SS: Dheere Dheere Se - ArDhika + NeSam ~ 2/13/16 p63 - Page 44

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jaben

lavv where is the vm . Can u give a link of that if possible. I would love to see that . plzzz if u can .





https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5HlIuu2gF78

it doesnt hav full song...other vm has ardhika offscreen segments rather pics...but i like this song n ardhika...so it works for me...


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IqxRpcGUdN8


d above has ardhika off screen segments...


this z extra...u can try if u want...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6BWy78lZk9k
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow Grace, it's really fantastic update.Really it's superb dear .That title n song is nice .U r really an amazing writer grace👏.

Starting with neil ,i think he can't sit peacefully without getting into any trouble.Poor neil he got bruise on his face ,he always ends up with some hilarious moments😆.So friends reunion after goa wedding nice accept ardhika hope they will join with them in their next meet . Asha's home remedy with butter is nice but is that true. Asha's prediction is going to be true and definitely she'll win the bet but don't know how much time it'll take for our ardhika 😉.

Coming to ardhika they r really amazing couple . Radhika's concern about arjun's health it's good to read coz we couldn't get to see that in on screen😭.Poor arjun his life is filled with loneliness . But he's feeling better now with radz caring it's nice. Arjun's jealousy n his thoughts after hearing neil n radz conversation was totally superb. And he's thinking about why didn't she choose him ,he's becoming possessive about radz it was really superb😳.After knowing the true meaning of his feelings for radz definitely he won't even let her go away from him for a second .lol.

The foursome moments of watching movie,preparing dinner,radz taking care of arjun were amazing.And arjun watching radz while she's preparing dinner was awesome n cute😳.Neil's fear was right from his prospective but he should try to know about sam's feelings regarding him in her life .Hope he'll do that soon.Wow neil n sam left ardhika alone with eachothers company.So they r alone in house for whole day wow i wonder what more things r going to happen with them in comping chapters .N last part arjun warning neil n neil saying she's all ur's it was really superb.I think she left because she don't want another awkward moment between both of them.

You r feeling something is lacking in this update but it was really amazing , i wonder how it could be when u r satisfied with ur update then it'll be a treat for us .Thanks for the update grace...Waiting eagerly for next chapter😊.
Edited by hari1403 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update . You are a remarkable story teller Grace dear !!!!!! Keep up the gud work . Stay Blessed Always . 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lavv


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5HlIuu2gF78

it doesnt hav full song n all...

another vm has thier off screen segments rather than pics...but still i like this song...so it works for me...


Thank u so much.
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice one, really loved the nesam's part, but I want things to change at least in the fanfic, dont want him to be friendzoned again like in the serial
want things to get romantic between the two, subtle but just a little bit of romance would be nice
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Posted: 9 years ago
Poor Neil have so much bad luck
Love the Arjun and radhika scene
Cute
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramyagirish

Hi I heartchai.. I loved this chapter. I loved d way radhika looked after arjun.sweet of radhika... The last line arjun telling neil she isn't ur personal cook. And neils reply right ! Only urs... That was mind blowing...mi loved each every situation in this chapter. As last week ws dull this one just delighted me Thanks for such a fantastic, awesome, mind blowing chapter. Ur creation is truly beautiful...just as u r... Neil has fallen in love. Arjuns possessiveness towards radhika no matter how many ever times u c it or read it... Each time reminds of d fact y u went bac all d way to re read it again and again... Especially towards d end neils parting shot was fitting... Even for radhika arjun is special... I can't wait for d plot to unfold and y arjun chooses Nandini . As till now nandini plan Is only seen in small parts.. Till now she hasn't interfered with d young couples. Hope she stays tat way... I also liked d homely atmosphere of radhika cooking and arjun sitting and watching her cook. As romance go by I still feel it's naturally romantic but in a sweet way. Just like a newly arranged marriage couple adjusting to living together and intimacy coupled with few awkward moments.😃

Well I find it Truly special.By d way thank u for this master piece... Am expecting more and more.Can't wait for ur story to unfold... Thanks for making my week delightful with this update... Please update asap. Take care. God bless.


I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter 😃 I don't know why but I just felt it was a little lacking.

Last chapter there was a lot of setup:
  • Nandini's substitute presence at the office party (just why is she keeping an eye on things there at BirdSong?)
  • Introduction of Mala to Arjun
  • We got to see a bit of Arjun and Neil's family dynamic
  • A mention that Arjun, Radhika, Sam, and Neil have all gotten a lot closer

This chapter seemed to be a bit all over the place for me 😆

Arjun seems to have a clue that Neil may be interested in Sam
Neil seems to have picked up on the unsaid relationship between Arjun and Radhika
Sam = clueless 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Grace, don't you say this wasn't a nice chapter... Gods it was amazing... I love you so much for this... Have a bear hug from my side... The way Rads was taking care was so adorable... Arjun pretty much knows he loves Radhika 😉, doesn't he?
And Neil... Well I understand what he might be feeling... And I am afraid Sam would actually reply the same he thought... But I am sure, realisation will dawn on her soon too 😃
Till then I'll enjoy every little thing in the story (I'll do that even after that happens 😊)
So continue soon cause I am waiting 😉


