ArDhika SS - ch7 pg24 - 09/02 - Against all odds - by jey3ram

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aglaeca9

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Great updates...
continue n do pm me..

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Ubahara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

I loved it. Really you are a brilliant writer Renu.
God bless you

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rana.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Very nice updates..
Continue soon n do pm me..

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shrutigaur37

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

it was a wonderful update...

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niranjana

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Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Waiting eagerly for this updates.wonderful update

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don girls

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Awesome
And the game begins

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hari1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Superb update renu. Ur writing skills r amazing dear.love u... Keep writing...

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lavv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

thanks for d update Renu...

u know wat i felt wen i entered d forum...u guys(writers) r so good at d same time bad...bcz we got update after update on same time...other wise vl b waiting like lost puppies...so dats y some wat bad...not in a bad way though...

totally liked d update...

u explained radhika's inner battle vth brain n heart nicely...

both radhika n arjun r gng thro's d r8 phase to solve d problem ..its needed...

ok, liked ansh's telling no one z caring for him in piyali's room , wen radhika left after arjun's offer...nice trick to get radhika n ansh to his place n to spend time vth them...

so arjun got to know abt radhika's story...nice...

u know i was thinking on d lines of radhika needed to tel neil abt d guy being arjun...n neil already found dat...

but u answered dat question so well...i reallly liked dat line gal...

"There are no secrets in this world that time doesn't reveal itself Neil,..."... i heard dat line n read many times...d way u used it was good...

i am hoping radhika also got neil knows abt arjun...after d first meet, n now, also his words made dat point clear wen he said, who's presence n all...

wat i liked most z, neil telling radhika dat, he didnt need answers bcz if it hurt her...he didnt want to know...n he vl b there for her was good...

n looking forward to read d next chapter...

take care...