ArDhika SS - ch7 pg24 - 09/02 - Against all odds - by jey3ram - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AMU1234

WOW RENU, it's ameena again...what to do yaar? I just can't stop from commenting...pls update asap...I lovin this story sooo muchhh...I'm trying my best to contol myself but see I can't...angel thank u sooo much for this amazing plot...



Oh my gosh,...Ammena,..You,..My sweet don,...M glad to see your comment here my sweetheart,..Thank you so much deary and yes,..We should thank Angel for this wonderful plot,...I dinn do much to continue this ss,...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

very well written
u hv portrayed each n every emotion beautifully..
n of course justice to angel..
do continue soon



Thanks a lot dear,...

YOu know,..M glad that you liked this chapter

And I hope,I'll do some justice to her creation as you said,...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jaben

renu super epi dear. absolutely fantastic. The presentation hall, sam, radz, neil convo super. Piyali is very affectionate towards radz n ansh. It was very gud to see. Arjun fuming in anger, n staring radz. it was fun to see. He has really gone mad.

Radz is too gud. Can't see her in this state. She is loving him n hating him at the same time. U explained it beautifully her state of heart. N she can't do anything abt it. ARjun knows the truth now. Oh he is so scattered. Feels so bad that he wants a normal life with radz n ansh but he is unable to do. But make arjun suffer for his deeds. He loved her so much that he can't see her with another person then how can he do like this.

Now the past seems more imp n plays a crucial role here. What happened with nandu? why did it affect arjun so much ? so many ques.
waiting for the next update.



Thank you so much yaar,...

M glad you liked this turnover in the story,...And dont worry,Arjun gonna suffer a lot,...

Yes,Here Past plays a major role and It will be revealed as story unfolds,...I dinn like keeping suspense for a long,...As it will increase as well as reduce our interest,...I hope you will like the next chapters too
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Lovely update... Can't wait to see Arjun on his knees and Radhika giving him attitude :)



Oh my Angel,...

My sweet partner,...M sooo happy that you liked this chapter,...

Thank you so much deary,...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: don girls

awesome update

finally all of radhika anger came out



Thanx dear,...

Yes but still some anger buried deep in her heart will come out as her hatred in the upcoming chapters,...Let's see,How arjun gonna handle this,...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KaShforever06

Awesome update..

Radhika become so strong..
Finally she gave Arjun much needed talk..
Arjun finally got to know Ansh is his son..
Wonder what he will do now..
Arjun is in deep regret now..
Thanks for the pm..
Continue soon



Thank you so much yaar,...

Let's see,..What Arjun gonna do?,..He will regret for his actions for sure,..But,He wont show his pain to Radz na,...So,Let's see How he gonna handle this from now,...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hari1403

Wow renu . U r really superb dear i like ur way of writing dear .It's really amazing update dear. Arjun's burning with jealousy with the thought of radz being with another man .But i wonder what will be his situation after knowing the biggest truth of his life 'ansh' .He should go through lots n lots of pain morethan which radz had gone through after his betrayal,after knowing she is pregnant with his child if she didn't have her friends especially neil by her side at that time she couldn't be able to overcome all that pain n become strong.So he should suffer more by seeing his son calling someone as dad. This pain is needed for him before uniting with radz n ansh. Waiting eagerly for next update.



Thank you so much HAri,...

Dont worry yaar,..He gonna suffer a lot from now,...

You are right,...His son calling some one dad itself a big punishment for him,...Further,He lost his love from Radz too,..She hates him for his deeds,..Though She dinn wanna take revenge for his deeds,yet she taking Revenge on him indirectly,...Whatever the past may be,..What he did to Radz is a punishable one,..So,He will get his punishment for sure,...
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Posted: 9 years ago
update soon I jus luv story of angel and yurs.
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Hiii friends,...I hope you all will like this chapter,...As usual Ignore My Grammatical errors here and there,...I din own the characters or this Story,...