Thank you for your kind words! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. I don't know why but I just didn't feel this chapter 😆

I think Arjun is sort of aware that he is becoming affected by Radhika but he's not realizing that he's in love with her. He wants to stay away but the more he tries the more he is getting pulled back in...so he's a bit angry at himself. We saw that a lot in the serial. My friend and I would make fun of him calling it the "I hate myself for loving you" syndrome 😆

We shall see what is in store for Arjun, Radhika, Sam, and Neil 😉


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Amazing chapter Grace😃

Loved the way how Radhika took care of Arjun❤️


Thank you Nonie12345! So glad you enjoyed the chapter 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lavv

thanks for d update Grace...its nice...

its nice to see d past characters + friends come back...i enjoy basket ball...read AHam also plays basket ball...wen read abt neil n basket ball..i thought nice...wen read black eye...thought ...neil n his adventure never ends...liked asha's home remedy trial on neil...z d tip true?..i didnt know...so thanks for dat...hoping it works...

asha thinking z in d r8 direction...

so d house z left to arjun only...

i liked mala's reunion vth friends...my mom n aunt also hav dat reunions...just friends vthout family...they enjoy dat 2 days a lot..it happend only 2 times though...but nice idea...



hmm...ardhika...radhika z totally taking over him...n he z letting her take care of him...i liked arjun wen he thought radhika needed to like him n all...

lol...i liked he analysing himself n scolding himself for d way d one second he thought abt radhika n neil's dialogs...i think he just needed a person to take care of him ...not only for this moment..for d rest of his life it seems...d way he was thinking emptiness even though he had routine work n all...radhika z removing dat void slowly...he knows dat...dats nice...

niel's past in d love department z making him restrain from telling sam..dats good...but who knows here sam may reciprocate his feelings...but story needed to move...so dats fine...if they take time...

liked arjun sitting in d kitchen...

liked arjun wen neil said, radhika z his personal cook...instead of saying she z his best friend too...n he can ask her watevr he wants shows...neil got d idea of ardhika...or he wanted ardhika ...neil n radhika's frindship could hav worked more in DYM...but it didnt happen...here it seems slowly happening...dats nice...

radhika not saying anything abt neil's comment...may b she z gone back to work mode.. or .its doesnt matter to her...



sam n neil r providing time n space for ardhika it seems...so looking forward to some nice moments on ardhika in d next chapter...

liked ur personal comments...i felt this update z like a filler for d coming chapter...

upto tuesday arjun z not gng to office...hmm...



forgot d title z nice...i really like dat song...i really liked d movie HTP, after DYM more n more...

dat song was really nice...n there z a vm on ardhika on n of screen moments. on dat song...its one of my fav vm n song...so thanks...



Hey lavv!

I didn't know Aham played basketball. But now I know

Ishq Bulaava is a favorite song of mine too and I really enjoyed the movie Hasee Toh Phasee. I was struggling to find another nice title to use 🤓 and finally decided on this one.

Home Remedies for bump and bruises

I was researching home remedies to treat bumps and bruises for the SS and stumbled upon this article that suggests using egg whites and chocolate.

It supposedly works based upon the comments below. A lot of mothers were using it for their children.

https://first-aid-cpr.knoji.com/how-to-treat-and-heal-a-bump-on-head/

Then someone mentioned the butter method and I did some searching and found this article. It supposedly works too.

http://ucanmedic.blogspot.com/2010/04/butter-on-bruise.html

Mala's Entry and Temporary Exit

I introduced Mala in the last chapter and then made her disappear so I could have Radhika spend time with Arjun alone in his house 😆

Every mother needs a little vacation away. Before they were mothers they were women, friends, and people without all that family responsibility.

Arjun's split personality

Arjun = "I hate myself for loving you" 😆 at least that is the way I saw him in the serial. He's hasn't totally admitted or realized the depth of his feelings yet but he recognizes the more the tries to move away the more he keeps getting drawn back to Radhika.

We are slowly seeing Arjun coming out from behind that wall he has built around himself. But there is still a lot wall to climb and more chapters to come to see how he finally makes it over.

Neil + Sam

Poor Neil he's hung up in the past and you are right we don't know what Sam is thinking. Hope to explore some more of that in the next chapter

Neil, Radhika, and Ardhika

Neil seems to have sensed this unknown relationship that Arjun and Radhika share so he's making these cheeky comments and digs. But he's just being his friendly self. Arjun's his best friend and cousin so Neil can pretty much get away with saying whatever he wants to him. And he is close enough to Radhika that he can tease her too.

As for Radhika's reaction she probably wasn't taking Neil's comment too seriously because she's still clueless to her own feelings for Arjun.


Edited by iheartChai - 9 years ago

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