one the
co chairperson of the famous THE BIRD SONG... it is the organization known for its illusions... innovations..
maybelline newyork was the brand client of Bird song..


in the story... i narrate the characters as an when they
evolve...lets start the story...


the past ...made an intense effect on arjun wt happened that he has become so stone hearted...no emotions...no feelings
to any one...

the company was hiring freshers...

radhika a simple girl from hrishikesh with her bag full of dreamscame to mumbai ...to fufill it .she..wanted to become a writer..but she needed a job she had applied for birdsong as an intern
she was shy,extrovert,happy ,kind,innocent,..she is a simple girl
who didnt dream too big...she only thought she lives her life at her
best...

neil and sam were childhood friends...they too work for birdsong
sam was arjun girlfriend...sam loves arjun..but neil loves sam but arjun loved sam or not his heart didnt gave the answer..😊

radhika was engaged to saral😲 his friend in hrishikesh ..
he was too possessive about her...didnt leave her to
do what she wished.

😊
so now we shift to the Radhika's first day @ birdsong

radhika left her home..she was staying with her mom 😊

she came near the entrance gate by auto

radhika:bhaiya kitna hua?

auto wala: 40 rupees madam..

radhika: this is too much it didnt even take 10 min
how come it is 40 ill give you 25rupees bas...

autowala:kya madam...apko pata hai auto gas ke price...
chal 35 rupees
😊
radhika: 30rupees

autowala: 33...
radhika : no
autowala:teek hai...dijiye..
radhika gave him the money ...as she turned towards the bird song building
..she looked up and thought ..this is were i will be goining to work...from now
my life is goining to change..😃

as she walks she look ..at documents if correct..
she goes near the security and ask him to show the main building😊
he takes her to the biggest building among other...and leaves..
she takes a look at the building ..as she climbs...the step..
some one from the opposite side bumps to her ... she crosses and their hand connects
the guy hold her hand from falling...😃
she closes her eyes...😳
the guy is Mr arjun mehra...☺️he had a broad muscular phsique wearing his formal
suit with glasseshe looked damn hot...
he stood at one side hlding her... and his other side his phone he was chatting with..stopped
the call
he removed his blue shinny glasses and saw her...

he was gone with her beauty...he saw her closed eyes...
radhika started to open her eyes...she saw him ...
arjun kept on looking at her ...her juicy pink lips was muttering something
he saw her steadily and pulled her close to him...she started to shake and stood close infront of him😛

her silk hair was covering her face...he gently moved his hand and made them 😳
stay behind...she was breathing fast...he gently moved closer...(manmarsiyan...bg )☺️
she left her documents...it was dispersed on the floor... she shifted her eye ,toward the
ground and looked up to him ...he saw her angrilly and left her hand suddenly..she took itinstantly...😊
she started to collect the documents...
he saw his phone ringing... he left the place...before she turned towards him he had gone...😊

she thought ...wt happened to me...who is this guy...he is strange 😳
she walked up to the receptionist...she said to wait ...near the lobby...
😊
After 20 minutes of waiting
the receptionist called radhika and said miss piyali is waiting for you mam
radhika:thank you

she went to the room ...it was dark...
piyali:welcome radhika

radhika:good morning mam

piyali:so feeling nervous radhika.. its your first day am i right..

radhika: no mam ...(she said lie..she was damn nervous but she didnt showcased)😛

radhika gave her documents..and piyali ..go throughed every thing and signed some
papers...she gave it to radhika ...

piyali: radhika...you will be our project designer intern..there is numerous division
i have gone through ur resume .. u wanted to become writer ...then why did you apply to this job..😊

radhika:first of all thank you for giving a wonderful job...yes mam i wanted to become writer
but its not the correct time mam...i wanted to test my skills and show my talent has an designer..
so i applied...i won t give you a single chance to be worried of me😊

piyali:excellent i like your spirit...now coming to work..youll be working under Mr Arjun Mehra..
who is our co chairman and ceo...under him...my daughter samira khanna is also working😳
your job is to make the designs and help her to execute the project ...got it radhika

radhika smiles...
radhika: ok mam

piyali: good you may start your work from now...
radhika says thank you and leaves the cabin

she asks a girl where can she meet mr arjun mehra..😳
the girl replies he has already left the place some time
radhika ask about samira..girl says she too has left
so radhika wonders..wt to do

neil:hi miss...😆

radhika:ah... radhika!😊
neil: miss radhika nice name...u r finding for sam ryt?😃

radhika:not sam samira..😉
neil: (smiles) its sam...dnt call her samira

radhika:yeah i was looking for her..😊
neil: come ill show u r place of work
he takes her to her place
radhika: u r good name ..😛

neil: u can call me neil dnt add sir to it i am allergic formal callings😊

radhika smiles..