Chapter 6:Against all the Odds

The real strength of a man isn't how hard he hits or how much weight he can lift,...It's in the burdens he can understand and overcome,...Yes Today,Arjun lost his real strength in his life by his stupid Revenge,...He understood one thing now that he was held responsible for his own self destruction in crushing Radhika's life by losing both his Radhika and his Ansh,... The reality stuck him hard as he felt physical pain on his wounds in his hand,...But,this pain is nothing when compared to the real shattering of his heart,...

He walked slowly towards the conference hall as it looks like he was walking without soul like a machine,...The vision of his Radhika and Ansh there grasped his full attention,..He lovingly watched the duo convo from outside thru glass window,...

In conference Hall,...

Ansh is laying on Radz lap on the couch ,...

Ansh:Mumma,...Are you angry with me?

Radz: No Ansh,...I never be angry with my hero,...

Ansh:Then,Why you scolded me before that uncle mumma,...You only said na,..If someone does wrong,we should ask them boldly,...

Radz:Haan Ansh,...But,We shouldn't forget to give them Respect na,...

Ansh:Oh!Sorry mumma,..Next time,I wont repeat this,...I'm your hero hai na mumma,...

Saying so,Ansh kissed Radz cheeks,...

Radz:Haan Hero,...Now,Its time for my hero to sleep,...Mumma has lot of works to do,...Ok,..Cummon,...close your eyes,...

Ansh:Hmmm,...

Ansh opened his one eye slowly to check what Radz doing,...

Radz:Ansh,...Mumma gonna beat you,..Close your eyes,...

Ansh laughed loudly and began,..

Ansh:Mumma,..Telling lies is wrong na,...I know,You dunno How to beat?,...And I'm your hero,..How will you beat me? mumma,...

Radz:Ansh,...ok,...I thought to tell you a different story today,...But,you are not closing your eyes,...So,...

Ansh gets up curiously and began,

Ansh:Mumma Story,...Wow,...What story mumma?,...

Radz:First lay down,...and close your eyes,...then only story,...

Ansh:Ok,...Mumma,...start the story na,..see,I closed my eyes,...

Radz:close it properly Ansh,...

Ansh:Hmmm,...Mumma,..now no cheating,.. I closed my eyes,...

Radz:In this story,..Hero is my Ansh,...

Ansh:Me mumma,...

Radz:Yes,...shhh!,...Now story starts,...One day, A Big saint came from a large mountain after many years to give his golden Ring to a super hero,...He searched for a super Hero in all the villages, Towns, cities, countries,...But,He couldn't find a perfect hero to give his ring,...Finally, He lost his hope and came to a village to take rest,...There, he saw some cute little boys Raju,Jaggu,Keechak,Ramu and My Ansh,...he liked all of them,...Now,The saint was confused to select an hero,...So,He decided to keep a running Race,...He announced that He will give his Precious Ring to the one who wins the race,...Now Race started,...Keechak wants that ring,..So,He pulled his other friends out of the race to win,...And My Ansh was leading,...Next to him was keechak,...Just few more steps ahead to win the race,...But,Ansh heard his friend Raju's loud scream from Back,... Tell me, what my Ansh will do now?,..

Ansh:Mumma,..Ofcourse,I will save my friend Raju first,...

Radz:But,You will lose your race na Ansh,...

Ansh:Mumma,saving my friend is more important than winning the race na mumma,...

Hearing this,Radz kissed Ansh lovingly and continued,

Radz:Ya,..Ansh saved his friend but lost his Race,...Keechak was waiting eagerly to get the Ring from the saint,...But,Here is the twist,...Saint announced Ansh as Super Hero and gave his golden Ring to Ansh,...Everyone were happy seeing my Ansh getting the ring,..Saint said that he was giving this gift to Ansh for his helping tendency ,His friendly behavior, his loveable heart.. Hearing this,Keechak also realized his mistake and asked forgiveness from his friends,...Then, all celebrated My ansh's victory,...Story ends,...

