ArDhika SS:~MIRROR~Ch-3'The CHILD&His COOKIE JAR'Pg24

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Ardhikian

@Ardhikian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Sina... I am so utterly awed that I can't even find the right words to express. The way you described his emotions at the end...it was so real! As if I could see him cry in front of my own eyes! And dat is wat Arjun is. A broken child. And Radhika the cookie jar that everyone wants to keep from him. M feeling so sad for him...wish d CVs concentrated more on Arjun 's emotions. But anyway...the update was beautiful! Thanks for taking out the time to write. Appreciate the efforts it must take. Lots of love 😳

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noor

@noor j

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

one of the best stories I have read in the forum.very emotional and very raw.

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RainbowPearls

@RainbowPearls

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Lovely update. Enjoy reading it :)

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love_never_dies

@love_never_dies

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Amazing one Girly.👏.

Wow, Romantic and at the same time emotional..

Loved it alot, mainly Arjun's struggle and how he don't want her to leave him.. , well written..

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#165

wow!, this is wonderful.

each chapter is just too awesome. i love each chapter title and the way you you present it. I enjoy alot reading updates of this story.

continue and update soon

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Mindblowing Chapter Sina

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Riana

@-AnnieQueen-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Awww poor Arjun...😭

I know he is a very good person

And he has a golden heart. ...

I guess it was related with his troubled past...

And I guess Nandu had something to do with that...😕

Hope that Radhika will be able to ease his pains...

Her love has that power😳

Thanks for updating!!!

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ArthunaAlive

@ArthunaAlive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Hi Sina . You have a way with words . You not only create a sensual enchantment but you also add a new dimension of subtle pain and buried memories making your reader eagerly wait for the story to unfold . BRAVO my Dear GAL !!!!!!!!!