radhika: yes sir...oh sorry neil..by the way you can call me radhika😊

neil: u dont need to say...i call by my self😊
he gives some sample works ...and tells her to read..it
and brings a coffee to her make her easy
she starts to become friendly with him
...😊

to be continued
precap:neil ask sam ...do you really love arjun?...while arjun see his new intern and he gets angry why ? stay tuned




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow wonderful raksha 😊 👍🏼
You are writing beautifully,amazing
Plz continue it dear don't stop
Loved it. 😃
Plz add me to your buddy list and PM me your next updates
Edited by Asheley - 10 years ago
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Superb Start.. Ardhika first meet ..
Nice one yaar, liked the first part.. Precap is good.. Continue soon..
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wow nice... superb start... expectng so much... since u started very well... update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you so much guyzz...so not taking your time much
here it goes..😊😃


part 2:The Second Meeting 😳


radhika was working enthusiastically ..her job made her pride😊
she read the sample designs project and started designing the assigned one...😊

samira.. .. also commonly known as sam..was waiting for arjunthey started their dating over 2 months since arjun had takeover bird song..waited nearly 1 hour...int he coffee shop for him and lost herpatience ..she picked her phone called him thrice...but he didnt pick it up once... she was bold ,stylish but she had a simple heart too...😊


arjun ...came to coffee shop...he saw her and grinned
she smiled..looking at him😃

he came to her table where she had sat ..she wore a light greenjumpsuit with matching emerald set ...made makeover ..to her face..
he hugged her ..she hugged him back
😊
samira:arjun u made me to wait so long why?

arjun:sam its not very easy...i had to come like a theif
no one should see me hw is it possible..😆

sam: y..it's not a big deal..well i know we didnt discuss
about our relationship to no one except neil...dont get scared
...my baby

arjun:sam..i am not scared of anyone..well scared word doesntexist in my world😲

sam:(smiles) i know
arjun:sorry sam... i waited u...

sam: this is last warning arjun...if u do this next time ill make u as my PA...😆

they both laugh

The waiter comes..ask for the order ..arjun sees the menu..

arjun:one hot black coffee...and for you?

he looks at sam

sam:hmmm i want...a hot chocolate fudge and an cappuccino..

the waiter writes the order and leaves...

arjun:so... any one got the oppurtunity to work with sam?


sam:not yet arjun...well neil was saying there is an intern coming today😳

sam: for your sake i left...meeting the intern and came to meet you
here ...u came late...well i will meet him or her lately this eve

arjun nods...he rememeber the silky hair the dark black eyes
the pink juicy lips...her eyebrows..her earrings...every thing..
he suddenly ...wake ups..by sam's words

sam: arjun...arjun..wt happened

arjun: huh nothing...

sam: i am going to talk about our relationship to mom and dad shortly

arjun:oh...sam its a good idea..i too wanted to tell u this

sam: really..then we both should ask..
arjun: of course...i can speak to your parents..

sam:what about your dee?

arjun:nandu...i already talked to her...she is happy for us
sam smiles...

sam:wonderful..then its only mom and dad

the waiter comes and keeps their ordered items on the
table..😊
they both eat and drink ...
after a while...


radhika:oh ...there is a sign need to be done ..by samira
she saw the clock...she saw the entrance door ..no one cme😊
she goes to neils cabin

radhika:neil sir? can i..

neil shows a both the hands up...
radhika laughs...😃😆
neil:come in miss radhika

radhika: ok... neil there is a sign need to be done by sam..

neil:samm...show me the file

he sees the file..

neil:ok radhika ill call her ..
he calls sam

sam will be gazing at arjun
arjun...will be staring at her..they both will be interrupted ..
by the call..

sam picks up her phone from her bag..she smiles..😳

sam:oh...this idiot

she attend the call

sam:hello sir...u cant live me to have 5 minutes with my life

neil:hello maharani devi...i am not disturbing u r life...there isa sign need to be done...as our new yuvarani has ordered..😃

radhika sees neil and laughs...

neil sees her

neil:see she is laughing...like you ..you girls doesnt knw
anything else except laugh...😃

sam becomes serious

sam:who is it neil? why are you calling her yuvarani

arjun looks at sam..
neil: calm down maharani ...she is your intern😛😉

samira...calms down
sam:ill be there ...by evening..

