FF:'Jazba' chappy 2 updated on page 5 - Page 3

Nice start dear. Thanks for the pm

@Sharab:Nahi yaar..story ki character we Jo multi hain.achcha,bol,kiski pic dalu?BT plz choose a stylish 1,matching the character,OK,baba?_⭐️😆

Wowie..darling I love ur title btw.. jazbaaa!! And yes, I got to go now but reserving this post.. will read the chappy and update!! I am a huge Deepz fan too.. BTW I got touch of YJHD in the few lines I read ❤️ Update soonish.. will read and come bck soon 😉

Originally posted by: _A-Hopeful-Ray_

@Sharab:Nahi yaar..story ki character we Jo multi hain.achcha,bol,kiski pic dalu?BT plz choose a stylish 1,matching the character,OK,baba?_⭐️😆

@Niru:Thanxx a loot.Same chappy ki liue u commented 2 tymes.4 DAT thang khao itna Sara😃

na thak..otai..

Loved it...continue soon 😊

@captain:thnx a loot.waiting 4 ur comment. N yap,yjhd wali touch toh I brought coz I luuuv yjhd😳

Originally posted by: love_never_dies

Nice chapter..

Bhaaijan part and Ardhika scenes were too good.. Ty for the PM 😳

Guys,don't take me wrong bt I wanna express something. Actually, If I had written this FF changing the couples in NAUC forum would get at least 25 readers wd so long,funny,inspiring comments n If in KY2 forum, would get at least 20 readers n though not so long bt inspiring n criticism wala comments.(Don't bash plz, I jst xpressd😳)

Bt unfortunately here I hav so few readers n only some comments. Phir bhi I will update 4 my readers n my Yaars here. N also 4 myself(As thus I can b active here widin my busy schedule)😆

So here goes the 2nd update. Hop u will lyk it n do comment wht u really felt. 😃

... Chappy 2 ...



Ranbir taking sigh of relief still holding Deepika's hand. Bt Deepika feeling uncomfortable.

Ranbir:Tu ne toh bacha liya yaar,Thanx a looot.

N he hugged her.

Deepika:Yeh aap kar kya rahi hain. Chodiye hume.

Ranbir(surprised):What? Aap, hum n all. Tu chese kya hain? Main toh baas thanx kah raha tha. Teri dress dekhkar toh lagta hain hain ki kisi choti sheher se hain.

Deepika;Nahi,main bachpan se Mumbai mein hi rehti hoon. N if I wear Anarkali toh it should b a prob 2 u. M jst comfortable in it. Bt aise hugs-wags mujhe pasand nahi.

Ranbir:Achcha achcha,ab samajh mein aaya. Tu Varun ki behen hain na? His Choti?

Sam's voice frm behind:Haan,yeh toh vahi hain par tu kaha tha?

Ranbir:Arey,tu yahaan?

Sam:Toh train se bahar jayyon kya? Dekh mujhe yeh novel abhi khatm karni hain. Aur tu meri tym barwaad kar raha hain? Uu knw,main kitni pareshaan thi. Mera chocolate laya hain?

Ranbir:Baas meri maa,chup kar. Kitna bakbak karti hian. Kaun kahega ki tu padhatu nerd hain?

Sam:Dekh main Nerd nahi hoon. Tu yeh bataa ki tha kaha u n meri chocolate?

Ranbir:Haan teri chocolate latee latee I was going 2 miss the train. Achcha,chal andar tujhe bataa ta hoon kya hua?

Sam:Haan,ok. (She saw Deeepika standing still there) Arey,tum bhi chalona. Yehi rehne ka iraada hain kya?

Ranbir:Haan chal. Don't worry I won't touch u. I knw u don't lyk not only hugs bt also waags.

He was laughing at her n she went frm their angrily. Bt Sam remembered something.

*Flashback*

Sam was driving her scooty whn she saw a guy searching 4 a lift almos near the college. She saw the batch of their college in his wearing. So she stopped.

Sam:U need lift? C3 ki student ho na?

Guy:Oh thans a lot yaar. Yap i need help. Meri bike kharab ho gaya. Searching 4 a lift. JN yeah,C3 ka student.

Sam:Ok,come , b seatd. Me 2 student there.

Guy:Thanxxx. Bt back seat?

Sam:Any problem?

Guy:NO,ok.

N he seated there.

Guy:BTW,m Neil, Neil Kappor.

Sam:Oh hi!M Sam.

N they were going lyk dat. Bt Sam's mind always hav a connecion wid studies. N she was remembering her lessons. N suddenly a bus came in front of them. Sam was absent-minded n so Neil screamed, somehow escaped the accident putting his hand over Sam's hands.N thn they stood up,breathing hard.

Neil(almost shouting):Aise scooty chalati ho?Khud bhi marti n mujhe bhi.

Sam(Started crying);Par tumne meri haato par haat kyon raha?

Neil:What?Ek toh maine tumhe bachaya aur tum ho ki. Shame on girls lyk u.

Flashback ends as Ranbir starts calling her.

Ranbir;Oh meri maa,kaha maar gayi? Tu toh novel finish karne wali thi na?

Sam(controlling herslf):Nothing yaar. N haan, kitni maar bolu, m not ur maa. Apni maa ko itna miss karta hain? Mamma's boy.

Ranbir(being concerned):tu thik toh hain na?

Sam:Haan..

They saw Arjun going frm there. N his face filld wid bandages.

Ranbir:Arjun ko hua kya hain?

Neil's voice:Oh toh Mr.Kapoor stills thinks abt his x-friends.

Sam:Neil plz, haar baat pe aise interfere karna zarrori hain? Vaise bhi tumhe kya pata dosti aur pyaar the matlab?

Neil:Listen...

Tanu holds him frm behind.

Tanu:Hey baby, why r u talking wid her. Mujhe bhul gaye kya?

Sam was feeling jealous n all others including Neil feeling irritated.

Neil:No baby,jst coming wid u. PAr yeh college ki train hain na. TOh sabki samne aise romance karne ki zaroorat thodi hi na hain. Romance toh bandh kamre mein hoti hian na.

Tanu:Awww... I will start blushing.

Sam tried hard 2 concentrate on her novel bt in vain.

Suddenly Radhika comes there.

Radhika:chhi.. U guys r so Chippos...

Neil:Kya bola tune? Chippo? We r not chips.

Radhika:It means Cheap, jo tum jaise kawaanro ko samajh nein nahi aayega?

Neil(laughinng):Kya kawarron ko? Madam, u r ri8 main kawaaran hoon n yeah gawaar nahi.

Radhika;OH jst shut up.

Tanu:Plz u shu up. Don't interfere. He is the hottest boy n m the hottest girl in college.

Radhika:Oh really? U n hot?

Tanu:Wht do u mean?

They started fighting more n it resulted in slaps n hits. Neil,Arjun,Ranbir,Varun n some more tried hard 2 stop thm n finally they were successful.

Neil:Ok guys ho gaya?

Radhika suddenly slapped Neil in frustration. All were shocked. Bt Arjun was burning in anger.

Arjun(pov):Issey toh sabak sikhana hi padega...

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So,guys,this was it. Sry 4 no ArDhika. Bt will bring more of thm in the nxt chappy. This chappy needed NeSam. Sharab,khush hain na? Teri n Neilu ki chemistry dekhke...😆 N Jerry sabar khatam hua? 😆 N yeah,It has YJHD wali feelings since I luvvv YJHD 😳

Luv u my readers n Buddies 🤗

4giv me 4 typos n mistakes 😆

sorry can't read now... will read later... huge personal problem.