By then,Ansh was in deep sleep,..Radz smiled seeing him sleeping like a King,...Infact, he was her King right,...She slowly made him sleep on the pillow without disturbing his sleep and covered him with a comforter,...

Arjun too forgot everything for a while listening to Radz story,..It brought a hidden smile on his face seeing the mother-son lovely bond,...Radz was about to go out of the Hall leaving Ansh,...Arjun hides himself from her,...

After Radz left the hall,Arjun slowly entered in to have a glimpse of his son,...Arjun felt that watching his son sleeping peacefully like this was one of the miracle in this world he had seen so far,...Perfectly quiet,..Perfectly beautiful,...He would be forever content to watch Ansh sleeping like this,...And to be touched again and again in his life forever,...

He found The only thing, which was really worth stealing in this world is a kiss from his Ansh,...Arjun kissed Ansh's cheek affectionately,...His eyes filled with tears of Joy,...But,this sweet disturbance made Ansh to clutch Arjun's Forefinger tightly in sleep for the first time,Arjun smiled like he won this whole world... Because,He realized that he finally became a father,...Yes,He was father of a two years child,.. He got the medicine for his pain and A glue to rejoin his shattered heart,which is available right before him,...His joy has no bounds smelling his child breathe so closer,...

He was about to kiss Ansh's Little fingers tenderly,. Right then,Radz hold his wrist firmly in anger,...She released Ansh's clutch on Arjun's forefinger slowly and pulled Arjun's hand away from Ansh,...She took Ansh in her arms within a jiffy ignoring Arjun's reaction,...

Radz:Stay away from me and my Ansh,..Arjun,...

Saying so, Radz turned to move was stopped seeing Neil there,...

Neil:Arjun,...What are you doing here man?,...Papers are ready,...Just few minutes,...Sorry for talking in husky voice cox My spiderman will wake up,..I hope you don't mind,..chasni,Where are you taking him,...Give Ansh to me,..I'll take care of my spiderman,..You take rest yaar,...

Radz:Hmmm,...I want My Ansh to sleep peacefully in some safer hands Neil,...No one is protective for him than his Dad Neil Malhotra na,...

Neil:Haan yaar,..Ofcourse,...

Saying so,Neil take Ansh from Radz,..At the same time, Radz saw Arjun angrily while giving Ansh to Neil,...Neil noticed Radz changed demeanor,...But,He din give heeds to it as he was busy in holding Ansh in his Arms,...

Neil:Ok,..Arjun,..wait for another 15 minutes yaar,...We will join you,...Just few things remained incomplete,...

Saying so, Neil went to his cabin with Ansh leaving Arjun and Radhika alone in the conference hall,...

Arjun holds Radz arms tightly and began,

Arjun:Why Radhika?,...Why are you doing this?,...Ansh is my son,...

Radz smiled frowningly and began,

Radz:Really Ansh,..Your son,...Joke of the year,...I dunno Arjun...When he became your son?,...All of sudden,...You only say na that I have little brain,...So,My little brain couldn't understand,..Please explain me na,...

Arjun:Ok,..Radhika,...I accept that What I did to you is wrong,...I never wanna justify it now,...But,Now I'm not in a position to continue this game,...I let you to live your life in whatever way you want,...Instead, I want my son back,...

Radz:What?,...You want your son!!,...And you are letting me to live my life,...Seriously, I couldn't control my laugher Arjun Mehra,...

Hearing this,Arjun tightened his hold on both her arms,which hurts his wounds on the knuckles further,...As a result,Blood from his hand starts oozing out slowly,...Radhika noticed this and began,

Radz:Arjun,...Your hand is bleeding,...What happened?,...Please,leave my arms,...I can tolerate you but In hurting me,you gonna hurt yourself Arjun,...

Arjun:What difference it will make to you Radhika?,..You are hating me right,...

Radz pulled him away strongly and took the First aid box,which was hanging on the wall hurriedly,..