neil:come nw ...this is urgent the file😛
must be sent to the maybelline company soon by eve

sam:alryt ...i ll come

neil: see you

sam: bye

she ends the call
arjun:what happened sam?

sam:there s an intern which mom has hired to help me..
she has completed the design and wants my autograph..
so i must go...arjun😕

arjun:oh...ok ill drop you as i too need to finalize the deal with some clients...let's go
they leave the coffee shop and comes to bird song

as they come near the entrance

sam : i want to meet neil..you go ill catch you up later

arjun:fine take care..

she gives a light hug him ...and leaves..

arjun puts on his glasses..and walks...😎
radhika...will be doing her sketches...she feels awkward...the
air wind starts to blow.. her sheets began to fly...all her co workers
are busy with their work ...she tries to grab her sheets..😉
it will be flying near the steps... she goes..while arjun stiffly walking she bumps to him again...
the same thing the same girl...the same place..
he grabs her waist this time and push her towards..him
he gets anger with in seconds...she looks on (bg title track )

neils cabin

sam: neil..

neil sees her

neil:hello maharani..

sam goes and puts her hand on his collar

neil: wt tiger...feeling anger on this rat..😛😆

sam: u...hw dare you call some yuvarani..huh in phone
that too with me..
she gives a punch😆

neil: wait...listen

she gives another punch
he screams
he holds her hand tightly pushes her to wall

neil: why are you acting like this...😕

sam: wt acting...😛
neil:overacting...😆

sam smiles...neil releases and smiles and looks down

neil: sam..can i ask you something..

sam:first tell me about that intern...
neil:ok...madam...she is radhika from hrishikesh..she is simple yet charming by work...she is dedicated..😛😉

sam:hold on...charming..hw do you knw that..
u saw her today hw cme to knw about her😃😆

neil:relax...sam..she is just an intern and friend ofcourse
why are you taking it seriously...hw was your date..

sam:okok that's all ryt...oh yeah ..arjun was great😊

neil:sam...do you love arjun...😕😲

sam saw neil's eyes...with something which she didnt see it
in arjun for her...she however denied the fact neil can never be a lover to her but the best buddy ...in her life more than anyone else than her mom and dad..he always been there for her
her whole life..however she didnt feel for neil...😭she did..but couldnt realise that...😳that was the real fact...

neil: i said do you love arjun sam?

sam:arjun is my boyfriend neil come on..

neil:this is not the answer...

they both look at eachother

...

radhika:hello...hello😃
he was busy making her burn and resisted his feelings upon the arjun was staring her ...but didnt response..he hold her tight 😡
girl😲

radhika:let go ff me...please..

he realised...his grip has making her hurt he let go ...

radhika: who are you ...? From morning your troubling me

arjun looked anger...

arjun: i dont speak to strangers...u understand..u r troubling me😆
radhika: hello mr smart...dont be over smart u guys are like this only waiting for a chance...😃

arjun stops her...
arjun:dont overflow gal ...or else i should make stop it..😆
radhika: i will complain to the boss... got it for u r action
😃
arjun:boss...?who are you?😃

radhika: i am radhika..intern ...at birdsong works for mr arjun mehra🤢
and samira khanna..
arjun smiles...😛

radhika: why are you smilimg...i know who you are you are mr smart😛
wants to meet mr arjun for job..ryt..so only u r wearing a suit with glasses...to impress him
🤣
arjun:i...🤣..
radhika stops him
radhika: i know i know you want to apply for intern..but change your mind🤣
i got the offer..nw leave..or else i ll complain

arjun:stop it..i cant here a word from u... hw dare you talk to me like that😃

radhika laughs ...😆

radhika:dont be over smart.. i said...

he looks at her angrilly..

to be continued...

what happened next
interesting..

wanted your feedback..

precap:arjun at the cabin ...radhika goes to meet sam ...neil teases radhika
chasni arjun looks at radhika...laughing with neil gets jealous..☺️
sam becomes friend with radhika😊


Edited by rakshamanian - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome
Just rad both parts
Interesting concept
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey... back again... i must say an awesme update... specially did ardhika part... der argument is quite funny... liked it... update soon... da...
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Good update... Precap seems more interesting.. Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow raksha you are really good
What a wonderful story
I loved the conversation b/w Radikha and arjun
It is really funny
PM me your next updates

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow very nice great job...keep writing...

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