Seeing this,Arjun smirked and began,

Arjun:Why Radhika?Why this much concern for me?,...What Now your Hatred turns into Love all of sudden,...

Radz ignored his taunting and cleaned his wound without uttering any,...While tying Band-Aid on his knuckles,...She began,

Radz: Sometime We should keep faith in our Humanity too,...It's like an Ocean Arjun,...If a few drops of the ocean are dirty,...It doesn't mean the entire ocean will become dirty,...I know,You wont understand these and all,...But,Its my duty to try,...I will never let my worst enemy too suffer before my eyes Arjun,...Today,I tied your Band-aid,..But,The things which has to be tied properly is still untied,...I hope you understand What I mean,...So,Please concentrate on your life Arjun,...Now, our path is different,...I'm happy with my Ansh,..I Know still you din satisfied in destroying my life,..So,You want me to suffer by taking my Ansh away from me,...I warn you Mr.Arjun Mehra,..I wont tolerate you all the time if it comes to my Ansh,...

On her gosh,..Arjun din utter any till she tie his Band-aid and let her complete her speech,...Radz tried to go out of the Hall after taunting him was stopped by Arjun again,...Arjun dragged her inside angrily and locked the door,...closed the Curtains,...Radz was puzzled seeing this,...

Radz:Arjun,You know What are you doing now?,...Open the door and curtains,..,Listen me,...

Arjun turned towards Radz and began,

Arjun:What do you think Radhika?,...I will Leave my son after hearing your sweet speech and seeing your fake concern,...Never,...I'm not your Old Arjun to hear all your crap Radhika,...Why are you shivering Radhika?,...Even I din come near you na,...

Radz:Arjun,..Are you mad?,...Stop your non-sense,...Open the door first,...

Saying so,Radhika tried to open the door,...Arjun turns her around and pinned her on the wall,...He caged her in with his arms,..Radz tensely began,

Radz:Arjun,...Please,...Leave me,...Or else,...

Arjun leaned in further to increase her tension and began,

Arjun:OR else,...What Radhika?,...You gonna Kiss me,...

Radz turned her gaze away from him annoyingly and began,

Radz:Arjun,Please stop your non-sense,...Move away from me,...

Arjun: Ok,...I leave you,...Before that lets have a simple deal Radhika,...

Radz:What?

Arjun leaned in to her Ear and began in husky voice,...

Arjun:I give you two choice Radhika,...First choice,If you want me to leave you completely, Then you should give Ansh to me,...

Saying so,Arjun distanced himself from her to observe Radz reaxn,...She was extremely shocked and began,

Radz:Never,...It wont happen in your dream too,...

Arjun:Ok,...then hear your second choice too Radhika mishra sorry now,Radhika mal,...

Radz:Arjun,...Stop,...Whatever you wanna do?,..You may do?,..But, I wont give my son,...

Arjun smilingly let his forefinger to wander on Radz face starting from her forehead to frighten her and began,...

Arjun:What Radhika?,...What happened?,...My single touch is affecting you?,...Today you separated my, this finger only from ansh's hold na,...Now hear your Second choice carefully Radhika,...,If you don't wanna give Ansh to me ,Then I will come near you,...No one can stop me even your Neil Malhotra,...

Meanwhile Arjun's finger reached Radz lips,...Radz closed her eyes tightly in some unknown pain and Tears started rolling down her cheeks,...She dunno herself whether it was due to Arjun's harsh words or due to his proximity,...Arjun too felt guilty sensing two fresh drops of Radz tears on his hands,...It even strikes his stone heart,...He distanced himself from her slowly and opened the door hastily just to leave the hall at the earliest,...

Edited by jey3ram - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow ...Amazing update renu. Saint story is nice,radz is giving good values to ansh .How could he expect that radz will give ansh to him after what he did to her. Without knowing that she's not married to Neil he is doing like this but after knowing the truth he won't live her for sure n won't hesitate in doing anything to her 😉..lol.. Will be waiting for next update.



Edited by hari1403 - 9 years ago

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